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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome. loved it. fantastic story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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no proper vibharth scene 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

sidyali scenes were perfect !!
utkarsh's emotional break down was heart wrenching !!
manik n nandani , dhruv and alya , abhi n kabir nnn vibha n parth scenes were "short" but cute 😉
n navya's dialogue "Hume toh aap dono ki jori bikul DDLJ ki Raj aur Simran jaisi lagti hai"

that was true navya !!
loved the way u portrayed such emotional scene but vibharth..
plz proper scene !!
ps : finally u updated..was missing ur updates🤗
next update shd be fast !!(if possible ;) )
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful update
👏👏👏

Keep writing...I'm waiting😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 11:-
(Soon the train reached Jaipur station ;the place which had different memories of the three warriors Sid, Siyaali n Uttkarsh. )
Sid :- God yeh toh so rahi hai how do I wake her up now.
Uttkarsh :- Bro tu isseh le kar ja Gopi kaka ke paas main aur baaki dadi ki body ko le kar aate hain.
Sid :- Ok bro main isseh le kar jaata hoon but u guys cum fast haan.
Manik :- Bro don't worry hum sab aa jaenge u go...
Sid :- Hmmm...
(Sid took Siyaali in his arms n went towards the platform where he found Gopi kaka n some other men. Except Gopi kaka n two mens all the other mens where evilly looking at his love so he protectively held her more tightly )
Sid :- Namaste Gopi kaka...
Gopi :-Kaisa hai mhara ladesar...
Sid :- Main accha hoon kaka aur aap batao.
Gopi :-Main bhi bikul theek hoon... aur je thari bhidni hai ke.
Sid :- Haa kaka yeh Siyaali hai jiske baare mein maine aapko bataya tha per woh kya hai na isseh bahot neend aa rahi thi toh maine isseh godh mein utha liya.
Kaka :- Accha baki sab kahan hain beta...
Sid :- Woh aa hee rahe honge kaka...
(Soon Fab5 & Navni arrived along with Vibharth, Charneeti,Uttkarsh n other teaching staff)
Sid :- Yeh lo kaka sab aa gaye...
Uttkarsh :- Ok chalo guys let's get going sab three groups mein teen cars mein jaengi .
(All went into the respective groups :-
1st group was of Sidyaali, Charneeti, Parth n Uttkarsh along with three mens Gopi kaka,driver n one other man
2nd group Fab,Navni n two mens; one was the driver n other man...
3rd group was all the teaching staff along with three people ; one driver n two men. Scene shifts to 1st group where Sid is holding Siyaali cause still that evil person was staring at Siyaali. Soon Siyaali woke up with a jerk)
Siyaali :- Sid! ! ! ! ! ! where r we rightnow...
Sid :- Umah... baby we r going to my village.
Siyaali :- What? Why didn't u waked me up
(At that point of time that person again started stairing at Siyaali which rose Sid's anger)
Sid :- Aap please apna dhyaan aage rakhiye pheeche nahi.
Siyaali :- Sid tell me na why didn't u waked me up.
Sid :- Aree baba u were sleeping so peacfully how could I wake u up. Aur kal raat ki wajah se tune neend bhi nahi liya so I ...
