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Posted: 10 years ago
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NEW JOURNEY CHAPTER 8

Recap: rahul created misunderstandings between sidyali

Siyali was crying bitterly in washroom
I lovee you sid I really really love u like hell
I just can't believe what happened rite now
I want to believe in ur words
Me bharosa krna chahti hu tum pe
But nhi jhutla skti jo sb mene apni aankhon ke Saamne dekha...I can't ignore that
But I want to believe u sid...I really want to trust u
Me bus itna chahti hu ki...ye baat wrong proof ho jaye
Me apne dil ke sath sath apne dimag ko bhi manana chahti hu tht tum Sach bol rahe ho
But till then I have to ignore u sid
thts the only way I will get to know Wheather it's true or not
I Hv to ignore u sid
She was sobbing bitterly
Soon sid came nd started knocking the door
Sid: plz darwaza khol siyali...plz Siyali open the door for me
Siyali was still crying
Siyali: plzz sid...mujhe thodi der ke liye akela chod do...please I beg u sid plz leave me alone this time
Sid thought it's better to give siyali some space at this time so he left

IT WAS NIGHT
sid was sitting under the tree just thinking about what happened...tears flew down his eyes...but he didn't wanted to loose hope...he can't let siyali go so easily...no his love wasn't tht weak tht any third person could break them ...he was determined to prove himself innocent...so he wiped off his tears nd thought of how he could proof himself right in front of siyali

NEXT DAY
Everyone was entering the assembly hall
Sid nd siyali both entered at same time
Sid looked at siyali
Siyali looked at sid
They both had an eye lock
But soon siyali bowed down her face to hide her pain nd left for the assembly
Sid also went inside

Anvesha: so students today I'm here to announce that ur next competition of this semester is couple dance competition
U Hv to take out one chit from this glass bowl nd the person whose name will come in ur chit will be us dance partner
Nd I will give this opportunity of choosing the chit to girls...how ever if ur not comfortable with the partner ur given then u can change it
First krissane went...nd it was utkarsh's name...she jumped in excitement
Niti was with charlie...Both got happy
Parth was paired opposite Esha
Finally it was siyali's turn for drawing the chit...she was praying for sid's name in it...as she opened the chit...she got really upset coz it wasn't sid's name ...it was rohan's name
Sid was paired opposite juhi
So anvesha asked: is everyone comfortable with their partners...or do anyone want to change their partner
Sid wanted siyali to say tht she is not comfortable
But she didn't said...she was just standing bowing down her head
Rohan thought: yess! !!! That was what I wanted...ab toh kismat bhi mera hi sath de rahi hai...ab dekhna sidharth Rajput me kese tere Saamne teri siyali ko touch krunga or tu kuch nhi kr payega
On the other hand juhi winked at sid but sid gave a very angry look to juhi
And they all left from their

