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Posted: 15 years ago
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My beloved









Ranbir Raj is a handsome lovely boy who lives to fall in love.He waited to falling in love.And finally he falls in love.One rainy night brings his dream girl to him.
He sees a ravishing beauty standing with an umbrella.Rain drops and hailstones don't reach his eyes.Only she is seen.She is a classic beauty.Her face which shines like a moon,her long blouncy hair,her smooth skin and the tiny petal like lips make her look like a fairy.
Ranbir could'nt resist himself.
"Are you not scared to stand here at night?"
He asks.
She raises her eye brows and look at him.
"I'm not scared.Only my love is inside my mind.No fear.I will wait for my love at any time.Whether it's day or night..i don't care".
"Love?"
She blushes,
"Yes.My love.I'm waiting for him.For the last one year i have been waiting for my lover Salman".
He sees her eyes glowing when she talks about her love.But he was heart broken when he heard about her love.Because he has already fallen for her.He can't imagine losing her.Tears dwell in his eyes.

Ranbir sees Zakina waiting for her man every night.The nights they spent together make them closer to each other.A beautiful friendship grows between them.Love blooms more and more in Ranbir's heart.He tries hard to control his emotions.
"For how long will you wait for your lover?"
Ranbir asks her.
"He will come very soon.You know..last year i met him here.Here only he proposed to me.He promised me that he will be back after his sister's wedding".
Still she has hopes.
"If he does'nt come now?"
"I will till my death".
He pities her.
"I pity you for waiting for a man who has'nt contacted you ever since he left this place.You are doing something foolish.You are wasting your precious time.Forget him".
Zakina's anger makes her face red.
"What nonsense are you saying?I told you..he will come soon".
Ranbir goes closer to her.
"Zakina".He utters her name softly.
She sees a different Ranbir.She feels that in his voice there was musical romance.
"I will tell you a truth.I have been loving you ever since i saw you".
She is in a big shock.
"Ranbir...what are you saying?"
"Please try to see my heart.I love you.Forget him.Come with me.I will give you a lot of love and happiness".
"No Ranbir.I can't.."
She runs away.
Ranbir is depressed.
"Hey...sweetheart.."
Ranbir hears an unfamiliar voice.He looks at that person.She is a gorgeous woman with over make up.Her red saree and red lipstick give her a bright look.
"Who are you?"
Ranbir asks her.
She smiles in a teasing manner.
"I'm Bulbul.All men know me very well.Because i only help them when they are thirsty for love.But they need my love only for some time.You don't know me.That shows that you are a gentleman.For the last few days i have been noticing you.You are always seen with a girl".
"Yes,she is Zakina;my beloved.The only girl i love".
"I have realized how mad you are about Zakina.Don't love anyone like this.You will hate yourself for loving someone like this".
Ranbir can't digest her advise.
"Stop it.How can you advise me about love?You are a lady who pretends to love many men for money".
That cuts her heart into pieces.Her eyes are wet.
"I know what love is.I also loved a person blindly like you.But he cheated me.His betrayal made me a lady who is needed only for some moments".
Ranbir's heart melts.
"I'm sorry.I hurt you".
"It is okay".
"I respect your views about falling in love.But i believe in my love.Love can only soothe me.It can't destroy me.It's not necessary that everyone's love is a slow poison".
"Let your love save you".
She vanishes with a smile.

The next night Zakina's arrival gives a lot of tensions to Ranbir.He is nervous to face her.
"Ranbir!I'm sorry".
He is relived as well as surprised.
"I thought you will not talk to me".
"I don't want to lose a friend like you.I need you".
Ranbir is excited.
"Zakina needs me.Wow!I'm the most happiest person in this world".
He jumps with joy in the rain.
Zakina is bathed in pain.
"I need you..but as a friend".
Suddenly Ranbir feels that his heart has been hurt with a needle.He hides his pain with a cute smile.
"It is okay.Atleast you are with me as a friend.That is more than important for me".
She smiles.

