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Posted: 16 years ago
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chapter 1 part 5
The next day, Nadia spent her day pretty much he same way. Reading, eating, and sleeping it off. But towards the end, she decided that she would go outside and take care of some of the plants and flowers she had. They had just moved there a few months back and with the new school and everything Nadia had barely any time to give her plants the attention they needed. They were all drooping and dead looking.. it was sad. All she really needed to do was water them so she got the hose and sprayed water all over the garden and most of the grass too (that also needed water). The sun was setting and soon it would be dark. So she tried watering fast but to still give enough water to the plants. And as she stood there, she thought about her life and what the future would bring her. So far, her life was going pretty well. Sure her best friend had died but it was pretty nice after that. She already knew that one day she would see her again. It just saddend her that she couldn't be here on earth to experience her life with her. That's the part most people are sad about when people die. They're afraid of how to go on with life without that person. They can learn (over the years) to understand that the person they love is gone. It's just hard to accept that they'll never ever ever come back.
Nadia was deep in thought when a puddle began to form in the garden. It flowed slowly through the plants down to her feet. And it shocked her. The water was so cold๐Ÿ˜ฒ She snapped out of her day dream and decided to put it away. She picked up most of the hose and dragged it back to the side of the house. And as she walked, she tripped over the hose and the water started spraying everywhere uncontrollably. It got everywhere and everything wet. Especially Nadia๐Ÿคฃ Nadia, who had drifted back into her day dream was awakened again by the sharp, cold water spraying at her. It was so random she laughed hard๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ And she enjoyed it.. She needed something to cheer her up a little. She had a big day tomorrow
A couple of things.... Since I have about 1 week and a half free, I'm gonna start updating each day. I'll prolly write a few paragraphs just like these except a bit longer. I have tons of ideas that I need to write down and share with you guys.. So for this week, I won't be sending very many PMs. I'll send a few but after that you might just have to keep checking back each day to see if there's a new update. That shouldn't be too hard since it'll probably be in your last participated topics list at the side. (this plan never worked out.......)
ignore this message^
Let me know if I should make any changes and please remember to critisize. I want to become a better writer so lots of tips ๐Ÿ˜ก
Edited by *Nishi* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
yaar i really dont know what you're talking about๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
Actuatlly i was little upset with my personal life but after reading u're update i'm feeling much better now thanks for updating today.It was written v well.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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who? Nadia, nadu Nishs friend?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very cute update Nishi! I don't mind that it's short, as long as you continue! =)
It''s sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad that Nadia' BF died ๐Ÿ˜ญ But I like the way you portrayed her philosophical side with humour in it too. LOVE it!!!!
-Aish
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: NIDIZ

Actuatlly i was little upset with my personal life but after reading u're update i'm feeling much better now thanks for updating today.It was written v well.

im so happy to hear that my story helped you get through today =)
thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: MusicalAiswarya

Very cute update Nishi! I don't mind that it's short, as long as you continue! =)

It''s sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad that Nadia' BF died ๐Ÿ˜ญ But I like the way you portrayed her philosophical side with humour in it too. LOVE it!!!!
-Aish

aww thank you sooo much aish๐Ÿค—
yes it is very sad๐Ÿ˜ญ
well tomorrow im gonna write a long update. i've been trying to build up some suspense for this big day ๐Ÿ˜ƒ hehe i think you will love it
๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi, ๐Ÿ˜Š

well, i liked this part a lot, well, i just found something different ๐Ÿ˜Š, u are doing a great job playing different characters Nish, narrating in a different way for ur differents stories, means, u are doing somthing wich less persons (fics writers) can do. ๐Ÿ‘
the part was a bit like always, just as u inform us, but in this update Nadia remembers a dead friend, erm... sorry, cudnt find better words to adress to a dead friend, actually, is that only.. na? ๐Ÿ˜† er, sorry.. just a question, that friend... was it human?
i knew! i knew that something wid the water for the plants wud happen.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†
and... PMS???? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ wowwww!! ๐Ÿคฃ - maybe she is a IF member!! โญ๏ธ Hinna, ur mysterious girl is closest that wat u think ๐Ÿ˜›
Nish, gotta pm you, remind me of it if i dont do it soon or if u, by chance, are a bit curious about it ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Girl_2007

hi, ๐Ÿ˜Š

well, i liked this part a lot, well, i just found something different ๐Ÿ˜Š, u are doing a great job playing different characters Nish, narrating in a different way for ur differents stories, means, u are doing somthing wich less persons (fics writers) can do. ๐Ÿ‘
the part was a bit like always, just as u inform us, but in this update Nadia remembers a dead friend, erm... sorry, cudnt find better words to adress to a dead friend, actually, is that only.. na? ๐Ÿ˜† er, sorry.. just a question, that friend... was it human?
i knew! i knew that something wid the water for the plants wud happen.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†
and... PMS???? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ wowwww!! ๐Ÿคฃ - maybe she is a IF member!! โญ๏ธ Hinna, ur mysterious girl is closest that wat u think ๐Ÿ˜›
Nish, gotta pm you, remind me of it if i dont do it soon or if u, by chance, are a bit curious about it ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Š

wow thanks arch.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ hahah yeah dead friend๐Ÿ˜† She was a human๐Ÿ˜Š I havent figured out exactly how she dies.. but her death plays a very big part in the story. what PMS๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ i dont remember saying that๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ
ohhhh reallyy... acha acha.. I shee. so you guys think that this Nadia is an IF member or something??๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Change of title? Interesting...can't wait for more Nishi! You definitely have the potential and patience an author should! =)
-Aish

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