kissing her cage goodbye :Time to let go

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sorry this post has to be removed according to the rules of the competition it had been written for.

Edited by crazilycrazy - 14 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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yayy first to post...
a really really sweet os... m touched...!!! amazing one..=)...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Premeena-

yayy first to post...

a really really sweet os... m touched...!!! amazing one..=)...

Thanks a lot Premeena.I am glad you like it! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I don't have much to say, honestly. 😳

It was real mature piece of writing. It reflects who you are as a person, Ankita. Deep-rooted. The topic you chose is quite real and your writing style makes it come straight from the heart. Amazing job done!

Keep writing! 👍🏼

-Kanky

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I like it a lot friend... I like the optimism in it, not just Hannah, but many more can find an answer, a view of life.😊

Do write more👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow that was a lovely os...yep hope is what we should not leave....whether people leave you..dnt love u etc...we shld nt lose hope.....

I'm really really into this thinking mode and reanalysing my approach to life...and tht is triggered by this os of yours...wch everyone can relate to :)

Good read !!

-Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

Wow that was a lovely os...yep hope is what we should not leave....whether people leave you..dnt love u etc...we shld nt lose hope.....

I'm really really into this thinking mode and reanalysing my approach to life...and tht is triggered by this os of yours...wch everyone can relate to :)

Good read !!

-Fatima

Thanks a lot Fatima.I am glad you like it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: suchi_dev2006

I like it a lot friend... I like the optimism in it, not just Hannah, but many more can find an answer, a view of life.😊

Do write more👍🏼

Thanks a lot Suchi :D
Ya, this OS was written generally,without any definite character in mind...
cR
Edited by crazilycrazy - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really nice :) there were a few tiny spelling mistakes like buzzy and weather.. but its a nice story keep writing 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Nishi*

really nice :) there were a few tiny spelling mistakes like buzzy and weather.. but its a nice story keep writing 😃

Thanks a lot Nishi.I corrected the mistakes...actually this was the first draft without being edited so....the whether became weather😊
And about buzzy..well its no word I know but I used it anyway :D
Thanks for commenting
cR

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