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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful poems
Thanks for sharing
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Originally posted by: medhasarkar


bah---ki bon tumi!!! didir biye hoe geche?



keno bon hisabe ki kharapta korlum😕
Didi's vivah-23th jan'09⭐️
se takhon Msc final yr,ami cl 8😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
love it🤗
lovely poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great poem! i especially liked these lines:

Hope is a wide door...

We all live with an eye on hope.

Hope is life, hope is death


i love how you compared hope to a wide door and then how you mentioned that we live through an "eye" of hope as if the human eye can only get a peek through the 'wide door' of the vast hope that there truly is


And then how "hope is life and hope is death". i personally think of it as: we spend our lives hoping for something, some people hope for something after death but whatever it is i do believe that we all spend our lives hoping. whether its for something as trivial, or for something materialistic or hoping for there to be an afterlife or purpose to this world, i think that we all hope. And then from the religious perspective, i think there is hope after death that we meet a good fate and that is how hope is death. just my opinion anyway :)


great poem, keep it up!


Edited by -Aliya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: -Aliya-

great poem! i especially liked these lines:


Hope is a wide door...

We all live with an eye on hope.

Hope is life, hope is death


i love how you compared hope to a wide door and then how you mentioned that we live through an "eye" of hope as if the human eye can only get a peek through the 'wide door' of the vast hope that there truly is


And then how "hope is life and hope is death". i personally think of it as: we spend our lives hoping for something, some people hope for something after death but whatever it is i do believe that we all spend our lives hoping. whether its for something as trivial, or for something materialistic or hoping for there to be an afterlife or purpose to this world, i think that we all hope. And then from the religious perspective, i think there is hope after death that we meet a good fate and that is how hope is death. just my opinion anyway :)


great poem, keep it up!




⭐️wahh👏
gr8 analysis😎

now I've another long commentator even in a poem 🤗 1st is Rimi😊
Edited by surprising - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
lovely poem
keep writing like this
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: surprising



are wah aapne profile pic change kar di😉
aww...u love it???
so ordinary na??


haan pic change kar di...😉
meri fb and gmail profile pic bhi yahi hai...
kaisi lagi?
and mujhe aapki poems hamesha hi acchi lagti hain...😊


sirf isliye ki shabd bade hain,
kavita khubsoorat nahi ho jaati hai.
jo sochne par majboor karde,
vahi kavita dil ko choo jaati hai.


Edited by daydreamer... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesom dr
Sorry4 late
Thanx4 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice poem loved it.
thanks for pm.

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