Krissane TS ||To Realize|| #2 on Pg 3 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I have been silent reader .
I have read all ur ff based on other characters and this one I just happen it to read it today
Girl!!
U r truly a gifted writer.I am in awe of ur flawless writing.
really liked ur vocab as it really shows that u know how to describe a person's emotion.
Krissane going through the emotional trauma due to breakup and she is more engulfed into sadness as she accuses Angela as if she has murdered her own parents .
brilliant update.
keep up the good work👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angevil786

Waow dear you wrote it beautifully and not only because of your school book. You are damn talented, you get Krisane character shade so well..

Amazing update keep it up
And thanks for the pm


😳 Thank you! Ah, I am glad you liked the way Krissane was portrayed here. I hope I didn't mess it up, anywhere.
And you're welcome! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki01

Awesome dear👏

Kriash ur fav pair or sidyali or vibharth😳
Mine is vibharth and I write on them...


Hey sweetie! 😆
Aww.. thank you, girl! KriArsh actually.
Uh huh? I'll check it out sometime! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was just awesome...well written.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshirox97

Wow! Beautifully defined Krissane!!!!


Thank you! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lunalovegood

I have been silent reader .

I have read all ur ff based on other characters and this one I just happen it to read it today
Girl!!
U r truly a gifted writer.I am in awe of ur flawless writing.
really liked ur vocab as it really shows that u know how to describe a person's emotion.
Krissane going through the emotional trauma due to breakup and she is more engulfed into sadness as she accuses Angela as if she has murdered her own parents .
brilliant update.
keep up the good work👏


Hey, Luna! Yeah, I've seen you around in SH forum. 😊
Seriously?? Wow, am flattered.😳
Isshh, 😆 *cheeks burning* Thank you so much! When you have the means to access internet and books, then learning becomes so much easier. Thesaurus is definitely of big help when writing serious stuff, or just to increase your vocabulary.
Krissane was cruel on the show. Though she had that sweet face of hers, it couldn't erase the facts that she had played a big role in verbally abusing people, even the ones whom she calls 'friends'. I figured maybe here I could use that to advantage and strike her with an impromptu realisation of it all. And Utkarsh uttering it all, just sped up the process.
Thank you so much! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The feels.
Girl you have this wicked way of wrenching out my heart with a couple of words.
I love the fact that you are writing a Krissane centric thingy right now because she is just adorable and OMG you made me cry!
The last conversation between KriKarsh made me tear up for realz.
Lovely!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Firstly, lemme hug you
*squeeze*
I love love love the way you add layers to a character that the CVs never bother to, the way you pitch the character and give them a certain charm.
You have a way of making us care about characters like Kris who would be written off as immature rich brats.
I love that about your writing.
So many feels that I am incoherent now.
But one more thing.
Nice use of the text book reference.
Tu hi re! Great Jugaad!
Teach me your ways
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

The feels.
Girl you have this wicked way of wrenching out my heart with a couple of words.
I love the fact that you are writing a Krissane centric thingy right now because she is just adorable and OMG you made me cry!
The last conversation between KriKarsh made me tear up for realz.
Lovely!


I squealed when I saw that you had posted on this thread! 😆 Ah, you are so freaking chocolatey for making my day with your comment, chica! 🤗
Yup, the feels!
Ah, pshh, you're way better, chica! Why? 'Cause you stick to reality more than I do, and even make sure to show the darkness that lurks behind every character! :* :* You've helped me see that not everything is rainbows and sunshine when it comes to romance. And cliches are just out of the question! XP 🤣

Ahh, the girl has so much ****ing potential!! There. I screamed it out loud! Being shallow also has its depths. 😆 Ah, how poetic, ain't it?

Oh my! Please don't cry, chica! *hugging you tightly*
That conversation was just.. it could be written in so many ways. I wanted to add more and literally clarify everything and put more sense into Krissane and have Utkarsh yell more, but the reality quotient would just fall off of it, since in reality not everything can be said in time. Even if you do, there is always some hindrance, like the second person having major doubts and not believing the first person.
Ahh, come here, you!! *pulling you in for a bear hug*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

Firstly, lemme hug you
*squeeze*
I love love love the way you add layers to a character that the CVs never bother to, the way you pitch the character and give them a certain charm.
You have a way of making us care about characters like Kris who would be written off as immature rich brats.
I love that about your writing.
So many feels that I am incoherent now.
But one more thing.
Nice use of the text book reference.
Tu hi re! Great Jugaad!
Teach me your ways


*tilting my head to the side* We're already hugging, Ashu! 😉 😆
Urm.. I first felt that maybe, it would be unnecessary and just stray from the actual point I want to convey. *sighing in relief* I'm glad it's working out! 😎
Heehee... Even I have a little bit of Vidushi in me! 🤣 Jugaadu! 🤣


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