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Posted: 12 years ago
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Feelings Of A Girl Being Used...

Maa mujhe darr lagta hai bohot darr lagta hai

Sooraj ki roshni aag se lagti hai

Paani ki boondhein tezaabh si lagti hai

Maa hawa mein bhi zehar sa ghulaa lagta hai

Maan meraa sirf iss duniya se duur jaane ka karta hai

Nahi chaati aana iss roshni mein

Nahi chahti kuch khana peena...

Maa chupa le mujhe kahii...mujhe iss duniya se bohot darr lagta haii..


Maa yaad hai who mitii ki gudiyaa

Jo bachpan mein tooti thii..

Main yaad hai who khelonee..

Jo bachpan bhi khoyee thee

Ajj mera dil bhi kuch ussi tarah tutaa haii

Aaj mera man bhi kuch usii tarah khoyaa hai

Maa chupa le mujhe kahii...mujhe iss duniya se bohot darr lagta haii...


Maa bachpan mein school teacher ki nazroon se darr lagta tha

Uss pados ke chacha se darr lagta tha

Uss nuked ke ladkon ki baton se darr lagta tha

Unn raah chal musafiroh ki nazroon se darr lagta thaa...

Abh is duniyaa se darr lagta haii

Bahar jaane se daar lagta haii

Maa chupa le mujhee kahi..mujhe iss duniya se darr lagta haii..


Maa yaa hai tujhe angaan mein chidiyaa si fudaktii thii

Har samay hasti main rehti thii

Tune mujhe phoolon sa palaa tha

Aakhir maine unn darindo ka kya bigada tha??

Kyun wohh iss tarah mujhe kuchal kar chale gayee

Kyun who bedard meri rohh ko machal kar chalee gayee

Maa chupa le mujhe kahii..mujhe iss duniya se darr lagta haii...


Maa tu kehti thi apni gudiyaa ko dulhan sii sajayegii

Apni iss gudiyaa ke jeevan ko khushiyoo se sajayegii

Maa kya who din abh zindagi phir kahi nahi layegii??

Kya tere ghar phir kabhi baraat nahi aayegii??

Maa khoya hai jo maine kya phir kabhi na paungii??

Maa saans toh le rahi hoon..par kya phir kabhi jee paungii??

Maa chupa ke mujhe kahii..mujhe iss duniya se darr lagta haii

Haan iss duniyaa se darr lagta hai..

Darr lagta hai...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was truly very heart touching
just loved it !

thanku so much for d pm...
no words to express ur work ...!!!

i m spellbound , speechless ! .. i m in a gr8 musing!
it just touched my heart!

my eyes filled up while reading this !
being a girl myself ... it touched me to my soul .. it touched my so deep!!! :)
Edited by arshi.zoha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing...each nd every words r heart touching...
thnxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
amazing
no words...
heart touching
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
the feelings expressed in words perfectly
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
awesome
heart touching
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
AMAZING
AWESUMM
MINDBLOWING
FAB 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
awsm heart touching nd mindblwng...no words fr u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
awesome👏
heart touching
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res , will unres when i m in good mood
unres --
⭐️
gudiya , i cant tell u , how much i loved this poem of urs ...
u know when i read it first time na , then i was on d verge of crying 😭😭
I WAS SO TOUCHED 😭😭😭
so so so so so well written , so heart touching n beautiful d poem is ..
but its describing d real situation and condition of d woman so well ..
its so true , we r not at all safe these days 😭
😭😭😭 this line is so damn touching n breaking

Maa mujhe darr lagta hai bohot darr lagta hai

😭 and these questions every raped girls' heart wanna ask

Kya tere ghar phir kabhi baraat nahi aayegii??

Maa khoya hai jo maine kya phir kabhi na paungii??

Maa saans toh le rahi hoon..par kya phir kabhi jee paungii??

Maa chupa ke mujhe kahii..mujhe iss duniya se darr lagta haii

Haan iss duniyaa se darr lagta hai..

Darr lagta hai..."


but gudiya u ,described those feelings , that worse pain , that hurt , that fear , so so so beautifully 😭😭that i could actually feel that pain , that fear , 😭😭😭
⭐️love u loads n loads 4 writing this outstanding poem 👏👏
🤗keep writing more n more ... !!👍🏼

Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago

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