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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys...i am trying something different here..well i believe that when i write my strength is descriptions..so i am trying to polish up a little i believe that emotions are the only thing which seperate us from animals, the ability to feel. i strive to be as vivid as possible so this is something i cooked up...every week i wil describe an emotion, not a paticular situation but just go into detail as much as possible. and every friday i wil update a paragraph of a different emotion. for example if i do excitement today, next week i wil do fear and so on and so forth. i will do what people request the most. i hope everything is clear...so without any further nonsense from my side i am starting with the feeling of love.
love
is that a drum or is it just my heart? why is everything suddenly so beautiful? is the moon this bright every night? i catch my breath as i think of him. his laughter rings in my ears. ahh, music to my ears. but wait...should my heart be beating so fast? it feels as if it is going to tear out from my chest. i place my hand on my chest as i try to regulate the beats back to its normal pace but its as if it has a mind of its own. instead , i lightly close my eyes in surrender as i think about him. its weird how i just start smiling like that. i try so hard to visualize him ,i feel as if i am right there with him. it feels beautiful. just being there with him. eventually i open my eyes. he isnt there anymore but strangely enough he is still here. i feel like i am the most beautiful woman in the world though i am definitely not, yet you made me feel this way. i feel as light as a feather, like if i jump from my bed i might just float. i am not sure, not sure if this is right, not sure if this will hurt in the end, not even sure if you feel the same way but the truth is i dont care. i smile again for no reason at all. there isnt any practicality nor is there any logic yet if feels so right. is this what it feels like? is this what love feels like?
sorry if it wasnt up to expectations but i tried and no i have never been in love before.this was just a guess...a bad one maybe. so if you liked it hit like and comment please and oh ya, if you want me to do a [payiclar emotion just request in the comments please, thanks.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res/unres

frst of all..yey me frst!!
anyhoo cuming to ur post..nice one dear!!
im amazed on hw u descrbed d emotion of love! 👏
well i hve never fallen in love b4, so idk hw dat feels like..bt one thng is for sure dat aftr readng ur description of d emotion, i cnt wait to fal in love!😉 lol 😆
awsome dear n thnx for d pm!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gosh angel!!! amaziing yr..
ur writing skills r so so impressive❤️
love ur writing style a lott n mre dan dat i love ur concepts!!
bata ni tum kya khati ho jo..itni wrld best concepts pe likhti ho..lolzZz😆
niways..i cant comment on this post because evn i have nt yt experienced love..vo kya cheez hai evn i dunno 🤔
so...me kuch ni keh sakti n olso i hav heard dat love is painful n blah blah..bt dis is smethng different wat u hav described..so my ques is...
does all this really happen wen a girl falls in love?

plzz plzz answer d ques n pm ur upcoming works as well! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Impeccably written
Beautifully expressed
I love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really like it angel...but i believe when you write your strength is describing incidents. not emotions by themselves, emotions portrayed through some event. get me?

you did real well here, but its just what i feel because i have read a lot of ur writings.

loved the idea though and nice flow.

love--medha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Emotions are the inner feelings and they are not in our control. Too hard to handle.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cn u describe fear d nxt tym...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully written ..
just loved it..
I have no experience in love but it feel beautiful to read what you have penned out..
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing dear just loved it
so beautifully u described the emotions , the love
awesome and beautifully written
just wow👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just love your writing style :)

please do keep writing more :)


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