AT GIRLS DORM
Niti : siyali kya hua tujhe...tune apna partner change kyu nhi kia...tune sid ko kyu nhi choose kia
Siyali began crying nd told her each nd everything
Siyali : I don't know niti...mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa raha...I want to believe sid but still I'm not 101% sure
I'm 100% but I want to be 101% sure neeti
Isliye me sid ko ignore kr rhi hai...I want him to be proved right...I want to satisfy my brain...I want to satisfy my heart
Niti: dekh siyali me hmesha se warn krti thi tujhe sid ke against...ki door reh usse...ki wo thik nhi hai...but aaj tujhe me bta rahi hu siyali...kyi baar hum kisi se itna pyaar kr lete hai ki ek choti si misunderstanding bhi sb kuch barbaad kr deti hai or tere case me bhi mujhe aisa hi lag rha hai siyali
Me bus yehi chahti hu ki jaldi se ye misunderstanding solve ho jaye or tujhe tera sid vapis mil jaye
Siyali: hmmm I hope neeti mera sid sahi ho...but jb tk ye poori baat proof nhi ho jayegi...I Hv to ignore sid
Chal neeti abhi mujhe dance practice ke liye jana hai I should leave now
Siyali went to dance room where Rohan was already waiting for her
Rohan: hii siyali
Siyali: hi
Rohan: soo how re u
Siyali: gud
Rohan: what happened...tum bde be mann se reply kr rhi ho mujhe...any problem
Siyali: no
Rohan: ok then we should start our couple dance
So as I'm ur partner...so give me ur hand
Siyali didn't wanted to but she had to
So she gave her hand
Nd romantic music was played
Now Rohan started moving his hands on siyali's waist...siyali felt very uncomfortable so she instantly moved his hands aside
Rohan: kya hua siyali...whts the problem why are u acting like this...see I don't want to loose this competition...so plz u Hv to Cooperate with me
Siyali nodded ok.
Nd they again started now siyali hv to control herself...
So as theme of dance was intense romance love...so she had to do this
Rohan moved his hands on her legs then to waist...while he was touching her...A drop of tear flew down from siyali's eyes...
She can't imagine any other guy touching her this way...she felt so unpleasant with his touch...she wanted sid to be with her here...she didn't wanted anyone to be in that place where only sid have right to be
On the other hand juhi to sid: chalo sid we are toh now partners...so come let's dance
Sid: look be in ur limits...apna ye jo dance wance krna hai na wo akele hi kro...I'm not intrested in this competition
Or tumhe kya lgta hai ki tum mere or siyali ke beech misunderstandings create krke jeet gyi ho? Never...me aisa kbhi nhi hone dunga...Sach toh Saamne aa hi jayega nd sid left from the room nd came across the room where siyali was practicing with Rohan
Rohan was touching her
Nd sid could clearly notice how uncomfortable siyali was feeling with his touch...he could see the pain in her eyes...sid really felt so jealous
Rohan did noticed tht sid was watching then secretly so he was touching her even more
Sid's eyes were growing red in anger...he punched his fist on the wall...but right now he could do anything
So he just left from their in anger

Then Rohan thought of exceeding his limit a bit more nd he moved his hands on siyali's neck now this was way too much for siyali...she pushed Rohan aside
Rohan: kya hua siyali...its a part of our dance step
Siyali shouted: dekho Rohan ye bhut jada ho raha hai smjhe...I'm not comfortable with it at all nd she just left from the room
Nd ran away towards principal's office
Sid saw her running towards the office so he chased her
Siyali went inside Anvesha's office
Sid stood outside the office to listen to what she came for
Siyali: good evening mam
Anvesha: good evening my child
Siyali: mam I came here to u to tell u tht I'm not at all comfortable with my partner while performing this theme of dance
Sid who was listening to her from outside finally felt so happy...
B4 siyali would say tht she is giving up for this competition
Sid instantly came inside nd said mam even I'm not comfortable with my partner
Siyali looked at sid...even she wanted him to appear at this moment nd it happened
Anvesha: so u both re not comfortable with ur partner so can u both become partners...I mean if u both are comfortable with each other
Sid: yes mam I'm comfortable with her
Now he was hoping siyali to also say yes for this decision
Anvesha: so siyali are u comfortable with him
Siyali after waiting for few seconds: yes mam I'm comfortable with him
Sid just felt so happy from inside
He realised tht siyali still trust him...he felt so good after a long
Anvesha: ok then best of luck for ur dance...I hope ur chemistry really works
Sidyali: yes mam we will try our best
Nd they both left from the office
Now they both were going to dance room
Both didn't said a word to each other
Sid knew tht if rite now he said anything or tried to clear out the matter then it won't work
He wanted a exact proof to prove himself right
So he didn't spoke anything
They both moved quitely ...lost in each others thought
They both were in pain but still their was something which was attracting both of them towards each other more
Then they reached the dance room together Rohan was waiting for siyali their
He saw both sid nd siyali entering together in the room
Rohan: hey siyali tum kaha chali gyi thi...or ye sid yaha kya kr rha hai
Siyali: sorry Rohan Bt I wasn't comfortable with u so I changed my partner...now I will perform with sid...u Hv to go to princi's office to choose ur new partner
Rohan: but siyali...ye kya baat hui...sb kuch itna perfect jaa raha tha...hmari chemistry bhi itni achi thi...so why u changed me
Sid: sun!!...usne decision le lia hai... smjha...ab tu nikal yaha se
Rohan left angirly

