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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys I have written a poem.Its my first attempt at poetry writing...hoe i cud do some justice with it...

Imprints on my soul

"Move on" or "Hold on"

A tossy situation lingers my head

Why lament over something left unsaid?

Living alone is a turmoil- the head debate

shrieks aloud…What's a lyf sans a soulmate??

Loneliness will leave ur senses paralysed

even before its time for the real death bed

A single emotion doesn't halt life

And there's no worth of this empty strife.

The head screech…Its time to move on!

But layers beneath, I know…something is still not gone

Oh god! what do I do of this stupid heart

That has embedded him as its inherent part

Its ready to bleed…ready to slit

Just to keep inside, his spirit lit

His smile still conquers my thought

In his sweet memories my soul still lost

His deep voice still resonates in my air

His essence scattered everywhere

The feel of his warm touch I can still sense

What still surrounds my world, is his timeless presence…

There is no way I can help it out even a bit

How do I do this? How can any1 do it…

How do I "move on" from my very own existence?

How do I forget my years long persistence?

For what all I have come across, I know one for sure,

He is the life that breaths inside me…the one who completes me as a whole

I cant forget him! for he is the one who has left his everlasting imprints on my soul...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nicee poemm....first try is awesomee...relle its tooo gud ...pure lines dat come out from a broken heart...continue sweety...u doin justice to dis :)

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