Siyaali :- (emotional ) Thank u... Sid...
Sid :- Shhh... u do so much for me can't I do this much even.
Neeti :- Oye hoye kya baat hai kisi ko bada pyaar aa raha hai... nai Charlie...
Charlie :- Ya right kuch zyaada hee...
Sid :- Will u guys stop it?
Neeti :- Humne tera naam toh liya nahi toh tu kyu itna uchal raha hai.
Uttkarsh :- Guys enough now stop ... its not needed now.
Sid :- Uttkarsh shaant ho ja zyaada stress mat le.
Uttkarsh :- Hmmm...
Siyaali :- Uttkarsh tujhe hum mein se kisi se bhi tumhe koi baat karni ho na we r there for u no matter what.
Sid :- She's right Uttkarsh...
Uttkarsh :- Thank u so much n I promise whenever I need any one of u I'll surely talk.
(After two three hours they reached Sid's village where sone ladies who were stairing at all the girls n this was not at all liked by all the boys. Soon they reached at the entrence of Sid's house where a lady draped in sari with a warm smile was present with a arti thaal. She was wife of Gopi kaka n she welcomed all of them to their house. Parth went towards washing room to wash hus face but he found that someone was womating continuously.)
Parth :- Whose it. ..
Veebha :- Parth tum...
Parth :- Mam u... why we're u vomiting...
Veebha :- Woh mujhe disel ki smell suit nahi karti that's why...
Parth :- If u r not feeling well I can call the doctor.
Veebha :- Parth m fine now so don't worry.
Parth :- (crying)
Veebha :- Parth why r u crying... what has happened.
Parth :- Sid, Siyaali aur Uttkarsh ne apni family kho di mam abb toh mujhe dar lagta kahin main apni fa...
Veebha :- Parth aisa kuch nahi hoga stop over thinking. ...
(Veebharth went away from the place while on the other hand Sid & Uttkarsh were having difficult time. Siyaali was trying her best to comfort them...)
Siyaali :- Sid dekhna soon everything will be fine aur Uttkarsh tune kya saddu waali shakal bana rakkhi hai dadi ko kya aise rondu waali shakal se bye bolegi.
Sidkarsh:- Siyaali please...
Siyaali :- Aree but u...
Uttkarsh :- Siyaali please samjhne ki kosish kar...
Sid :- (angry )Aur tu itna easily kush kaise ho sakti hai Siya aisa lagta hai jaise she never mattered to u.
Siyaali :- (emotional ) Sid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sid :- Dam... yeh maine kya bol diya ... Siya let me ex...
Siyaali :- (crying ).
(She ran inside another room n fell on the bed crying very bitterly whereas Sid felt ashamed of himself )
Uttkarsh :- Bro tu pagal hai kya how could say it to her... wait a sec tu usseh pyaar toh karta hai na tu ya woh bhi...
Sid :- (emotional ) Uttkarsh! !!!!!!!!! I love her dammit but pata nahi kaise maine gusse mein zyaada hee bol diya...
Uttkarsh :- Bro ja kar usseh mana she must be very hurt.
Sid :- Main aata hoon...
Uttkarsh :- Mera muh kya dekh rahe jao abhi warna I'll break ur all 32 teeths.
Sid :- Haa jaa raha hoon.
(Sid ran into the room were Siyaali was crying bitterly. Sid started smiling when he heard her complaining to her self about him )
Siyaali :- How dare he think like that? Kya usseh sach mein lagta ki I don't miss dadi at all. Dadi aap batao don't I miss u hmm? He's very bad... what does he thinks of himself haa mujhe iss tarah se...
