Coffee, Embrace and Another Love Story(Updated!)

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Pooja

@Pooj@

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: scarlett.lady
The tale telling is gripp-ier than any rona dhona virani/kumar sopas I have ever heard of - been forced to endure ...

No, correct that, this is far more involving! Enjoyed the narration so much Pooja, completely in line with the story of every house hold and still such a fresh read - looking forward to this one with high hopes!

(S.L.)

Thanks. I am really glad that you took time to read it. 😊
I will be putting up more soon!

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deviyani

@rnfandeboo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Sanath Vishwas was the hugest star on telly, and I was madly in love with 'Shaurya', the character he has essayed in his forensic based serial, 'Crime Dept, Special.'. Sanath disappeared from public view when he was at the pinnacle of fame, and slowly descended into oblivion of the public memory. Not mine though. I can still recite all Shaurya's dialogues. And Vishwas, as I referred to him, was firmly embedded in my mind. I did not have my 10^th physics formulae by heart, but ask me his dialogues, a dunce turned into a dashing-dialogue spouting-star crazed fan. Just to make one thing clear, I love the character not the actor. There is a difference the size of the English Channel between the two.

hmmm.......kiski baat ho rahi hai ,pooja Bhanu ki?

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Pooja

@Pooj@

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: rnfandeboo
Sanath Vishwas was the hugest star on telly, and I was madly in love with 'Shaurya', the character he has essayed in his forensic based serial, 'Crime Dept, Special.'. Sanath disappeared from public view when he was at the pinnacle of fame, and slowly descended into oblivion of the public memory. Not mine though. I can still recite all Shaurya's dialogues. And Vishwas, as I referred to him, was firmly embedded in my mind. I did not have my 10^th physics formulae by heart, but ask me his dialogues, a dunce turned into a dashing-dialogue spouting-star crazed fan. Just to make one thing clear, I love the character not the actor. There is a difference the size of the English Channel between the two.
hmmm.......kiski baat ho rahi hai ,pooja Bhanu ki?

Are baap re...tune toh pakad liya... Yes and No. Maybe. Maybe not!😆
Well, the raaz will be revealed later!!!!😆

Well, many instances in this story are inspired by my life itself!

Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago

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Aparajita

@yikes

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

reserved :D

P.S - I see the protagonist and I share the same name :P

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whimsical

@whimsical

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Hey I'm new here. I didn't know about this forum. Was just browsing when I saw your story. You write very well! Loved this!

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Hema

@_.serendipity._

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Lovely update, Pooja!! I love the way you narrate the story. It really draws the reader in :) :) And I find it very interesting that you have two titles. Like the narrator is in two minds. Your story seems very, very promising. Can't wait for more!!

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scarlett.lady

@scarlett.lady

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

IF wont let me 'like' your post, forget the 'love' tab you had earlier suggested - the comment should reinforce my intent however, for the existence of that latter!

Quite the riot aren't you? I loved that narrative... every bit of seemed to spell some truth I have either faced, seen or heard of. Like I said before, its that kind of tale we may have all heard, your zing to it in the writing style is marvelous!

I'm so glad I hopped onto this thread!

(S.L.)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Oh lovely written.....Description of dress wid monthly salary n laptop desire one of the reasons stickin to the job was too good...
I did not have my 10^th physics formulae by heart, but ask me his dialogues, the dunce turned into a dashing-dialogue spouting-star crazed fan. Just to make one thing clear, I love the character not the actor. There is a difference the size of the English Channel between the two.

lol we are similar, formulas are forgotten, dialogues can never be forgotten😆

Tera hone laga hoon was fantastic, it suited well.....

Very well written, loved it......

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tina

@afreen_786

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

hey pooja
luv ur story
plssss continue soon
n add me to ur pm list
update soon

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

hey pooja..nice story..just read it..

She had to go to the cafe..n she was getting late..but what was she confused about?..

It was time for her results..n they all were very nervous..but when she finally got it, they breathed a sigh of relief. Her parents went bragging about it n she talked to her friends..they had dinner at a lavish restaurant..but she said she wanted to be a journalist..n wow they were okay with it?..she could have talked to them before!..

She worked in a cafe..nice..lol love the way u describe the accents, yaar!..

She had a regular customer..who looked like her fav star on tv..she saw him bored with another BBBB..lol. She decided to play a prank..n he got the point too..so they chased Shikha off..lol!..n he was eternally thankfull to her..but everyone else was shocked..

update soon

-aish

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