Rohan: shitt mera plan toh fail hota ja raha hai...itni badi misunderstanding create krne ke baad bhi ye log alag nhi ho rahe hai...pyaar kuch jada hi lgta hai in dono ke beech me
Bt badla toh me lekar rhunga...now I Hv to make some other plan

AT DANCE ROOM .
Now sid nd siyali started their dance practice
Their song was "Ek din teri raahon mein"
Nd theme was intense love romance

So now they started practicing...sid nd siyali were soo close while dancing... he was moving his hands from her legs to waist
Now siyali felt sooo good by his touch...she just closed her eyes to feel the magic of his touch on her
She felt so satisfied nd strong in his grip
She felt so special when he lifted her...she never felt like pushing him away...she could never ever feel the same magic...The sense of satisfaction with any other guys touch
She just can't even bear anyone else's touch
They intensely kept looking each other while dancing...held each other in strong grip...Both could see the deep love in each others eyes
It was just so perfect moment for both of them
But now time for dance practice got over
Siyali said slowly: I should leave now
Sid just said nothing...he just kept looking at her
Siyali bowed down her head nd went
As she went a drop of tear flew down from sid's eyes

Now Rohan planned something really harmful
Rohan had his group/gang of few frnds
He use to tell them everything
They were also villan like him only
Rohan to his frnds
Mene sid ko barbaad krne ki kosish ki...uski siyali usse cheen ke
Kuch hadh tk toh ye plan kaam kia but still it's not at all enough...unko thode din bhi nhi lagenge vapis ek hone me
So now I Hv planned something really destructive
Jisko chah ke bhi sid or siyali poori zindagi nhi Bhool payenge
His frnd: lekin bhai tu aisa krne kya wala hai
Rohan: me ab siyali ko badnaam kr dunga poore warrior high me or siyali ki barbaadi matlab sid ki barbaadi
They all laughed nd cheered to his plan
But their was someone who listened this
It was charlie...he quickly ran from their to search for sid but he couldn't find him anywhere around
In the other hand Rohan continued with his frnds
His frnd: but tu siyali ko barbaad krne kese wala hai.
Rohan: ye dekh behoshi ki goli...or ye dekh mera phone...ab tum smjh hi gye hoge ki me kya krne wala hu
His frnd: kya plan hai bhai...ye plan toh poori trah barbaad kr dega siyali ko
Rohan: hmm chlo now it's time to execute my plan...I'm leaving now

Now Rohan left...he saw siyali going to mess along with her water bottle
Nd he followed her
Siyali filled the bottle nd kept it on table nd began filling niti's bottle ...just then Rohan appeared b4 her
Rohan: hey siyali...I just wanted to say something (he was trying to divert her attention)
Siyali: haa bolo
Rohan: Wo siyali I wanna say sorry for what happened today...I really didn't meant to hurt u by my any of actions( Meanwhile Rohan mixed the pills in her water bottle)
He just secretly sprayed something unpleasant...due to which siyali started coughing hard
Rohan: kya hua siyali? Ye lo paani pe lo nd he made her drink the water in which he mixed the pills
Rohan: are u fine now
Siyali: yaa am fine
Nd siyali was leaving for her dorm
She was walking
Rohan was quietly chasing her nd slowly slowly she just fainted nd finally fell down
Rohan instantly lifted her up nd ran away inside a room b4 anyone could see
Meanwhile charlie found sid
Charlie: sidd Bro...siyali bhut bade khatre me hai
Sid in shock: kyaaa hua? What happened to her
Charlie: I don't know Bro...then charlie briefly narrated everything he heard of Rohan ...charlie heard till Rohan said I will ruin siyali...but he didn't heard his whole plan
Sid: ohhh shittt...siyali khatre me hai nd ran instantly in search of siyali
He was searching for her in every room

Rohan locked the door from inside
He kept siyali on the table

Then sid found a room whose door was locked from inside
Sid started knocking the door very hard
Sid: darwaza khol!!!!