(She felt someone's wet kiss around her jawline. In an istant she understood that it was Sid. She tried to shoo him away but alas she could not as his grip was tighter on her)
Sid :- Siyaali m sorry baccha...
Siyaali :-(crying ) Leave me rightnow I don't want talk to you even for a sec...
Sid :- Umah... sorry... umah...sorry sorry sorry sorry ur baby is really very sorry but u know na gusse mein main kuch bhi bol jata hoon . Buss mere mooh se nikal gaya that's it I idn't really mean to sat that.
Siyaali :- (crying )
Sid :- Look at me Siya... at this point of time I really need u by my side... I know kabhi kabhi aise bhi time aienge when I would be angry on u for no reason but only u can handle me Siya. Don't run away from me otherwise I will have no one who could understand n stand with me in every difficult situation. Ur my support system cause agar tu mera support rahegi tabhi main humaari choti si family ko sambhal paunga otherwise it will break apart. Do u want ur baby to break into peaces just like a broken peaces of glass
Siyaali :- (emotional ) umah...umah...umah...umah... never n ever I can see u in that state aur main aisa kuch hone bhi nahi dungi pakka wala promise.
Sid :- So my apology accepted...
Siyaali :- Well not really ...
Sid :- Toh tu maan gayi na haan...
Siyaali :- Mmm u will get punishment for torturing ur love.
Sid :- Punishment? ????? What punishment will I be getting?
Siyaali :- Hmmm ... so ur punishment is that u will not skip any of ur meals because of dadi's death not even of a single time.
Sid :- Siya it's not po...
Siyaali :- I have not given u any choice...
Sid :- Fine... (faking anger )
Siyaali :- Awww... my Sid is so dam cute.
Sid :- Accha abb chal mujhe woh dhoti tie karne mein help kar de mujhe aur Uttkarsh ke ho hee nahi raha...
Siyaali :- Accha baba chalo otherwise u two will eat me up .
Sid :- What ?
Siyaali :- Nothing chalo now...
(Sidyaali went to Uttkarsh were he was waiting with the dhoti.First Siyaali thought to help Sid so she started with him first )
Siyaali :- Shirt utaro Sid.
Sid :- Kafi bold ho gayi hai ...
Siyaali :- Agh. . . . . . . . Sid why ur mind always flows in opposite direction only haa? Dhoti tie karne mein problem na ho that's why maine bola...
Sid :- Ok utarta hoon...
(Siyaali started tieing dhoti to Sid while he was busy in stealing kisses from her. All of sudden Krissane came n hugged Uttkarsh with a crying face. Uttkarsh hugged her back feeling content in her arms)
Krissane :- Uttkarsh itna kuch ho gaya n u didn't even spoke me for once. Why?????
Uttkarsh :- I really didn't wanted to bother you.
Krissane :- Is our love this much hollow?
Uttkarsh :- No Kriss it's nothing like that but u know me na jab koi cheez mujhse nahi hoti hai na toh main nahi bol pata hoon. Himmat hee nahi hui...
Krissane :- Abb main aa gayi hoo na now everything will be alright.
Siyaali :- Krissane thank God tum aa gayi abb iss dum box ko yeh dhoti tum hee pehna do.
Krissane :- M sorry Siyaali but yeh mujhe bhi nahi aata karne.
Siyaali :- Koi baat nahi main tumhe guide karungi pehnate waqt.
Krissane :- Ok fine ...

