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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey friends ,
here i present u one more poem , of course written by ur moni 😆😆 , so u have 2 read it , no other option 😛😛 . and pls comment as well 4 me n my writing 😳😳 (AND YA MAY BE I WILL WRITE A TAAREY OS ON IT {MAY BE}😉 , DONT KNOW WHEN 🤣 , NO TIME U SEE , 😆😆 N MOREOVER SO MANY PENDING STORIES , SO KEEP WAITING 😛😛 SORRY 2 MAKE U WAIT BUT I REALLY CANT HELP IT , U ALL KNOW MY HEALTH NA 😭 )

a poem ~~PYAAR HAI ~~ (in hindi )

kuch rishte aise hote hain ,
jo tootkar bhi kabhi toot te nahi .
kuch log aise hote hain ,
jo door hokar bhi door hote nahi ,

vo rishte pyaar ke khoobsurat rishte hote hain ,
aur vo insaan hamein bahut he pyaare hote hain

kuch aise andekhe anjaane dilon ke rishte hote hain ,
jo do dilon ko pyaar ki atoot dor se jodte hain ,

pyaar ki khushboo se dilon ko mehkate hain ,
pyaar ki goonj se dilon ko dhadkate hain ,
pyaar ki mishri se dilon main ghul jaate hain ,

(hmmm aahahaha oo ho ho ho ho )

jab kisi ke liye duayein apne aap hotho(lips) pe aane lagein,
dil ki khamoshiyon main aawaz kisi ki goonjne lage,
dil ki dhadkano main dard sang ishq bhi dhadakne lage ,
koi ajnabee ehsaas hamein sukoon dene lage ,
to samjh lo , 😉
pyaar main hum deewane hone lage 😳😳

jab kisi ki khushiyan , zindagi hamari banne lage ,
kisi ka pyaar hamare jeene ki vajah banne lage,
tab samjh lo ,
pyaar main hum deewane hone lage 😉

kaisa ye pyaar ka deewanapan hai ,
dard usko (beloved ) hota hai ,
par uska ehsaas mujhe main rota hai ,

haa uski saanse , uski dhadkan aur .. vo he to
mera wajood banne laga hai ,
uski khushiyon ke liye ,
kuch bhi kar jaane ko mann karne laga hai ,
kaisa , haa kaise ye pyaar ka deewanapan hai ,
khud ki ab na koi khabar hai

HAA PYAAR HAI , PYAAR HAI , PYAAR HAI ,
BE-INTEHAAN , BEPANAH , SACHA PYAAR HAI ...
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OK OK END OF MY POETRY , I KNOW U ALL MUST BE FEELING SUPERBORED BUT PLS DO LIKE AS WELL AS COMMENT FROM HEART BEFORE GOING , IF U WANT 2 READ MY WRITING MORE 😛



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yaahh... I'm the first one to comment!!!! Coming back to your poem... it was nice and you explained the meaning of love wonderfully. Hats off to you for writing this poem.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CharMarfan1

Yaahh... I'm the first one to comment!!!! Coming back to your poem... it was nice and you explained the meaning of love wonderfully. Hats off to you for writing this poem.


Thank u so so so so much my sweet cute dear buddy ,
🤗 it really means a lot 2 me , 😊😊
dil se thank u 😳😳
😊😊 i m so glad that u like my poem 😊😊
Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow ... really amazing ... m in luv wid ol ur poems... really well written... thnx a lot for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hirudawda

Wow ... really amazing ... m in luv wid ol ur poems... really well written... thnx a lot for pm...


😛 omg 😲 , really u love my poems ??? 😛
thats was quite unexpected , 😆
i m so glad 2 know that u love my poems 😃
it really means a lot 2 me 😳
dil se thank u so much my sweetu buddy 😳😳
Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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bahut hi khubsoorat likha hai, pyaar ke baare main
jo bhi kaha vo sach hai. u write very superb.

isseliya shayad hum aaj bhi taarey ko unke pyaar ko
dekhne ki liye taras rahe hai.

please update ur all ff/ss, especially Hum mar jayangee,
it touch my heart. i like that very much, padte waqt ek alag
ehsas hota hai aur usme main dub jati ho, bahut hi
emotional aur romantic he vo, please jaldi upate karo.

This poem is very well written, each line clearly mentions
the true meaning of love.

thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow what a poem
I loved it .. u described the
Meaning of beautifully
Amazingly written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really amazing poetry
u define love perfectly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow didu!! Its an amazing poem!
I loved every bit of it!
It defines love so beautifully and perfectly...

PS. I hope yeh apne adhi raat ko nahi lihka 😡

Love u a lot!! Muaah muaah muaah!! 🤗 huggs!
Tc. Hope ur health improves! All the best for studiez :)

~Your's ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow dii
amazing i'm in ove with ur writing skill
plz keep writing n plz PM me as well...
love u dii
aap ki crazy se behen
❤️ Surabhi ❤️

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