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Posted: 12 years ago
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Teri Gehraiyon Mein Jhankne Ki Koshishein Karta Raha

Zindagi Guzar Gayi Main Raha Wahin Khada

Woh Poochte Hain Kia Hasil Kia

Main Kehta Hoon Ke Ae Suno, Tumhe Hai Kia Khabar Bhala

Woh Kehta Hain Khaali Haath Reh Gaya

Main Kehta Hoon Mujhe Khuda Mil Gaya

-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-

Khuli Aankhein To Jahan Naya Tha

Zameen Nayi Thi Aasman Koi Aur Tha

Boondh Boondh Karke Har Qatra

Chere Pe Mere Sama Gaya

Phisalne Lagi Ret Haathon Se Mere Is Tarha

Zarre Zarre Pe Hukm Kisi Aur Ka Tha

Pattay Bhi Sharmane Lage Kuch Is Tarha

Hawaaon Ka Rukh Bhi Badal Gaya, Uska Hukm Tha

Lehrein Bhi Muskurane Lagi Paas Akey Mere

Gehraaiyon Ko Chupane Lagi Machalte Huye

Kuch main Bhi Has Diya Tere Kamaal Dekh Ke

Kuch Tu Bhi Has Diya Tere Karamaat Dekhe Ke

(^based on my sudden urge to teleport to a desterted island =D)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaahhh and I wanna go to the deserted island WITH you!
Mujhe Khuda mil gaya <3
Beautiful..this was so diff and so surprising, but of course a good one! <3
Edited by OnlyHope - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was absolutely beautiful esp the first three stanzas. Well done. šŸ‘

I have read your others posts too, you write beautiful and there is always a calmness to your post. Don't know how to put it but it feels very smooth and nice. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so beautifully written, loved it! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh wow!!!

Like I've always told you you write beautifully!
I so loved each n every line of it!!!

Masha Allah!

Do write something more like this

Love you!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really beautiful!!!
Lovely work šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely writing...not really a fan of hindi work, but urs had a little alag che flavour...😊
Loved it šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Masha Allah ..
Its beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, another beautiful piece...I'm just wowed Why do I have a feeling I've read this before?

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I've read this before..LOL, no wonder it felt familiar..
Edited by ..Ankita.. - 12 years ago

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