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Hello everybody! =]
This is a really short and almost illogical poem, that I wrote this morning at school out of monotony. You see, after you're done with Math exercises and you're one of the very few non-participants of the Annual Day - you don't have much to do. Really! lol
Please leave in your comments and use like. Criticism is heartily welcomed, so if you find mistakes let me know - I would wanna improve. 😳
This is a really short and almost illogical poem, that I wrote this morning at school out of monotony. You see, after you're done with Math exercises and you're one of the very few non-participants of the Annual Day - you don't have much to do. Really! lol
Please leave in your comments and use like. Criticism is heartily welcomed, so if you find mistakes let me know - I would wanna improve. 😳
Poem: The Morning Realization
Wide awake I tossed in the bed here and there,
Taking pride in itself,
The sun overlooked my bookshelf,
Its rays fell upon my hair,
The pain was being explored layer by layer.
Removing the pain,
In came retrieval,
Came in reasons to rejoice,
I realized that melancholy and harmony,
Happen by choice!
The window hung open,
The cool breeze caressed my face,
I felt light,
I felt just above the ground under golden rays, so bright.
Nearly flying, nearly healed,
I could feel,
And just about in time,
Some more realization hit me,
That I was too part of all the frolic and glee,
And the true me was yet to be unveiled...
Cricket
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