Vibharth FF - A Tale of Two Students! (Ch4 - Pg5)

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Wow I love how you portray the emotions..

The way parth was silently watching her!!

How parth despises Rahul!!😊

She is getting attracted to parth for sure..she looks for him in the whole crowd! These are the signs..

I loved their one-sided convo..parth did notice her but could not say anything coz he was stunned!

Vibha trying to give silent treatment to parth but just can't keep quiet haha😆

I will be waiting fr next!

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Garima04

@Garima04

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Now this turns so interesting!! Lovng it
You're so good yaar !! Impressive seriously very impressive
Update sooner
Thnks fr the pm 😊

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priyanka

@ankusanu

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Wohoo it becoming interesting day by day..😉 parth ka silent treatment is so unbearable to veebha 😳 she surely is falling fr him...n dat parth hes too much 😆 I hate dat rahul..he shld stay away frm veebha 😡
Loved d update ...really excited too see what veebha will do now...update soon..thanks fr update n pm
Tkcr 😃 hugsss

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serialenigma

@serialenigma

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

thanks for all your lovely comments, will get back on each one later today!

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Shaenma

@Shaenma

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

wow beautiful...👏

this is like a delicious mocktail with a personal touch...😉...loved the new avatar of vibha too...thanks for the PM buddy...eagerly waiting for ur next update now...👍🏼

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serialenigma

@serialenigma

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Shaenma
wow beautiful...👏
this is like a delicious mocktail with a personal touch...😉...loved the new avatar of vibha too...thanks for the PM buddy...eagerly waiting for ur next update now...👍🏼

most welcome!

thanks for the refreshing comment, mocktail!! haha

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serialenigma

@serialenigma

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ankusanu
Wohoo it becoming interesting day by day..😉 parth ka silent treatment is so unbearable to veebha 😳 she surely is falling fr him...n dat parth hes too much 😆 I hate dat rahul..he shld stay away frm veebha 😡
Loved d update ...really excited too see what veebha will do now...update soon..thanks fr update n pm
Tkcr 😃 hugsss

hehe thanks so much pri!! big hug!!!!

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serialenigma

@serialenigma

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies
Wow I love how you portray the emotions..
The way parth was silently watching her!!
How parth despises Rahul!!😊
She is getting attracted to parth for sure..she looks for him in the whole crowd! These are the signs..
I loved their one-sided convo..parth did notice her but could not say anything coz he was stunned!
Vibha trying to give silent treatment to parth but just can't keep quiet haha😆
I will be waiting fr next!

thanks a lot!! glad you're enjoying it so much!!

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serialenigma

@serialenigma

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Garima04
Now this turns so interesting!! Lovng it
You're so good yaar !! Impressive seriously very impressive
Update sooner
Thnks fr the pm 😊

aw, thanks a lot garima!!

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serialenigma

@serialenigma

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Angevil786
Waow brilliant update !! You write sooo well Rose thats one of the best works i got to read really..its truely amazing, you used the right word at the right moment which nail each scene..waow what to say...am waiting for the next update
Keep it up

thanks so much sam! glad youre enjoying it! best work, hmm not sure!

as long as you guys are enjoying reading it, ill write :)