Rohan listened his voice nd he instantly removed his tshirt
Nd moved towards the door
Rohan just opened the door a bit
Rohan: hey Bro plz come after sometime...I'm busy right now with my girlfriend
Nd he was going to again close the door but b4 Rohan could lock the door...sid kicked the door hard
Rohan fell on the floor
He instantly ran towards siyali
She was faint
Sid tried to wake her up by mildly hitting on her face
Sid: siyali uth...plz uth siyali
Bt she didn't responded
Sid in anger ran towards Rohan nd hit him hard
Sid: kya kia hai tune meri siyali ke sath bta...bta kya kia hai tune

Meanwhile charlie went towards siyali nd saw rohan's phone lying over their...me checked the whole phone
Charlie: Bro ye Rohan Siyali ka mms bnane wala tha but thank god we reached on time nd ye kuch nhi bigaad ska

Sid's anger was on top
We went on nd on punching him
Meri siyali ko badnaam krne ki kosish ki tune haa nd he kicked him hard on his abdomen
Tune hath bhi kese lagaya usko...hath chod tune uski traf aankh bhi kese utha ke dekhi
Aaj toh tu zinda nhi bachega mere hatho
Meanwhile niti also came their...charlie nd niti were trying to wake up siyali where as sid was on nd on beating Rohan
Niti splashed water on the face of siyali nd finally she regained conciousness
Siyali was totally unaware of what was happening
Siyali: me yaha kese aayi...Niti ye sid Rohan ko aise kyu maar raha hai
Ye kya ho raha hai yaha ye sb neeti .
She was shocked
Sid saw siyali gained conciousness but he didn't even wanted to spare Rohan
He ordered to neeti to take siyali to medical room asap
Nd kept beating Rohan
Charlie nd niti supported siyali nd took her to medical room as siyali was still not fully concious
Siyali: neeti plz bta mujhe ye sb kya ho rha hai
Niti : sb btaungi tu ek baar chal
Nd they took her to medical room Nd there she was given medicine
Just then utkarsh came to medical room
Utkarsh: siyali me kbse Dhundh raha tha tujhe...tu thik toh hai na .
Niti: haa ye ab thik hai
Utkarsh: isko kuch hua toh nhi na niti.
Niti: nhi isko kuch nhi hua
utkarsh: or ye Rohan kaha hai mujhe btao..he asked angirly
Siyali : koi mujhe ab btayega ki ye sb kya ho raha hai...nd why was sid beating Rohan so badly
Utkrash: siyali...mene toh Rohan ko apne dost se baat krte hue suna hai
Wo bol rha tha ki mene sid se uski siyali cheen li lekin wo dono alag hi nhi ho rahe
Or phir usne bola ki me siyali ko badnaam krunga poore warrior high me...Rohan ko pta nhi kya galat femi ho gyi ki tu or sid pyaar krte ho ek doosre se lekin jb mene ye tujhe badnaam krne wali baat suni toh me Ek dum uske piche gya tujhe bachane ke liye
Lekin wo Rohan pta nhi ek dum kha chaalaki se gayab ho gya or me usse Dhundh hi nhi paya
Iss Rohan ko toh me nhi chodunga
Siyali instantly started crying
Siyali: matlab niti sid sahi tha...usne mujhe dokha nhi dia...or mene sid ko uss din itna suna dia
Sid loves me so much...why he loves me so much...I don't deserve his love neeti she was crying bitterly
Utkrash was shocked to hear all this
Utkarsh : kya siyali...tu or sid ek doosre ko pyaar krte ho
Siyali: bhut pyaar krte hai hum ek doosre se utkrash...lekin me sid ko deserve nhi krti
Utkrash: ye kya bol Rhi hai neeti...isko bta ki sid sahi ladka nhi hai
Niti: tu pagal ho gya hai utkrash...sid pta hai kitna pyaar krta hai siyali se...aaj agar wo na hota toh siyali ke sath pta nhi kya ho gya hota
Utkrash: lekin neeti usne hmare sath hmesha kitna galat kia hai..tu bhul gyi hai kya
Niti: me kuch nhi bhuli hu...or me bhi pehle bilkul teri trah sochti thi or kbhi sid pe vishwas nhi krti thi...lekin usne aaj meri soch badal di hai or mujhe yakeen hai sid teri bhi soch dheere dheere jarur badal dega
Utkrash didn't said anything nd left from there nd saw sid badly beating Rohan
He was continously saying...himmat bhi kese hui meri siyali k sath aise krne ki
Aaj nhi tu bachega
Utkrash was really confused
On one hand he remembered what bad things he did with him nd his frnds parth nd niti on the other hand he couldn't even ignore his concern for siyali...he even remembered the moment when sid helped him nd got his best frnd ayaz expelled from school. He just left from their in his thoughts

