BACK TO WARRIOR HIGH AFTER VACATION-FF ||Part 3 Updt Pg7|| - Page 5

Originally posted by: Helping_angel

Angela's letter was in my ff 😆

Anyways awesome update

Brilliant

Waiting for krissanes party

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

res for both the updates

wil edit this soonish😳

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Hello There

Its good to c many stories based on season 2!!!

Missing this show like hell!!

Especially sidyali!!!

Now coming to the chappies!!

Chapter 1

I loved d beginning!!

Niti telling stories abt WH to the other students n d orphanage!!!

Typical Niti!!

Both siyali and sid r damn sad and broken!!!

Aww my poor babies

Anvesha knows that something s wrong wit her grandson

So vibha s back n WH🥳

Thats good!!!

d Krissane-Utkarsh parts wer good😆

Krissane winking at uttu😆

well written gal👏

Chapter 2

Fabb Chappie again!!

its as if m watching d show😳

Sid doesnt want to hurt siyali but he s helpless

so d students r back at WH!!

so kriss s throwing a party!!!

Eagerly waiting for itt!!

continue soonish and do pm me if possi

Aishu

Originally posted by: WhisperOfDreams

Girl I love you!!!

This update!!! Brilliantly scripted...!!! I donno where u get such ideas..I wish CVs do too...

Uttu-Krissane so cuteee...

SidYali u nailed it babe...the hurt...the emotion written on their faces right to the very end...u captured sidyali so brilliantly...!!!

Sid n uttu...Sid is being a cute older brother...I would love to see der bond in future...

U have written so beautifully...it makes me happy reading it..such a pleasant surprise!!<3

Regards

Safrena

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Girl, this chapter was so better since it wasn't confusing when it came to dialogues and am so happy for you!! :D

This was a well thought out chapter, equal amounts of importance was given to everyone and I loved it!

It felt as if I was watching it all happen in front of my eyes. Charlie and Parth animosity was a bit of a surprise, because normally Charlie would only do that if Sid was actively involved in such a situation. Here, Sid wasn't so.. :D

Anyway, he called Utkarsh a kid! 🤣 Jeez, it looks like Utkarsh didn't here it, otherwise, he would've unleashed another one of his arguments! 😆

Krissane sharing a smile with Siyali.. Aww.. That was so sweet! It reminded me of them joining hands to berate Sid for his senselessness when it came to being considerate about people's feelings.

Niti is as usual the patakha and I could literally hear her scoffing at Krissane and saying that dialogue of hers out loud. "Utkarsh ko gift deti h, aur tujhe smile!" 😆

And last, but not the least, Urmila's welcome to the students! Pssh.. Here, her voice was echoing in my mind as I read the whole speech, every voice modulation of hers was present, and even the Ghetto way she said "ya'll"! 😆

Good chapter!

Annie

Originally posted by: mansinarang95

wow dear..it was amazing..😳😳

loved it totally..

very well written👏👏

continue soon..waiting eagerly 😃