Charlie...Secret Admirer :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii peeps :-)
M writing on charlie...as I already wrote on SID and PARTH BODYGUARDS

According to me Charlie is Secret Admirer...
Here I go...
Hope charniti fans and readers like it...

The train started...he was running...while one person was crying and sitting on floor that was NITI
Yes...He was the first one who touched...lifted up his lady...he lifted her up and boarded the train...

When he saw her...he found a soft corner for her...
While everyone was making fun of his love...hanging and passing her like a ball and wen leave her..she screamed and sum1 catched...she felt she was in sum1s strong arms...he felt bad for her...may be liked her from their first encounter...

He raised his hand first to befriend NITI...she accepted it with a smile...
She too liked him coz he was muscular...in short he was niti's sunny deol...
He admired her beauty...stared at her...alwz talked her in private...

During fresher's party wen he hurted her by saying infront of his friends that he won't even think of dating her...
She was hurted...she didn't expected that bt niti chngd her behaviour towards him...

Whenevr he tried to speak to her in alone...she replied In rude...she kept saying everytym that he don't have gutz to say infront of his friends thats y talking to her in alone...

Her words kpt hurting him bt yet he didn't give up...

There memo were sweet too...
During earthquake...it was niti who unbuttoned his shirt which got stuck and helped him out and her intelligence...which made him fall more for her...

Bt still her love behaved rudely...
The dream sequences in corridor of him wiping her face with towel or in lib where he is lifting up dumbells and their ishq wala love...was so so sweet

His feelings grew more and more for her...
He helped her when she can't get the things where her hands nvr reached...

He helped her in pasting the poster on wall for her bestie siyali during HB HG compt...
That moment wen both after a long tym shared a smile and glue bottle and that hanki...

Sumwhere...she too loved him..she melted
On party night...while coming out of washroom she collided and that hold was so so cute and their eye...
The party night wen she yelled at him abt not telling the truth that they were not invited...he put up the courage and said that he likes her alot...he likes spending tym with her...he likes to be around her bt she won't understand...

Niti's heart melted...she felt bad and thought that he likes her...sum1 is there who likes her...

Their Cadbury chocolate bar scene in classroom...he shared it with her and cleared her lip which had chocolate with thumb and then licd his thumb...

When he and his bestie with gang beat her close friend parth...she avoided him again...
He didn't gave up...while she was taking food for Parth...he helped to open the door and before that he kneeled and confessed that he LOVES her...
She blushed...melted again...

Their sharing of apple in medi room and her desperately waiting outside to see him outside medi room...

Little did she knew...that her mam won't stand for her...

They were exposed...in classroom evry1 made fun of niti and he stood like a dolt...who didn't uttered a single word...she was shatterd...

Wen his bestie came to know...while he was staring her during dance classes. ...he immediately confronted him and took him to her and apologised for it...
He said the truth that his father is short heighted like niti and he had been made fun during his school day's and so he didn't accepted her infront of every1

She pushed him and went away saying that she can't even think of a guy who can't even love his DAD

He was shatterd...infact both were shatterd...
So...he was the secret admirer in WH in s1...
Charniti love was pure...clear...bt charlie didn't stood up for her...her insecurities of being accepted by every1...

Hoping in s2 charlie to stand up for niti and win her back😳
Hope u liked it...don't bash me...I tried my best to write best...

Ty
Ankita or anki





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ankusanu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ong anki ..tu toh mast likhti h..
Grt post n yes i agree
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful very well written !!!!
Even if i am a Vibharth hard core crazy fan i read it because you wrote it and i truely enjoy it...you are very talented keep on writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankusanu

Ong anki ..tu toh mast likhti h..
Grt post n yes i agree

lol...thnk u so much dear...it's a big compliment for me😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angevil786

Wonderful very well written !!!!

Even if i am a Vibharth hard core crazy fan i read it because you wrote it and i truely enjoy it...you are very talented keep on writing

lol...tysm dear...it's a great compliment for me...u r forgetting that m a vibharth fan too😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was so beautiful..everything is bang on..thank you..hopefully he will change in s2
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki01

lol...tysm dear...it's a great compliment for me...u r forgetting that m a vibharth fan too😳


i know Sweet Anki😉 and i found it very kind of you to write about other jodis also even if they are not your favourite..very well done !! Your very talented
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aartee22

That was so beautiful..everything is bang on..thank you..hopefully he will change in s2

tysm so much dear...it's a big compliment and relief and a positive response from charniti fans😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angevil786


i know Sweet Anki😉 and i found it very kind of you to write about other jodis also even if they are not your favourite..very well done !! Your very talented

oh that's vei sweet of u too dear...tysm for the compliment😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow ya anki superb...👏
I really like thi..❤️
U some up so beautifully..👍🏼
N really hope at least sesn to he will be able to use his brain..😡
Again waaha Miss RW..😳

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