Kiran and Kiran : One Shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: scarlett.lady

I just finished reading the fist bit - I'm in cackles to say the least - and just for the lack of better words - for my head is humor befuddled and I'm suffering from laughter control arrest - can I say this is beyond awesome?!!! the concept is even beyond the beyond! 😲 okay, and I shall be back after reading the rest, right away.

First off, thanks for reading this. 😊 I'm really glad that you like the concept. When I narrated it to my sister, she yawned and looked away. 😛

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so I don't think its a good idea to hold up my comments until I'm done reading it all ... this is going to sound positively hysterical, but I want to scream out loud - I love kiran and kiran. just that. you should understand what I mean 😆

Oh, I do understand😆 Thanks a lot!!!

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SO erm, Kiran Kiran Majumdar Jahagirdar - KKMJ?! Sounds like one of those KJo movie title abbreviates 😛 and excuse my lame comment ... I'm not going to get over this story for a while (and I'm still in the middle) sounding intelligent is my transiently out-of-order functionality.

Yep, it does sound like a KJo movie, now that I think of it. 😊

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Ouch! That sure hurt! You know, it did make me wonder (a little more intelligently than previously) why its inexplicably, erm, an unparalleled kind of romantic thing (inside of my head) for a girl to truly not be aware of a guy's feelings for her - not the saggy way they usually show in dramas and movies - but for real... when the instinct just doesn't kick in the right way, cause there's truly too many deterrents to pose otherwise... decidedly, I like this story (as if you didn't already figure that!)

To be really concise, girls can be dense loads of times. It has happened to me too, but not in the same context (nothing romantic). 😃

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Aah, time for the angst! That is some build up alright, pooja! You have a great knack to bring out big points from subtle point outs. And, i really like this story ... thanks for sharing, already!

I personally love a bit of angst in love. It brings this strange feeling in the pit of the stomach and you want the guy to get the girl or vice versa (as you know will happen) but you still can't help feeling a bit worried.

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Sigh! The story has left me with a happy feeling in the pit of stomach. I think the best thing about love - i repeat, the best - is reading about it! and a good story makes the best thing better than it self!

oh and, I him a special star (or you, since you wrote it) to fight for her name -sake! =) it was awfully sweet like very else could ever be!

yet again, thanks for sharing, and for the pm!

ps: what did you mean by pulling it down on sept 19th?

(S.L.)

I hate the way girls have to change their names - it's a tradition or whatever, but it doesn't sit right with me. I'm really glad that you liked it.
I was originally going to put it up in the WCC but I didn't, so I guess I'm not pulling this down in near future. 😊

Originally posted by: Pebblez

So is it ironically funny to mention that the only reason (the basic being) this story was given to me to be read by a very close friend is because I happen to share the name of your two leads :P yeah, I am Kiran too, though the female version of it! :P

I loved this story. I love your writing style even more. It's simple and effective, your characters are amazingly original and hilarious at the same moment. I love kiran and kiran, they are enigmatic, i swear.

The plot was so simple, its like the usual thing i guess all of us have seen and heard of too many times, yet this was a pleasant read, and my first after a loooooong time. I am glad my friend gave me this. Good work Pooja, um thoroughly impressed. :D

p.s. I would die if my guy is named Kiran. I swear. :D

Cheers! :)

Kiran

Originally posted by: *Nishi*

^ why are you going to take it down??

Originally posted by: esquisse

That was a delightful read!! Loved your Kiran & Kiran :)

And Thanks Kiran for giving me the link ;)

Keep writing more.

Originally posted by: crazilycrazy

like a painted ship, upon a painted ocean

I have read this poem..."The Rime of the Ancient Mariner"

Yes! Exactly! I think I'd added that I have included a line from a famous poem and asked others to spot it on fictionpress but I think I forgot to mention it here. You're the first one to spot it! So congratulations!😃 I love that poem very much - some of it was in our syllabus a few years ago but I read the entire thing.

wow.... I guess thats the beauty of an author...to learn from there surroundings and get inspired by them.

(Well I am saying all this because I think you took that inspiration from that poem or else all this part of my comment is a waste 😭)

Dude! I absolutely love how you point out to small details... all of them make me connect with your story :D

After all...we all have had a mish-pronouncing teacher at one time.

I could give you other examples from your thread but then I will be spamming :)

I will edit later after reading the next two parts :D

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I read all of it and I am in awe of you Pooja.All your writing is so original and fresh.I don't know what else can be said.

cheers,

cr

Thanks a ton, and thanks for reading!😃