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When she saw the fire for the first time, burning brightly, just a little further away from her, she didn't recognize it. Didn't understand what it was, what it was supposed to do, because she had never seen it before. But she was entranced, by the golden flames that leaped in may different directions, and it was bewitching.

She moved closer, and noticed the red highlights in the leaping flames. They intrigued her, fascinated her. And she felt a little warmer when she went even closer.

She'd always been cold...so cold. And now, she felt as though something was awakening within her, something which made her wonder what exactly the beautiful thing was. Perhaps it could help her, as impossible as it sounded, because it was so much more special that she could ever hope to be. Wild, free, unrestrained...beautiful.

She was right in front of it now, watching as it almost beckoned her with the many fingers it had. Should she touch it? Perhaps it would make her warmer still. She was tired of being cold.

She reached out hesitantly, and then- she cried out in pain, staring at the burn on her fingers. What had it done to her? What she had touched was no benevolent plaything that wanted to warm her. It was something dangerous, something cruel.

But she still stared at it, unable to tear herself away. It seemed to be beckoning to her again. Had it made a mistake, perhaps? Maybe it was trying to apologise. Surely something that called out to her so much wouldn't be deliberately harmful. She ought to try again.

She reached out, again, and this time she almost screamed, tears falling down her eyes as she stared at the burnt flesh. It hurt more than it had the first time, because this time she had expected it to be nice to her.
"Why are you doing this?" she said softly. "I didn't do anything to you."

The flames crackled away, jumping and falling, without giving any sign that it could hear her. But still, she stared at it in morbid fascination. Hesitantly, she held out her hand again to it, begging it not to hurt her. When it burnt again, she didn't scream. Tears fell from her eyes, but she never said anything more it, as she cradled her burnt hand, pushing it to her chest.

And she realized that the longer time she spent staring at the beautiful - dangerous- thing, she would lose her resolve and touch it again, and it would hurt. It would always hurt, and there would be no answer, no explanations given.

So she moved away. She moved away, back to her cold corner. She missed the warmth and she missed the fire, but she didn't want to go back there. It just wasn't worth it, trusting something that had burnt her even after she had begged it not to. And she didn't want that burn again.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: navk

so heart touching



Thank you so much for reading and commenting! It's the first time I posted something here.
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Beautiful piece of writing😳
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Originally posted by: -purpleorchids-

Beautiful piece of writing😳


Thank you so much! Means a lot to me 😳😳
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Truly amazing!

P.s. my 1100th lpost goes fr u! :)
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Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA

Truly amazing!

P.s. my 1100th lpost goes fr u! :)



Thank you so much!😳😳
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How symbolic and ironic. Enjoyed reading it.
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Oh my! This was beautiful and so symbolic!
I really, really liked this! :)
Do write more.

~Maya

P.S. : Your name? You've commented on my works so often and yet I don't know your name. :O
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Originally posted by: nikki.171

How symbolic and ironic. Enjoyed reading it.


Thank you so much😳Glad you enjoyed😳
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Originally posted by: .Rhapsody.

Oh my! This was beautiful and so symbolic!

I really, really liked this! :)
Do write more.

~Maya

P.S. : Your name? You've commented on my works so often and yet I don't know your name. :O


Wow, that's an honour😳Yeah, it was symbolic. I'll definitely try to post more.

As for myself...Hi Maya, my name's Shreya😃

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