Precap: The dance competition
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Loved it , it was truly awesome 👏
So excited for the next chapter , please continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Superb !! Infact marvellous
Just Loved everybit of it
Jealousy trust love anger..wowww!!
You're a beautiful writer !! Bow down 👏
Continue writing
Pm me whenever you update..would love reading it !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: sidyali.ad

Loved it , it was truly awesome 👏

So excited for the next chapter , please continue soon

Thanks alott 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Garima04

Superb !! Infact marvellous
Just Loved everybit of it
Jealousy trust love anger..wowww!!
You're a beautiful writer !! Bow down 👏
Continue writing
Pm me whenever you update..would love reading it !!

thankuu soo much 😃😃
I will pm u 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
it was just awsome👏👏👏
the scene were just perfect 😳

And their feelings/emotions

eagerly waiting for the next update😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: anglisharma

it was just awsome👏👏👏

the scene were just perfect 😳

And their feelings/emotions

eagerly waiting for the next update😉

Thanks alot dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Omg Omg Omg what an update 😲 👏

Anger, jealousy, sadness, confusion all in one 👏

While i loved Sid in this update..i dint like Siyali as much...maybe it was that she trusts Sid but still wants him to prove himself it would have been better if she offered even a little support rather than the silent treatment and avoiding Sid i mean she dint even protest when Rohan was chosen to be her partner?

Im disappointed in Siyali in this update...poor Sid was left all on how own..if Siyali was in Sids position would she be happy that Sid is avoiding her amd asking her to prove herself? NO!


Finally Uttu is realising Sids goodness...but keep him away from Sid for a while 😆


Please update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really love d way u started to describe siyali pov wer she confused with 2 D (dil n dimag )
Also love siddharth as he didn't chased her or u can say going behind her to get prove himself
Rather he gave her tym. Amazing emotions
Den cum to dance competition
Accha hua partner change kiya
Love d song selection very passionate n for dem only .
Love sidyali practice session
Lyk man main ladoo phuta 😉
Grrr 😡 to Rohan
Kya maara siddharth ne
Lovely end tak phod dala bechara he don't sidyali love power or Wat?
Aaj Utkarsh ka tym late tha (otherwise hamesha galat tym pe ata hain)
Love d way niti took sids side
Now I want siyali take d initiative rather crying cause dey r made for eachother
Understand darling siyali
Do update next soon waiting for sidyali intense passionate romance
Make siyali b first n face it



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: OriginalBarbie

Omg Omg Omg what an update 😲 👏

Anger, jealousy, sadness, confusion all in one 👏

While i loved Sid in this update..i dint like Siyali as much...maybe it was that she trusts Sid but still wants him to prove himself it would have been better if she offered even a little support rather than the silent treatment and avoiding Sid i mean she dint even protest when Rohan was chosen to be her partner?

Im disappointed in Siyali in this update...poor Sid was left all on how own..if Siyali was in Sids position would she be happy that Sid is avoiding her amd asking her to prove herself? NO!


Finally Uttu is realising Sids goodness...but keep him away from Sid for a while 😆


Please update soon 😳

Hahaa thankuu sweety for this review
actually I wanted siyali nd sid to be separated for some time so that they can experience how it feels when they aren't together...in this way they can understand each others value
Especially siyali...I kept Rohan as his partner so that she could experience how it feels when any other guy touch her
in this way she will value sid more now
nd her trust will be doubled

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