Vibharth FF - A Tale of Two Students! (Ch4 - Pg5) - Page 5

Originally posted by: SalinaKhan

This ff is too good. I'm glad you've created new characters rather then using old ones. I like the idea of Rahul being Vibha's childhood friend. So his from a wealth background and is attracted to Vibha. I'm loving the chirpy Vibha, she's cute. If Vibha hadn't been a teacher in the show, would have loved her character to be as such.

Can't wait for the next part!!!

Originally posted by: .Shiva.

awesome rose i like it👏👏 vibha as a student awesome and parth as cold as he is amazing.

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Wow loving dis cute veebha..
Shes hallucinating parth 😉
n parth being parth is still angry man.
Excited fr HB/HG ..
Hope dis rahul gets punch on his face
Frm parth...lovely update rose.. 😊
Awesome job

Originally posted by: Shikha022

Another awsm update..

Like tat rahul's entry..

N finally akdu parth is reacting and saying something.. Tats nice..

M curious now for their story..

Looking forward for next update..

Try to update soon..

Tc

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

Hey i just read all 3 parts together!!

Its a very good concept..

well Parth and Vibha are similar but different thats the catch of the story right??

Chap 1: okay so first meet in train nice nice , vibha caring for him and dressing his wounds and our parth didn't even say thank you..vibha does not understandhis cold behaviour!! Nice start..

Chap 2: nice both parth and vibha save themselves from the seniors by hiding in a cupboard!!😆 Vibha takes credit and parth does not want so another difference! I liked the scene where she puts her hand forward saying her name but he does not and then she forcefully makes him shake hands with her..i imagine that vibha now😉

Chap 3: oh head boy/girl..ofcourse vibha is done but who is this new playboy Rahul..ohh parth u better watch out coz vibha is supporting him..last scene was nice vibha misunderstanding him and saying sorry..😳 She is imagining him , oh boy first signs of love!!

Uhh I forgot in which chappy the scene was there but i liked it most when vibha was hurt while dancing , parth helped her and then she came and told thanks to him coz she had forgotten to say it earlier😊

The innocence she has reflected here perfectly..and i liked this scene alot!!

So i know this became a very big comment , I am sorry but i love to comment big!!😆

Continue soon and thanks for the pm!! I am looking forward to this story.. As it is something very simple but in a totally different scenario!

P.S. Can u add Utkarsh too please??

Originally posted by: Angevil786

Waow very well written and awesome chapter i really like it.

I am gona repeat myself but i truely love the concept ! Vibharth both student is truely awesome..keep it up Rose

Originally posted by: mansinarang95

wow just loved the part..awesum rose.👏👏😳

waiting fr next 😳

Originally posted by: Shikha022

Wow rose...

Again superb..

I m liking this cold game..

BTW part complete h ??

Jo b h superb h !!

Once again u portrayed very well..

Tc

Originally posted by: SalinaKhan

Where do you get such amazing ideas from 👏??? I could just continue reading if the chapters kept coming 😆.

Looks like Vibha is beginning to develop feelings for Parth. He seems to have a hold on her. Hope this boxing match is going to change Parth's behaviour towards Vibha.

Will be waiting for the next update😉.