OS - The Touch Of Fear( Shreya)

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velvetrose

@velvetrose

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

wow that was really awesome

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khyati( the pagal )

@khyati2000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

OMG its just awesome
just loved it a lot...
shreya, could you continue this os please...
its amazing

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

this was really scary...

tfs ayeshu for sharing it...

shreyaa it was so nice

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Manahil

@...Mallu...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Awesome
Nice post ..

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Aditi

@taarey-forever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

awesum OS .. ! 👏

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tareyfan

@tareyfan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wow yaar too gud !! y did u remove it ??

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Fatima Faiq

@-Fam_TaaReY-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Super awesome OS 👏

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Soumya

@.-Soumya-.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

SUPERB DI

AUR AAP ISSE BURA BOL RHI HO..NOT FAIR😡

IT WAS SCARY..

THE WAY U DESCRIBED THE FEELINGS WAS AWSUM..👏

THANX FOR PM AYESHA DI

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Sreeja Nair

@sreeja_rox

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Firstly so so sorru for being this late(gosh i am a latelateef now ain't i??😳)

Secondly why the hell did you remove this piece of work??????It was so well written...

You made me think that it was me who was suffering all those thing's.Imagining myself in such a situation scared the hell out of me...For me the main highlight of the part was when the girl thought that everything had become silent and then suddenly she again heard the voice "Thought I would leave you, love?"

Ha how i loved that particluar part...!!!!! Awesome os Shreya... and now tell me one thing...how on earth can you write so well at such a young age????? *I am jealous*

Edited by sreeja_rox - 12 years ago