Poem: The Invisible Entity - Page 4

aww....

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Dude, you say your a bad writer, today I didn't see Kanky. I saw a professional poet! And trust me, I have met and talked to a profession poet before (no kidding, at school). And you completely made my mouth go wide open. Brilliant job in writing this. Keep it up!

Oh God, that's so sweet of ya. 😳 Thank you! 😃

And I am so sorry, I still haven't read your stuff, I haven't got the time, lately.

Originally posted by: -Aish129-

Sorry for getting here late as usual...but I had to read this my God you write really well Chhoti, I've told you a countless number of times, but everytime I read something by you, it's always got a fresh feel to it..I don't know what it is! <3 Beautiful poem Kanky! Love it <3 😳

Thanks a million, shishter!! You managed to take some time out, I appreciate that. 😊

Originally posted by: Mjht_Forever

B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L⭐️

I loved the way you started it!... 😊
And the poem is even Rhyming! ... Wow Kanky!! ...😆
I've always loved the way u pen down things.. But this one has kinda taken u to another level yaar!..😉
Awesome Work!!
-Sharmi

Thanka a lot, Sharmi!! 😳 I am so glad you liked it. And you know what? I actually feel this is better than what I've written before. 😆

Originally posted by: -Ishaan-

I dunno wat to say coz speaking frankly.....the usage of words n rhyming n the fluency of the poem was very gud but actually I didnt understand it. So basically it was gud according to the way its written.

Whoa, you dint understand the poem? That means the complexity of the poem is way more than what I thought. 😆

Anyway, thank you. 😃

Wow lovely poem loved it do write more and more

gr8 writing.............awsom

keep it up

hope to get more nice piece from u

Confusingly brilliant...

You know... There's a very fine line between intriguing and irritating... And you, have taken this poem over to the right side... Its intriguing, mysterious, and has this uniquely calming feel to it... I don't know why... But this poem ACTUALLY soothed me... You're good at all this serious stuff yaar... YOU do all the talking!

<3 Aishwarya


(PS.. I want my star reader to COMMENT on my OS and SS!)

Beautiful!!!!!
keep it up!!!!!!👍🏼

Hey kanky it is such a beautiful poem,, ur a great writed and u should continur writing... gud luck