OS - The Touch Of Fear( Shreya) - Page 4

Originally posted by: shanya8

Res/unres

Wow... di u wrote so well n u saying it's not good...
It's very awesome...!!!
Hw dare u say dat it's bad...
I really loved it dare u say bad 2 it...
Oh it was just so best...!!!
Hw can u say dat huh never say so..
N plz keep updateing os lk dis

Thank you so much, 🤗 😳

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

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Shreya 😲

why the hell did u remove that os 😡

it was a very well written piece 😃

please keep writing more 😃

n dont remove them for god's sake 😡

thanks Ayesha for posting this nahi toh I would have not been able to read this awesome thing only😳

Umm.. 😳
And thank you so much for the comment. Really! 🤗

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Omg!!! Shreya this is amazing, I love the way u wrote this OS
It's very spooky, I love it
Plz keep writing such mind blowing work

Thank you so very much, di! I am so glad you liked it! 😳 🤗

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

Awesome

Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Hmm ... Why? Tum bahhut bahut bahhhuuut awesome writer ho Shreya ! One of the best I know for sure
And the OS, Yaar scary is the word for it ...
Your build up for the whole story was superbly done !!!!!
Spooky !
And Ending ne aur dara diya !

Oh gosh! Thank you so so so much, Neha! 🤗 😳

Originally posted by: shweta.taarey

its so well written shreya...why were u nervous?

earlier when u sent d pm and i checked, u had removed the post!! 😕

i was so confused in d beginning but this is awesome...gave me goosebumps till d end!! 🤢

u are a gifted writer...👏

Thank you so much, Shweta! 🤗 Seriously re.. :* 😳

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Shreyu!!!! This OS is Brilliant.. I mean it.. Brilliant Piece of work..

Trust me..

You should not be nervous, dear...

You are a blessed writer..

I really very Talented one..

I have told it to you many times..

I Loved this a LOT..

Honestly, i was so scared..

And as i told you..

I was just staring at the screen blankly for sometime..

And the Last part of this OS...

OMG!! I just cant tell you how much that part scared me...

Those screams...

And that SOMEONE speaking in her ear..

the most scariest part...

Keep writing more and more of such stuff..

It really was written beautifully..

Thank you so so so so so much di! 🤗
Though I was really angry at you for posting it inspite me telling you not to... But now I would just say thank you so much! :* 🤗

Originally posted by: Angel-luvs-s

Thank ayesha.. shreya yaar be confident.. I post ALL my crap even though I know it's bad..anyways I loved this

Thank you so much, Angel. 🤗
And hey! Your works aren't crap and bad! 😡

Originally posted by: -upama-

I loved it shreyu :D

Nice work as alwayz!!

Thanks re, Namkili! 🤗

Originally posted by: Rupita

It was nice...keep writing like dis it will improve ur writing n help to increase ur confidence

I'll do that. Thank you. 😳