One Shot - Without You - Page 3

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Look who's here...
Me..

Initially I was like.. Ab ispe kaunsa bhoot chad gaya?
Then I looked at the Non-Fan-Fiction part.. That made me like.. Fine... A refreshment.. hehehe😆

So its the story of friends... Oh thats really true... when we are away from friends.. we just cant bare the pain.. We miss them so much that its something that cannot expressed... I know 😭

The way a friend can soothe you.. with just their mere presence.. is known to you.. when you are apart... Absolutely. can't agree more😃

These feeling and emotions were well described by you.. thank you😳

I never knew you were this mature... Hatts off to you Adi... Tune mujhe mere friends ki yaad dila di... Roola diya na mujhe.. What sould I consider it as?😳

Originally posted by: ShonaSparkzz

This beautiful dear Thank you😳

Your work with your own characters has elevated the level of your writing skills I know, it did wonders😆

congratulations👏

You described their bond of friendship beautifully You know why, don't you?

I liked Nikhil's pov concerning his parents

how he cared for them from the bottom of his heart but would refuse to accept because of his male ego and the pain it brought to him

But it was the consequence of their doing

Neglecting the care he tried to show

not being for him when he needed them

it was obvious

there is so much that a person can take and he had enough of it I know, even I felt pity for him.

And how shreya's had been his strength and broken the cocoon he created around himself

was heart touching Bas voh sab hogaya, kaise even I don't know.😆

Hoping to read more original stories ...😊

proud of u my mishti mirchi ( bengali style meh 😉😆)

Originally posted by: kreya204

Beautiful!! U r great at writing!! If dis was ur early creation den i wud love to read ur works wholeheartedly!! Thats a huge compliment

D way u've portrayed d emotions is just so good! Thanks😊
D guy is suffering from complex! His parents dnt understand him! He finds light in d tunnel in his friend! His life changes! Rather his way to look at things changes! N wid his friend's presence,for good!
Nw he is an extrovert!, d friend of ol! Helping hand for 1 n ol, bt deep down he misses d one who made him who he actually is!!

I think u n ur frnd share a grt deep bond which is reflected in d os! Definitely. Its the only thing that keeps me going😆

May ur frndshp last forever!! Ahhh! May all your wishes come true🤗

As i said i wud love to read ur further works so plz pm me wen u update!!
N ya! It was a treat reading dis1! Do continue writing such stuff!

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Aditi! :O

OHMYGOD!

You write? Yes I do🤣

RES!

UNRES!

Again, thanks for blackmailing me 😛 Ah! Anytime😆

I love the concept of this OS.

No love, just plain friendship <3 Mere se bas yeh hi expect karna. Love isn't my cup of tea exactly.

First of all, I like this guy. He's kinda similar. I'm an extrovert, yet I love spending time in the library. Tu sample piece haina isiliye😆

The way you've written their story is really nice and also easy to relate too.

And yes, I can lie like her too 😆 Voh to even I can do. Whats the big deal🤣

How you've incorporated his relationship with his parents is really good too.

Great stuff <33 thank you. Ask you SB and my beti to unres 🤣

This is ur 2nd OS I read and again I was so deeply immersed in it.. Its so real and relatable 😳
Do give me links to ur other works too 😃
I loved reading something aftr such a long time..

Originally posted by: neha_bbsr2005

This is ur 2nd OS I read and again I was so deeply immersed in it.. Its so real and relatable 😳 if you like these kinds of works the surely you'll like my new drabble series I am planning to start in few days.
Do give me links to ur other works too 😃 Sure, few days till i open my gallery, will straight away give you link to that.😳
I loved reading something aftr such a long time.. Awww. thats so sweet.😳

Wowww, this is so beautiful <3

I dunno the characters but I enjoyed this so much. The emotions, your style of writing yaaar *Claps*

Superbly written and described. I could see the parts like in motion in my mind

This is awesomeee. All the feelings...what he is going through, it is perfectly described.

P.S. Organic chemistry is my least favourite part of chemistry.

Res

Originally posted by: Liashna

Wowww, this is so beautiful <3

I dunno the characters but I enjoyed this so much. The emotions, your style of writing yaaar *Claps*

Superbly written and described. I could see the parts like in motion in my mind