Precap :- Krissane tieing dhoti around Uttkarsh's waist with the help of Siyaali.
A very emotional break down of Sidkarsh infront of Krisyali.
N Krisyali also performing the burial ceremony along with Sidkarsh against the rulesof the society.
Hope to get good comments n reviews from u guys.
Edited by Sandhirrocks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Nice Nice !!
loved it❤️
Feeling nostalgic..Warrior High Pls come soon 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing .

heart wrenching update ...

sid n siyali bond is good .

hope u update next part soon ..

cont ..
stay bless..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 12:-
Siyaali :- Krissane haa idhar se ...
(Siyaali started indicating Krissane to tie the knot n within minutes she was done with it. )
Krissane :- Thank u so much Siyaali:-Ur most welcome Krissane.
Pandit :- Siyaali bitiya woh antim sanskaar ka waqt ho gaya hai.
(Krisyali indicated each other that they should handle each others boyfriend's cause rightnow they needed them by their sides. )
Krissane :- (emotional)Uttkarsh baby chalo we need to perform the burial ceremony na...
Uttkarsh :- (crying )But...
Krissane :- Uttkarsh chalo...
Siyaali :- Sid look at me...
Sid:- (emotional)Siyaali ...
Siyaali :- Sid just come with us dadi ki aatma ki shanti ke liye hume jana ho ga...
Sid :- (emotional )
(Krisyali somehow forced Sidkarsh to go with them to the burial ceremony. There Veebha, Kamini n other teaching staff was present along with Fab5, Navni ,Parth ,Charlie,Neeti ,Simmi ,n other student body with a tearful eyes. Pandit came n handed a clay pot to Sid for the ceremony cause Sid was the elder grandson of the family. He took a round across the burial n broke the pot with a blank look on his face. All were litterly on the verge of breaking any minute. Krisyali were still staring at their love cause they understood their pain.Now Pandit handed the flame to both Sid n Uttkarsh. Sidkarsh indicated Krisyali to come forward )
Siyaali :- Sid Uttkarsh how can we?
Krissane :- Uttkarsh we r fine with it.
Uttkarsh :- (aggitated)Tum dono ko sunai nahi deta kya come fast .
Krisyali :- But hum kaise...
Sid :- Will u both come n join or u want us to drag you both.
Villager:-Bawro ho gayo hai ke chora ;choriyan ya auratein antim sanskaar na karyo hai.
Sid :- Maine aapse ijazat nahi manga yeh antim sanskaar meri dadi ka hai toh main kisi ko bhi bulaun isseh aapko farak nahi padna chahiye n u both come now..
(That villagers went away angrily from there while Krisyali also performed the burialceremony long with Sidkarsh against the rules of the society. After performing the burial ceremony Sidkarsh fell with a thud on the ground n started wiping bitterly. )
Sid :- (shouted ) Dadi!!!!!!!!!!!!! A aaa aaa... why u left us dadi why ... ahahaa... mom u killed my girlfriend u took my happiness... how could u...
Siyaali :- ( crying ) Sid Shhh dadi kahin nahi gayi hai she is with us in our hearts in our memories... she can never leave us. Aur bhool gaye she is our matchmaker ...
(Sid just buried himself in Siyaali while crying bitterly n Siyaali just gave necessary pecks every now n then)
Uttkarsh :- (crying ) Krissane dadi. ...abb mujhe harr galti pe date ga kon... who will tolerate my tantrums. Dadi u can't just leave us like that please dadi aa jao...aaa haa...
Krissane :- (emotional ) Uttkarsh u no my mom says that jo hamare apne hote hain na they never leave us bass unki jagah rehne ki badal jati hai. Wo sky mein ja kar stars bann jate hain aur humein wahan se dekhte rehte hain.
Uttkarsh :- Sacchi mein...
Krissane :- Ur promise...
Nandini:- Yes they become stars just like my umma n uppa. Hai na Manik...
Manik :- Bikul so buddy don't panic Anvesha mam has still not left u guys...
Navni:-Aur matarani kabhi bhi acche logo ke saath bura nahi karti hai.
Alya :- Guys I can understand ur pain through which guys r going but trust when u have ur friends ,family n love together u can overcome any phase in ur life.
Mukti :- I know it's easy to say this but trust me u guys will come out from this phase very soon.
Abhi:-Aur maine toh apni death ko bahot kareeb se dekha hai aur jitna main jaanta hoon love ke aage even ur death seems smaller.
(Sid was still in Siyaali embrace not ready to break from the hug.)
Siyaali :- Guys thanx for being in the most difficult times.
Dhruv :- No need to thank us cause tum sab hamaare apne hee ho koi gair nahi.
Parth:-Chalo guys u four need some rest...
Neeti :- Oye jhonchu kya uski paas baitha hai haan.
Sid :- (annoyed ) Tujhe hum sab ke beech mein ghusne ki adat hai.
Neeti :- Looks dena bandd kar aur chup chaap chal aur tu bhi langur.
