OS - The Touch Of Fear( Shreya) - Page 5

Originally posted by: sharonfernandes

awesome update
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: nidaTaarey

Superb

Originally posted by: d3fannm1

omg

i was so scerd

i was thinking to skip some parts but then i thought not to

my eyes were wide

thank you

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997

it was awesome

Originally posted by: mymy_taarey

Wow! That was amazing! I seriously got chills! You wrote it really well!

Originally posted by: Mon_tr

Awesome

Originally posted by: -3raser-

OMG! Where's my monkeys?!
Ah here it is!

😆
Okay so...OH MY GGGOOODDD!!!!!

This was amazing! Get a boost of confidence girl because even I can't write something like this!

Oh my god! Thank you so much for even saying that, di! Gosh! 😳
I hate horror movies and books and everything but this was something else...the fear that the character feels gave me goosebumps! Like for real...are you 14?

Going to turn 15 in about 20 days.. Does that count as being 14? 🤢 😆

You're a bloody genius!

Oh gosh, di! Stop it already! I can't stop smiling and blushing! 😳

The last part when the guy whispers into her ears..gosh I was freaked!

That was my fav. part! 😳

I am definitely going to remember this OS for sure and why not? You did full justice to the theme of fear by instilling it in your characters and in the readers as well! I just admire you so much after this!

Thank you so so so so so so so so so so much, di! Gosh! This was such a boost for me, di! Thank you so very much! 🤗
BOW DOWN!

😳

Originally posted by: swatisingh2

i am sure har kisi ko yahan par aadat ho gayi hai khud ko underestimate karne..!!

shreya i will kill you..!!

why did u deleted.??/

this is damn good..

superb..excellent..

n u deletd it very bad..

thanks ayesha fr posting it..

this is really good..

horror is depicted wonderfully through a good command on words..!!

luved it..!!

ur all pieces r good..!!

u shoudn't have deleted it :/

katti..!!

love,

swati..

Originally posted by: -3raser-

Shreya...looking at your reaction I really want to just laugh at you and tease you right now
and even go around town saying "I told you so" but seeing your mood just want to say be happy and enjoy the reaction of the audience sweety...here...take a bit of flowers to cheer you up

Originally posted by: velvetrose

wow that was really awesome