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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uhm, I don't know?
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Mesmerized


The stars twinkle in her midnight eyes;

The eyes that look beyond all his lies;

That ignore the bad and consider only the nice;

Those eyes, they leave him mesmerized.


Her smile as warm as summer sunshine;

Bestowed so unexpectedly, it takes him by surprise;

The incandescence of which makes him feel energized;

That smile, it leaves him mesmerized.


Her voice like a tinkling windchime;

An epiphany to make him realize;

His worth, and his impact on her life;

Her voice, it leaves him mesmerized.


Her hand on his shoulder is a pressure fine;

The comfort of her embrace makes him lose all time;

Her kisses are such he could only fantasize;

The whole of her, she has him mesmerized.


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Methinks I suck at poetry. *sighs*

Written on an impulse.

Terrible, I know. But the criticism would be appreciated.


Thank you for reading!


*


~Maya


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