Uttkarsh :- (tearful smile )
Chup karegi...
Krissane :- Tu mere baby ko tang karna band kar.
Neeti:- Chipkali boli .
Krissane :- Hey u tikkhi mirchi...
Neeti :- Kya bola...
Krissane :- Wahi jo tumne suna tikkhi mirchi.
(N they both burst into fits of laughter which brought smiles on every one's face especially Sid n Uttkarsh who were not smiling at all from long hours .)
Kamini :- Chaliye vidyarthiyon kripya apne apne kaksh mein jaiye aur Veebha ji aap kripya hamaare saath chaliye humein aapse kuch kaam hai.
Veebha :- Ji mam chaliye .
(All of them left towards there room while Sidyaali ,Krikarsh n Neeti came with the kalash in their hand. Siyaali kept it carefully in the cupboard. Sidyaali went to their room to spend some lone time with each other while
Krikarsh n Neeti went to the leaving area to spend some time together. Sid was resting his head on Siyaali's left shoulder in the sleeping position ; in between he used to place protective kisses all around her face. While Siyaali used to make different pattern on Sid's hand with her soft fingers. )
Siyaali :- Sid...
Sid :- Hmmm...
Siyaali :- Abhi bhai ne kitni sahi baat boli na agar apka pyaar saccha ho toh apki death bhi choti padd jati hai.
Sid :- Siyaali woh chod na. . . . . .
Siyaali :- Sid why u'r ignoring the topic... do u fear that u'll loose me.
Sid :- (angry )Shut up don't ever dare to say like that .Tu mujhse door nahi rahi samjh gayi ...
(Sid fearcly grabbed her from waist n started kissing her madly like there's no tommorro . In between the kisses his tears used to land on Siyaali's eyes. Soon he left her lips ;his eyes were full of teas showing how emotional he was in terms of his closed ones )
Sid :- (emotional ) I don't fear to loose u but I fear to loose my breath. For the world u may be just my girlfriend but for me u r not just that but u'r my life jiski wajah se main zinda hoon.
If anything happens to u then I can't breathe even.
Siyaali :- ( crying ) umah... m never going to stay away from u so u better stop over thinking.
(Sid sat up on bed n lied Siyaali on his laps . Siyaali'shand were across Sid's neck while Sid's hand were around Siyaali's waist )
Siyaali :- Sid abb warrior high ke baad hum...I mean abb toh yeh hum sabb ka last year hai.
Sid :- Will leave India forever Siyaali abb hum sabb apni higher studies aur life wahi se suru karenge.
Siyaali:-But hamaari...
Sid :- I know but don't worry main,tu,Uttkarsh, Neeti & Krissane sab humesha ke liye wahi jaaenge.
Siyaali :- Warrior High ka principal kon rahega.
Sid :- Aree meri saddu amma kitna tension legi teri iss Einstein jaise dimaag mein.
Siyaali :- M not joking Sid main serious hoon .
Sid :- Ok baba sorry but on a serious note jo baaki saare members unn sabb ki permission se main Veebha mam ko yeh responsiblity dunga.
Siyaali :- M happy Sid but agar log Veebha mam aur Parth ke rishte ko point out karenge toh.
Sid :- Umah...Aree baba they love each other na aur love hamesha aapko uss insaan ke liye kare hone ke liye power deti hai jisseh aap pyaar karte ho. Tu aur main warrior high ke trustees rahenge but will stay out of India sirf zarurat padne par warrior high jaenge.
Siyaali :- (pouting ) Accha last question pucchun please...
Sid :- Umah...bikul puch.
Siyaali:- After how many years will u marry me I mean after 30 or 40's ya mere apne buddhe hone ke baad.
Sid :- Tu bol toh abhi kar loon main...Hmmm...
Siyaali :- Well idea bura nahi but u know na we both r still underaged for getting married now.
Sid :- Oho someone is desperate to marry me haa lagta hai Siddharth Rajpoot teri lautry lagi hai.
Siyaali :- Very funny...
Sid :- Aree bacha we will marry each other jab hum apne khud ki career set up kar lenge.
Siyaali :- I know but jab hum apne apne career mein busy honge we'll miss our college n school days.
Sid :- N I'll miss u too.
Siyaali :- Me...
Sid :- Woh jo all time akru bani rehti hai jab head girl banti hai.
Siyaali :- Abb role reversal ho gaya hai Mr cause abe all time akru tum bane rehte ho not me.
Sid :- Aisa kya. . . . . .
Siyaali :- yeah. ...

Precap :-Death ceremony gonna take place... plus Puja...
Some village people try to manhandle Siyaali & Nandini
All left for Dehradoon...

Hey guys kaise ho aap sabb. ...here we go with the update




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Posted: 9 years ago
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first time 1st comment of mine on IF :)
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Such a emotional update😭
So Veebha is principal of WH...Seems interesting😊

Loved the SidYali talk in bed😆

Waiting for the next update😉

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