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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Amazing poem!!!! I loved it... It is so awesome... n meaningful!!!!!!!!! U write amazingly whether it is stories or poems..!!! I love it all!!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22



love u n ur writings n taarey 😊 😊😊




( IN HINDI )


TUMHE DEKHKAR MAIN PHIR JEENE LAGAA HUN,
TUMHARI HASI SE [( SMILE SE) ,-A LITTLE PAUSE - ] MAIN HASNE LAGA HUN

TUMHE DEKHKAR MAIN PHIR JEENE LAGAA HUN
TUMHARI HASI SE MAIN HASNE - LAGA HUN

[ A LITTLE FAST]
JAANE KYA JAADU KIYA TUMNE
KAB MERA DIL LIYA TUMNE

[SLOW]
KI MUJHKO TO PATA BHI NA CHALA
KAHAN MERA DIL KHO GAYA
AUR - MAIN KHUDD SE JUDAAA HO GAYYAAA


TUMHARI HASI SE MAIN MUSKAANE LAGA
TUMHARE SANG SAPNE SAJAANE LAGA


TUMHAARE AANSOON (TEARS ) SE RONE MAIN LAGA
TUMHARE DARD SE TADAPNE LAGA ,

TUMHARI SAANSO SE JEENE MAIN LAGA HUN
TUMHARI DADHKANE MEHSOOS KARNE LAGA HUN

TUMHE KHONE SE DARNE MAIN LAGA HUN
TUMHAARE LIYE DUAAYEIN ( PRAYERS ) KARNE LAGA HUN


MERI ZINDAGI KA SAPNA TUMHI HO --
KHVAAISH BHI TUM HI -- HOOO
MERIII ZINDAGI KIII -


RAAH HO TUM MERI ZINDAGI KIII
AUR USKIII--
MANZIL BHI TUMHI HOOO
HA TUMHI HOOO

[A LITTLE FAST]

MERA ISHQ BHI TUM , PYAAR BHI TUM, ...
MOHABBAT BHIII TUM HIII HOOO
HAAA TUMHI HOOO


KAISI KASHMKASH HAI YE ,
MAIN HUN PHIR BHI MAIN NAHI

KHUD KO BHUL AAYA HUN
TUM MEIN MAIN KAHIIN ,
HAAA TUM MEIN MAIN KAHIN ...
this is for u ❤️ ❤️ ❤️



[/QUOTE



heyaaa dear its in hindi 😕😕 😕😕 bt bt bt u knw i understood mostly evry thng 😃😃 😃😃 bt i read thrice 😆😆 😆 😆 to understand... k cmg to th pt wht to say its awesome really loved it veryyy much i can feel it its jst amazing...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
I love it...:) ty foe the pm nd such a lovely poem...keep writing...\m/ :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Wow..this was seriously beautiful..for me writing poems are easier in English and I am completely shocked at how you managed to write it in Hindi so beautifully 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u

res

unres!!!

me first
sweetu...
i already said its so so so so beautiful n i am sure everyone here will love it ...

love u darling for writing such a beautiful poem every word of which carries the warmth of love...
keep writing my shona ...





🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗

awww my pyaari di u r so cute
love u a lottt di , u r d best
dil se biggg thanksss 4 your wonderful reply di
love u a lottt di
🤗 ❤️

muahhh muahhh my shonu di and i didn't post this poem agar aap insist nahi karte so
d credit of d appreciation goes 2 u first di
🤗 love u my shonu di
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: crazy2012

good awesome poem👍🏼



😊😊thank u so so so much dear😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

I'm in so lv wit d title 'TUM HI HO'! Hmmm! U created d divine love ambience wit ur beautiful poem! Lvd it chinnu...




dil se a very biggg thanks 4 this unexpected heart touching comment 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

thanks a lott dear 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: vinithataarey

awsmmm
u r tooo good dear
really beautiful poem
congrats dear
thank u soo much for d pm
tu me bhagne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai


😛😛🤗 awww thank u so much vinnie 4 this great lovely amazing comment dear
😊😊dil se bigg thanks dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: vijichandran

u r really talented.

i must say...
i m nt at al gud in literature...
bt still i luvd al the emotions conveyed in the poem...
wow...it ws really amazing...
keep writing mre



don't praise me that much as i am not that praise worthy and if my di hadn't force me 2 post this poem then i haven't posted it so if u want 2 praise then praise my indu di as she deserve it's credit first

dil se biggg sweettt pyaaaraaa cuteee thanks 2 u dear

thanks a lottt dear 🤗🤗


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