~~AVALON: Land Of Fairies~~ Part 14

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

lovel update,very nice,

update soon dear.

thanks for the pm dear.

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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

aaaaaahhhhhhh! did the part have to stop precisely there!! evil wittter!!

btw nice pix, wait for my comment till tomorrow 😈 evil!

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Priya

@devilshangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Hmmm interesting part dear...Now it will be more fun reading it :)
pls do continue soon
nd thx for the pm

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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Ok ok ok.. sorry... 😳 i didn't comment on that day in which i was supposed to comment, but never matter coz i'm commenting now na.. 😳 omg sorry again

Well part 11 is really awesome! 😃 W-O-W-!! ⭐️👏 I loved it, darling u'r doin a great job 😃. You just moved from her house to the Niagara Falls, and actually i had the feeling of watching them two alone at the Niagara Falls! 😃😆 sounds crazy ah.. well it's just true.

And, uhm, if i'm not wront John and her r getting closer, which is really interesting.. and lovely u know, so dont torture us wid ur looong vacations and just UPDATE SOON! 😆 please.

About the pix.. theyr great 😃👏 really, nice choice. I love the girl's pic, coz she's.. like, simple and yet beautiful 😃 and well yes, that guy is really gorgeous.. 😆😃 so it's fit for the character, as he was really a prince charming and a dream's fulfilled tremendously hot guy.. 😆 i seem to be drooling, but im just praising.. 🥱ok nvm 😆 if it's someone's fault then it's just and only URS, for writting him down u know. 😆😃

Well, waiting for the next part.

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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

😆 female-dominated... love it

well so... Twilight and John or Emerald.. 😆 rofl, r... not really good friends?.. lolz.

Anyway i loved the introduction of Avalon, 👏 well done.

But i hope that... Jade doesn't cause any problems... 😕 i don't like her so far..

and wot else.. what happened wid the romantic scenario of the Niagara Falls? when did they get out from there... i was LOVING it... anyway, the encounter wid the prince will just make Anya and John closer, plus the further happenings. 😛 that's what i guess

well hope ur exams went good 😃

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chandni

@*Nishi*

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

wow ur story is realy really good.. 😃 im on part 6 roight now.. not a whole to say there cause im as confused as anya right now 😆😆😆 but i like this guy with the green eyes.. maybe hes a fairy too?

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Priya

@devilshangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Hey dear sorry 4 rplying late was busy with coll stuffs.
Now coming to the part. Well its as usual amazing nd written lovely :)
now do continue soon
nd thx 4 pm

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

loveeddd itt!!

heyyy bdw dinntt get the endd biitt

the jade, emerald,twilight

alll of it confused me

bt cont soon

nd pm me

whts ur name bdw?

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Hala

@MrMonster

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya
loveeddd itt!!
heyyy bdw dinntt get the endd biitt

the jade, emerald,twilight

alll of it confused me

:(

bt cont soon

nd pm me

whts ur name bdw?

I''m Hala., and i guess yours Sindhya
and anyway the ending was basically like this, Twilight and Emerald are sort of girlish names, basically why John/Emerald renamed himself John, and their names are girlish because Avalon is a female-dominated world.
Jade is suppose to be John's evil sister, well not Evil, mischevious, something that John is really annoyed of,
Thanks for commenting, much appreicated 😳

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Hala

@MrMonster

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: *Nishi*
wow ur story is realy really good.. 😃 im on part 6 roight now.. not a whole to say there cause im as confused as anya right now 😆😆😆 but i like this guy with the green eyes.. maybe hes a fairy too?

Nishi good to have you finally commenting, where did you disappear for the last few months? Confused as Anya? Well Anya is not confused, she's bewildered, but then a lot of confusion coming this way, oh yeah the green-eyed guy is a fairy, that's why no one could see him..

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