The next night was sensous with a lot of couples dancing in the rain.
It is a visual treat for Ranbir and Zakina.
"I wish Salman was here to dance with me in this beautiful rain.Ranbir...what would you have done if you had your beloved with you now?"
"Me?"
"Ya.."
He looks deeply into her eyes.
He holds her closer to the wall.He stands really close to her.She feels his heart beat and breath.
"I would have stood closer to her like this and..."
"And?"
"And....i would have looked into her eyes like this".
He looks deeply into her eyes.Zakina feels that his love is touching her heart.Her eyes are touching his eyes.
"How did i feel his love?It's a sin.How could i forget Salman even for a moment?"
Her mind asks her.
She feels guilty.She moves away.
Ranbir looks at her.
"I'm going.Bye".
"Zakina!"
Zakina does'nt mind him.
She runs away with tears.
Ranbir longs for her presense.

Ranbir waits for the next night to be with Zakina.
Zakina comes with a sweet smile.She looks cute like a child.
"You look very happy".
"Salman's letter came.He will come tonight".
Ranbir knows what real pain is.He is going to lose Zakina forever.He controls his tears.He smiles hiding his tears.
"So you are going to be a bride.You are going to be with your lover.Congrats Zakina".
Zakina blushes.

After some time...
Zakina hears Salman's footsteps.When she sees his face she runs to him.She wanted to be held in his arm.But she did'nt see passion or love in his eyes.
"I came here to apologise to you for naking you wait".
"No need of your apology.Anyways you came.That is more than enough for me".
"I'm sorry Zakina.I can't take you with me.To conduct my sister's wedding i had to sacrifice you".
Zakina looks at him with anxiety.
"I had to marry the bride groom's sister to get my sister married to him".
Zakina's romantic world breaks into pieces in a moment.
"What?"
She cries.
"I'm sorry.Zakina...you are a nice girl.I will not be forgiven by God for breaking your heart.But i'm helpless.God will give you your true love".Salman moves away helplessly.
Zakina cries like anything.Ranbir places his hands on her shoulders with pain.
"You were right Ranbir.What i did was very foolish".
She rests her head on his shoulder and sheds tears.

Nights pass.
Ranbir starts waiting for Zakina like she waited for Salman for one year.
He is restless since he has'nt seen her after she got rejected by her lover.He waits
for Zakina with hope.
After one year he sees Zakina coming.She has not changed a bit.She is raving like before.
Ranbir runs to her.
"Zakina...you came.I have been waiting for you for the last one year".
"I knew that you were waiting for me.I waited for a man for one year.But he ditched me.I don't want you to feel the pain i felt at that moment.That's why i came now.I regret for ignoring you.I regret for not accepting your love.Now i'm grateful to Salman for deserting me.If he had'nt done that i would not have been lucky enough to be with you".
He smiles.He feels that he is in a dream world.She rests her head on his chest with tears.He caresses her long beautiful hair with his soft fingers.
They both get lost in each other's eyes for sometime.Their eyes sparkle.They both see love in each other's eyes.He looks deeply into her eyes and lips.She blushes and closes her eyes.
"Hey...sweethearts".Bulbul calls them.
They look at Bulbul.
"You proved that i'm wrong.Everyone's love is not weak.Your love saved you".
Ranbir and Zakina smile at her.

The end
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyyy ..i loved it❤️ ...sooo gooood yaa! 👍🏼...welldone 👏...well writteen 👏...i hav njoyed a lot reading ua one shot 😳...lovellyy! ..😛

keep rawking! 👍🏼...n thnxxxxxx for d pm 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautiful os !
I always wanted Saawariya to end with happy note !
So it was a treat reading this ff !
Great work !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was really great yaar!!!bohot accha likhti hai tu!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow it was nice... i njoyed reading ua OS.. it was fab dear..keep rawking..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏👏luved it!!! u made up for my dissappointment i had after seeing their film....how i wished both had united in the movie as well....brilliant concept and i luved it!!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Jasmine....nice to see u after so long🤗
thnx 4 d PM yaar🤗
nice OS...yup i like Ranbir n Sonam
do write more👍🏼
plz try smthng on Naksh also😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Jasmine,it ws rllllllly very very very sweeeeeeeeeeeeet n wndrful!!!!!!!!.im a gr8 Ranbir Sonam fan n i ws very sad wen i saw Sawariya.i jz hated d ending of d movie............ur OSz toooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏dis ws exactly wat i wished 2 hapn wen i saw d movie.u r a very goooooood writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keep gng!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey...
it was really nice....
and thank you 4 the pm.... 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really nice one shot..
please do keep writing more

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