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so guys, this is a play... i am sure most have heard of it. its called the phantom of the opera. its a beautiful tale of love and tragedy but unfortunately not many know about it...the arts are worth saving and i am doing every bit i can to save literature. so i want to deliver it to some as simple as possible and i hope i can reain its beauty and quality..happy reading guys...pass this on if you can. and most importatly this is considerably paraphrased and altered so no copyright issues here. this will be cu into 5-6 parts..hope you like it.

The phantom of the opera

Will I ever get used to it? The bright lights , the countless people staring down at me...well not exactly at me'I am just a backup dancer. Someday my dreams will come true. I just have to wait, and wait I will.

"Get back to work Christine!"

Oh my! I must have been day dreaming again. This always happens. Everyone dislikes me for reasons unknown to me. Mother says it's because they are jealous. I know better than to trust mother for fair judgment. I heard Elisa a fellow dancer, once say that I was of mediocre dancing talent and not worthy to be part of the great Paris opera house. Apparently I am only here since my mother, Madame giry , is held at high authority here. And me, well I started to believe her. It's true I am an average dancer but I can do something that no other dancer can do. I can sing.

It all started when I was a young girl. My father used to tell me stories of the angel of music. An angel who has the most beautiful voice a man could ever possess. It is said he descends from heaven to train the most talented singer on earth. For years now, I have been striving to be that girl all because I hear his voice in my head at night when I sleep. I know that it is stupid but it gives me a drive. Besides , my best friend meg tells me I sing like an angel, though I have never been stupid enough to ask if I was worthy enough for the angel of music. That right was only reserved for Raoul.my childhood friend. He left as soon as he came. When I shared with him my stupid thoughts though I know he found it silly he would simply smile at me. i still remember what he said to me once.

"Christine'if ever there was such a thing as the angel of music, you would be the first person he would train..."

At this point I was simply mindlessly dancing along to the routine that we have done a million times before as I looked on with a little envy as the female lead singer, Monique, sang till she split her throat. If you asked me I would say she was overdoing it though people seem to like her.

"Thump'" the backboard dropped from the high ceiling right next to the male lead Rodrigues.

Suddenly her singing was turned into ear splitting shrieks of fear. She wasn't the only one screaming. Panic literally spread like wild fire. But we all knew who it was. It was the phantom of the opera, the ghost which was haunting his opera house since its opening. These hauntings occurs many times in the few months I worked here yet I wonder why the reactions are still the same.

"Calm down everyone ...Calm down...especially you Monique, you are going to tear your throat, then how will you perform?"

The manager was obviously trying to calm everyone down.

Monique looked at him with pure contempt.

"PERFORM? You still want me to perform in this death trap? I almost died!"

"Well technically, I almost died."

"Nobody asked you Rodrigues"

I know this is supposed to be a serious situation but I can't help but stifle a giggle.

"That's it'I quit!"

With one final look she left the stage leaving everyone in shock.

"She just left! She can't just leave"

"Apparently she can and she did."

As my mother started talking a hush ran over the cast. No matter how much the manager tried , he couldn't garner the same effect my mother did.


"that's all fine Madame giry but does she at least have an understudy(replacement)? We have a show tonight!"

"Well sir, maybe if you visited the sets enough you would know that this play is new and we don't have an understudy."

I am not really show how the rest of the conversation went on'all I knew is that in a split second everything changed as Meg started speaking.

"Christine is an amazing singer'she even knows the show well enough."

I just stared at her in pure and utter shock. My mother seemed shocked too, after all , I never told her I can sing. I could hear the careless whispers and snorts of laughter spread across the crowd.my heart pounded as I saw the questioning look on the manger's face.

"Show us what you got Christine."

I just stood rooted to the ground until meg gave me a not-so-friendly nudge. I could feel their stares burn me. I started off softly.

Think of me, think of me fondly
When we've said goodbye

By now my voice gained momentum as it floated across the room. The disapproving stares turned into admiration as I continued on.

Remember me once in a while
Please promise me, you'll try

Then you'll find that once again you long
To take your heart back and be free
If you'll ever find a moment
Spare a thought for me

Scene shifts to the theatre with a big audience

We never said our love was evergreen
Or as unchanging as the sea
But if you can still remember
Stop and think of me

Think of all the things
We've shared and seen
Don't think about the way
Things might have been

Think of me, think of me waking
Silent and resigned
Imagine me trying too hard
To put you from my mind

Recall those days, look back on all those times
Think of those things we'll never do
There will never be a day
When I won't think of you

From the audience a young handsome man stands up and starts singing.

Can it be? Can it be Christine?
Bravo

Long ago, it seems so long ago
How young and innocent we were
She may not remember me
But I remember her

Christine continues singing

Flowers fade, the fruits of summer fade
They have their seasons, so do we
But please promise me that sometimes
You will think of me


As I finish singing a breath of relief escapes me. This is what dreams feel like. It's beautiful. I stare far ahead as there is a standing ovation being offered to me. I beam in pure bliss wishing that the angel of music was there to see me and as I learnt that night, I should be careful what I wish for'

think of me:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXDonUxBxig

precap: ~is that you raoul? ~
&
~your father sent me...i am the angel of music~

done..the next part is where it really gets interesting.tune in guys and rememer the arts are worth saving...even if you write, sing, dance or draw protect it from extinction.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res/unresing... time..!!
Well actually... just wanna say it's lk dream coming true... well does it really happen...??
Well she is really lucky... !!! I must say it is really awesome well written di...
I never read plays but 1st time I read it n feeling very nyc n kind of a hope dat whatever v dream comes true..
Thanx 4 such a nice play di it really is sweet n it really means a lot 2 me...
N n n me 1st yes...!!
Pata wanna share something today I was quite sad...
But after reading dis feeling so good... hehe
So luv u didu... muhaa... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow dear quite interesting one...n vry well written ...update soon as d precap sounds amazing...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Angel this is another piece of your awesome work and writing skills
Everything was written beautifully, love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love this act 😃

glad u writing it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thats really really interesting Angel..
Its good to see such kinds of work from you..
Really makes me ecstatic..
Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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angel i'm in awe of ur writing skills...😊
did anybody tell u before how well u write?😆
i simply loved it and i'm already waiting for the next part...loved christine!! could relate to her coz i sing too...😛
Posted: 12 years ago
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awweei..:*
it was so wonderfully written..:D
loved it <3
waiting for next part..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really awesome dear
nice act

it was so beautifully written
great job
hats off!!!

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