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..Shanae.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww!! Such a cute, sweet and innocent OS dear! I loved it alot!
Especially when the saviour turned out yo be one of the guys! I was astonished!! I thought as always it'll be someone else coming out of nowhere 😆 but this was truely original :)
And the ending was perfect! And completely justified the title!
Such an amazing one shot!

Keep writing and shining dear :)
Do pm me your futher works!
Completely loved this one!! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Thankyou 😳
peraltagasm thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shanae_Diamonds

Awww!! Such a cute, sweet and innocent OS dear! I loved it alot!
Especially when the saviour turned out yo be one of the guys! I was astonished!! I thought as always it'll be someone else coming out of nowhere 😆 but this was truely original :)
And the ending was perfect! And completely justified the title!
Such an amazing one shot!

Keep writing and shining dear :)
Do pm me your futher works!
Completely loved this one!! ❤️


Aww.. Thankyou so very much for this lovely comment!! 😃 Thankyou so very much for liking my work! I am really glad that you did! 😳 Thanks again! And i'll defo keep writing and pming you! 😳
...Natasha... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Shivi this was beautifully written
I know it's not on anyone specific but I can't help imagining my Taarey in here 😳
Awesome OS, I love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gosh it was awsum yaar!!!!!!!!!!!! such a beautiful amazing OS<3<3<3 loved it vry much!! my fav one now<3
love_taarey thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
awesome yr
dam cool
taani changed him wow
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
shivangi dear its really nice
this is the first os that i read of urs
and it is really wow
i just loved it
i just loved the title
i really loved the part when the boy saved the girl
the end was perfect

keep writing such beatiful os
and pls pls pls do pm me
its a request
parudTRsandhir thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
awesome os...
loved it...😊😊😊
tharu01 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
awesome..loved it..thnx 4 d pm..😉😉
Shanaya_MaNan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
omg dis ws ssoo good!!
shit man i wish ese hi kuch mere saath hojae
u knw, totally filmy style..damsel in distress type..lol 😛
n haan d guy shud defntly b hawt..heheheheh
anyhoo gr8 work n thnx for d pm 😃

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