forced marriage vibharth (dark story) chapter 1 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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do continue..
all vibharth fans will be waiting for update...
n nice story line..
tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
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welcome to the forum dear..love the concept..i loved these kinds of stories..happy u started with parth n vibha..vibarth rockzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1


In a big room where a young and an innocent girl is sitting with tears in her eyes looking outside of the window and thinking about how much she has suffered in these past few months. Vibha who was once a girl who never cried and always made people around her smile with her innocence was now crying every second of her life due to one man who is none other than Parth her husband.
Suddenly their was a noise that came in the room which startled Vibha which scared her and when she looked she saw Parth coming towards her...
Parth "Vibha u need to start eating cauZ I don't want my wife to look like a skeleton u are Parth's wife and it's high time u start acting like one...otherwise u know it won't be good for u or ur family
Vibha didn't say anything and started walking towards the closet and all of a sudden Parth grabed her arm and twisted it behind her back which made Vibha cry in pain
Vibha "u r hurting me let go of my arm"
Parth " when I'm talking to u reply damn it don't make me repeat last night again Vibha" Parth screamed
That made Vibha stop crying and she didn't say a word and she kept looking in Parth eyes...
somehow Vibha got some inner strength and told Parth "today I'm sure Parth u r ur dad's son because like father like son...both are abusive and vile"
Something snapped in Parth and at that moment Vibha saw a hand flying Which hit her right on her left cheek and she fell on the bed...
Parth " well u said right I'm my father son and I guess it's high time I should start behaving more like him and it's also time for u to remember ur place"
After saying this Parth left the room angrily and Vibha saw herself in the mirror with a bruised cheek and broken eyes...

Tell me how is it guys?
Sorry my grammar kinda suck
Edited by Sherry25 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its interesting, a total different Parth from the show. A total opposite. Does he love Vibha, or is he purely abusive? Love to know what will happen next. Will he change to a sweet innocent Parth. Waiting for the next chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story... well done! i don't ilke an abusive parth :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SalinaKhan

Its interesting, a total different Parth from the show. A total opposite. Does he love Vibha, or is he purely abusive? Love to know what will happen next. Will he change to a sweet innocent Parth. Waiting for the next chapter.


Thank u so much
Yeah actually I was into like a dark parth so thought of making this up
Parth doesn't love her he wants her and througbout the story he will be like this
Maybe in the future less dominating but he would never be gentle 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sherry25


Thank u so much
Yeah actually I was into like a dark parth so thought of making this up
Parth doesn't love her he wants her and througbout the story he will be like this
Maybe in the future less dominating but he would never be gentle 😊



So his an obsessive Parth! Very interesting concept. Poor Vibha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg parth hit veebha...
Vry different stry thank u dear ...
Lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow great..parth totally opposite..awesum 1..update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
nice story..
superb.. looking forward..
y the way y parth is so abusive ??
update fast !!
tc

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