OS: Power of the Unseen

I dont know what is this, just a random scene and that day I was thinking and decided I would write scenes from every day life, not on a particular couple or anything just like that my own characters my own story everything, because i was so tempted. lol

Im not expecting a huge amount of feedback or anything and that is fine and neither will i be sending any PMs for this one.

It came to my mind and i had to write it down and post it somewhere so here it is

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She stepped out of the Mercedes and walked towards the lobby, the only place that could be seen under the pitch black sky. She had to get to the 10th floor and at this hour even that seemed like a challenge.

Taking slow steps she walked towards the building looking up eyeing her destination that all of a sudden seemed so far, she exhaled a breath, clutching her dupatta tight that covered her head and fell around her knees.

click click click

The only sound of her heels could be heard in the silent neighborhood as she walked and finally reached the empty lobby

She looked through her bag to find the keys, her attention completely focused on the contents of the bag

She looked up only to be surprised by a sudden stranger who seemed to have popped out of nothingness.

His back was facing her, she could tell he was checking his mail and looking for something he expected but disappointed on not finding it he turned around.

She quickly looked away to avoid any eye contact as he was a stranger and she wasn't supposed to look him in the eye.

Chaotic thoughts ran through her head and she quickly shrugged it away

He was standing in her way, how could she walk and not have him notice her

He looked at her baffled by some unknown power that even though he didn't see but could feel surrounding her like a protective shield

He wanted to, wanted so bad to look her in the eyes he was just so tempted but when given the chance he lowered his gaze, surprising himself he moved out of the way and let her pass and she murmured a low "thank you" without adding in extra unnecessary emotions.

A sudden gush of respect formed in his heart and for this stranger, he didn't know why but he liked the feeling.

With that she took a sigh of relief and for the first time in life she realized the power of the cloth that covered her head, covered her soul.

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

RES!! 😃

Ok, Now I'm totally speechless! That was sooo beautifully written! So simple yet sooo powerful and conveying sooo much! I'm awed by your thinking and writing skills! You sure you're only 17?? 😆

speechless?? really?? lol i never knew it was that good hehe😆

and thank youuu soo much im so flattered fari hehe and yes i am 17 is too young? LOL

I loved it how you've conveyed the importance of hijab! I've noticed it too how guys never try to get free with girls who wear hijab... Instead they treat you respectably and remain reserve... Not trying to hit on you 😛
omgg IKRRR that is the best thingg and i love it hehe

And oddly a girl herself feels secure wearing a hijab! Isn't that amazing? 😳
amazing beyond words! and actually that day i was clutching my duppata like tht when i feared it might slip cus it was a slipery material and i had to pass the lobby lol

So Awesome piece of writing! I loved this more than any Arhi OS's I've ever read 😳 Keep writing 😊

awww thanks<3

Originally posted by: -Grace-

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Iqraaa

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Haila!!! You are only 17????

I feel old now😆

You always write well now I'm ashamed being a year older than you I can write this wellt!!!!

You've given the msg so powerfully abt Hijab

N I've noticed guys respect u n keep distance when they see a girl in hijab...n I feel very protected too😃

Lovelyyy!!!

Thanks a bunch for the PM😃

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

OMG!! All 3 of us wear Hijabs?? Thats sooo Awesome!! I'm sooo proud of you two!! 😆