Being A Mother [Feelings One-shot]

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tukun2009

@tukun2009

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

awesum os👏the way yoy described the whole feeling i felt as if i was expereincing it as if i had given birth to child.great job

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aashi

@aashizin

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

i have never read such a heart touching and most adorable OS in my life being mother is just wonderful piece of work i have ever read one mother's pov abt her baby her love affection care concern everything u have written awesomely mahak gr8888 job standing ovation 👏👏👏👏

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Archie

@_SilverLining_

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

wonderful!!!! the joy of becoming a mother cannot be deciphered in words but no doubt u portrayed it in d best way possible... a lovely piece of creation!👏👍🏼

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NivzPMList

@NivzPMList

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Awesome Oneshot! And you really beautifully portrayed the feelings..

Summing them up is a difficult task indeed! But nevertheless you took up the challenge and it is simply awesome!

Keep Writing!

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

beautiful. you expressed a mother's emotions beautifully mehak

a heart touching and most adorable OS well done dear

thank u so much for such piece of worku share with us Mehak

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

I just came across this and all that I can say now...is It was beautiful...its true na we can even leave our parents just for our kid...despite the fact being on of them is our mother...its so so weird and even natural !!!!

Words will fall short if I say something more :)

TC,
Fatima

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Munaza sami

@M2NZ

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

You wrote the feelings so pure , that i remembered my time 2 years ago when my boy was born
Those insecurties
New feelings
9 months really makes u think only abt ur baby and when u hav it in ur hands it feels like i couldnt imagine this mesmerizing scene ever!
I would like to read more of ur work!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

AWWW :) Thank you all.. I am so obliged to all of you for liking my work :)

I would be commenting on every comment individually :)

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

awesome os...loved the beautiful relation between the mother and the baby...i felt i like i could imagine it happening in front of my eyes...thats the beauty of ur writing...love u for it...will wait 4 more of ur os...pm me