OS Vibharth before and during vacation...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So here goes my version of the Vibharth storyline before and during the vacation period... As inspired by ANKI!!

So its the last day of school before the vacation period begins. Parth is sad that he will not be able to see Vibha everyday. Vibha is happy that she will get to go home and spend time with her family. Two very different and opposing thoughts in their minds...

Parth goes to the staff room to see if Vibha is there. He walks in and sees Vibha sitting on a chair next to Rishab sir. He first hesitates whether or not he should talk to her, but then moves towards her and gathers courage to say something...

Parth - Vibha Maam...
Vibha - (turns at looks at him, she is surprised to see him) Yes Parth
Parth - Maam, mujhe aapse baat karni thi
Vibha - Yes Parth
Parth - Woh... (looks at Rishab sir, who is reading his notes)
Vibha - Yes Parth
Parth - (yeh Yes Parth, Yes Parth ke alava kuch bolengi...) Maam...
Vibha - (she sees him fumbling) I'm busy Parth, can you come back later?
Parth - Later? When Maam?
Vibha - I will talk to you after my class

Parth thinks the class is in the afternoon, and he can't wait for that long. He makes a sad face, looks down and walks off slowly. Vibha is not happy seeing him sad and leave. So she gets up and pretends she has some work. She follows Parth, who is walking away towards the playground...

Vibha - Parth?
Parth - (looks back and is happy to see Vibha coming after him) Maam...
Vibha - Woh, I'm sorry Parth...
Parth - Its okay
Vibha - Bolo, kya bolna chahte the
Parth - Aaj school ka last day hain, phir do mahine ke baad hi aap milengi... (looks down and feel sad)
Vibha - Haa, woh toh hai...
Parth - Pata nahi kaise pass honge itne saare din
Vibha - Main toh bahut khush hu, kitne dino baad Dadi ke saath gappe maar sakungi... Aur phir Mummy Papa ke saath baith kar quality family time spend kar sakungi...
Parth - (realizes that he should be happy that he will be meeting his Mom too, and after so long, he will get to spend time with her, but his sense of sadness for being away from Vibha seems to be taking over... He feels that she clearly won't miss him as much and feels more dejected...) Ha, shayad aap sahi keh rahi ho... (he starts to walk away)
Vibha - (smiles as she feels naughty teasing him, but as she sees him walking away, she feels sad) Arey, Parth, ruko to...

Parth stops but doesn't look back, he just wants 2 months to start quickly and end quickly... Vibha realizes that being with her family will bring her happiness, but she too will be sad that she won't be able to see Parth everyday...

Vibha - Parth, meri taraf dekho

Parth doesn't turn around, so Vibha goes to face him...

Vibha - Parth, main to mazak kar rahi thi
Parth - Main mazak ke mood main nahi hu
Vibha - Achcha theek hai
Parth - Itne dino tak mil bhi nahi payenge...
Vibha - Kisne kaha nahi mil payenge? Of course milenge...
Parth - (finally looks up at her with a sudden glow on his face) Kya? Sach?
Vibha - Ha, kyun nahi?!
Parth - Aap mujhe holidays main milogi?
Vibha - Ha, hum koi na koi rasta dhoond nikalenge, hai na?

Parth nods and smiles.

Vibha - Dekha, haste hue tum kitne achche lagte ho
Parth - Sirf aap hi hain jo mujhe hasa sakti hain, woh bhi itni jaldi!
Vibha - Ha, woh toh hain, warna tum hamesha ek dum serious rehte ho
Parth - Pehle boring, ab serious, aur bhi kuch baki hai kya?
Vibha - Ha...

Parth looks down thinking she will start saying about how he's an angry young man and all his weak points, which he believes there are many of... But she starts saying something else, and he is surprised...

Vibha - You're caring, sincere, loving...
Parth - Really?
Vibha - Ha, aur cute bhi... (she ruffles his hair and he doesn't like it)
Parth - Please, main cute nahi hu!
Vibha - Woh toh tum ho... (she tried to pull his cheek but he moves away and holds her hand)
Parth - Apko bahut maza aa raha hai na.
Vibha - Ha... (she laughs)

He smiles seeing her laugh and thinks it will be nice to see her during the holidays... But how and when?

(next part coming soon)

Edited by rosabelle - 10 years ago

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ankusanu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWWW dis os ws cute...
I ws jst smiling throughout reading
Dis...veebha ws teasing parth..
N.calling him cute..
Thank u rose...
Nice job done dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Definitely was a cute OS & the way Parth was behaving was cute. Are we ever going to get this in the show..really want to see all these wondeful ideas incorporated in the show.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankusanu

AWWW dis os ws cute...
I ws jst smiling throughout reading
Dis...veebha ws teasing parth..
N.calling him cute..
Thank u rose...
Nice job done dear


hehe, yeah, want some cuteness and some playfulness!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SalinaKhan

Definitely was a cute OS & the way Parth was behaving was cute. Are we ever going to get this in the show..really want to see all these wondeful ideas incorporated in the show.


pata nahi serial main hoga ya nahi... khwab main hi sahi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww cutest part..
loved it rose the vibha was teasing aww 😳😳
well done👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansinarang95

aww cutest part..

loved it rose the vibha was teasing aww 😳😳
well done👏👏


thanks mansi!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So nice dear 👏
Part cute haha 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all a big big thank u rose😃 I just loved it...amazing...awesome dear...
I luvd the way vibha teasing parth😳
Parth's reaction that she gonna not miss him and that he is serious...boring part 2gud darling...
M waiting for the next part...
Parth was cute...
It was cuteness...sweet overloaded one...m smiling alot👏⭐️😳
I simply loved it babes...truely loved it😳
U got inspired by me lol...I didn't said anything dear😊
dedicating my name was not required...if u havnt written then also I would have said this things🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very sweet and cute OS.
Can't wait to see what they do to make sure they get to see each other😊😊

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