saavan...vibharth OS :-)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii peeps :-)
M literally kinda vei busy bt currently my mood is vei romantic coz due to rain...so I thought to write an OS on vibharth romantic dance...hope u like it peeps...I want u peeps give true reviews...with bombastic words :-) it's not a part of my regular OS :-)

So here I go...

Kamini-vibhaji aap zara thoda jldi kijiye...wahan pr late nai krni h...waise aap ko bol k koi faiyda nai h...aap hain hi kaamchor...peon bhi... aap se zyda jldi kaam krta h...huh...waise accha h..aap ko bhi pta chle ki is school ki acchai k baare my...

Vibha-ji maam...bas hogya...
Kamini-in sabh cheezon k saath yeh parcel bhi lekr jaane h...
Vibha-pr maam..main yeh sabh akele...
Parth-staffroom k bahar se guzar rha tha...darwaza thoda khula tha...toh saari baatein sunn liya...
Yeh kya...kamini maam aisa kaisa kr skti h..aaj toh barish bhi hone wali h n vibha maam ko itna saara samaan peon k saath kahan le jaane bol rhi h...mujhe unki help krni chahie...

Kamini saw parth and stopped him...
Parth-ji maam
Kamini-kch logon se akele kaam hota nai h...waise tm kahin busy ho...aaj toh sabhi vidhyartiyon ko chuhti mili hai...tm kahin nai gye...chlo accha h...waise tm vibha maam k saath jao aur haan...
Vibhaji...zara sambhal k...jldi ayega...aap k saath parth bhi jaa rha h...use koi takleef nai honi chahie...chliye jaye..

Vibha-yeh kamini maam bhi naa...smjhti kya h aapne aap ko...aaj toh hadd hi kr di...

Parth-laeye...mujhe parcel dijiye...pr maam itna saara samaan khn ?

Vibha-parth vo kya h na...Yahan pr ek chohta sa orphanage h...har typ k log rehte h...wahan bacche..senior citizens sabh hai..WH k yhn se har mahine donations and zaruri samaan jaata h...saying this giving a smile...

Parth-yeh toh bht acchi baat h...par maam aap ko kyun bhja...yeh kaam toh peon bhi kr skta tha akela...aaj toh pacca barish hogi and vo bhi iss waqt evening my ?

Vibha-yeh hi toh mujhe samjh my nai aata h..unko akhir unki prob kya h merese...chlo thk h...aaj yeh bhi kr lete h...pta nai..abh kya kya karwayengi yeh..
Waise tm toh sambhal k rhna...suna h..bacche bade shaitan h and aur tmhara gussa control my nai hota h...

Both were walking and finally reached...

Vibha-yeh lo...agye hmlog...
Parth-hmmm...
Vibha- telling the peon..yhn pr sabh samaan rkh do...aur aap jaeye and kamini maam ko keh dena ki yhn pahunch gya h samaan...hmlog aa rhe h...

Vibha-just abt to entr thr house...all the kids came running towards her and hugged her...
Vibha-arey arey...ruko ruko...aap sabh ek ek kr k apna naam btao...aur yhn k bade log khn h...

Kids introduce themselves and said di aap bht pyaari ho and pointing towards parth who was standing next to her...aur yeh bhaiya kaun h...
Kids-bhaiya aap bolte nai ho kya ? Itne chup ho...
Listening this...vibha started laughing and said yeh bhaiya ka naa mood thik nai h...warna bht hi acche h...chlo chlo tmlog mereko and bhaiya ko pura orphanage dkhao...

Parth-was lost in her cute innocent gestures and her gelling up with kids...
Suddenly a cute gal comes and pulls parth's shirt...stretched her arm's wide..saying to lift her up...

Parth-was lost for a while and yes...he initially hesisted coz nevr ny1 had so politely askd him...he was feeling happy coz he didn't had ny sibblings...

Vibha-turned around and saw parth and was surprised...
Parth was lifting that cute gal and walking...

Then...an old lady enters the hall and saying all the kid's. ..jao yahan se..sabh ko paresan krte ho...jao...

Parth put that gal down and that gal gave a kiss on his cheecks...thnk u 😳 aap bht acche ho...aap di ka zarur khayal rkhna...she went

Old lady-sorry beta...yeh bacche tmdono ko paresan kr diye...
Vibha-arey nai nai..aisa kch nai h...infact humein toh bht accha lga...school se saara samaan aa gya h and abh hum nikalte h...

Old lady-arey beta...abhi bhi toh aayi ho dono..thoda ruk jao..accha tmdono kch khaa k jao...she forced...they couldn't say no
Yeh ladka tmhre saath hi padhata h school my ? Asking vibha

Vibha-ji..she was abt to say till then
Old lady-mtlb senior h..bht pyaare lgte ho tmdono sang my..

Both vibharth shocked yet blushing...

They got confused coz parth was in his casuals not school uniform...

Lo beta nasta kr lo..

Thunderstorm and it started raining...
Vibha-oh no...barish shuru hogyi h...abh hm wapis kaise jayenge...

Old lady-koi nai beta...thodi der baad chle jaana tmdono...bas 10min my barish bandh hojayegi

Old lady to parth-beta tm kch khaa nai rhe ho...kch taklif h kya ?
Parth-ji nai...bilkul bhi prob nai h...
The trio had a talk...

Suddenly again that cute gal came and this tym she pulled vibha to come along with her...

Vibha-arey arey khn le jaana chahti ho...
Girl-di chlo naa...barish my bheegtee h...sabh aap ka wait kr rhe h...bhaiya aap bhi chlo naa...

Vibha-nai nai..thand lg jayegi and she went to bring all the kids bck to room...who were dancing in the lawn...she knew parth doesn't likes to gel up easily and won't like this thing...she was concerned for parth...

Parth too went at bck of her

Vibha-shouting...andar aa jao...bukhar hojayega...sabh k sabh andar chlo...
All kid's came together and dragged both vibharth's hands and took them in the lawn...both were already wet coz it was raining heavely...

Kids surrounded them in circle and yes...vibharth were in middle feeling abit awkward...bg song played...

Vibha- forgetting that parth was there...she too started dancing and enjoying with them...
Parth- who ny how came bck from lawn and was too wet...standing one side watching her love getting wet and adoring her...he was lost in her...
vibha-parth wahan akele kya kr rhe ho...aao...bheeg toh gye ho..thodi khusi dene se...dusron k lie krne...se sukoon milta h..aa jao...dkho in sabh bcchon ko yeh tmhe kitna pyaar se bula rhe h ...

Parth - couldn't control and he too came and this tym...he lifted the kids and smiled...making that childish expressions. ..kids loving him...started dancing and vibharth danced few steps together and too close ones..

Vibha-accha hua...tm aa gye wapis...dkho yeh bacche kitne khush lag rhe h...saying this in his ears and suddenly she got a push from back from one of kids and there she came close to parth...slightly her lips got brushed on his cheecks...they were in hugging position...

Parth-her hairs were coming on her face...slightly removing it...they both were lost into eachothr...yes...like a love birds😳 he saw...she was looking dam beautiful. ..the rain drops made her look more elegant...beautiful. .giving an extra shine to her rosy lips and that creamy texture of her skin...

She was lost in his eyes...which said evrythng that yes..he is the only guy meant for her...the guy she dreamt off...her hands reached his cheecks and his hand on her waist holding tightly...yes...they were inches apart to have their first kiss...they didn't kissed bt yes. .their lips touched...
They were so lost in eachothr that they didn't knew when alll kids left and went inside the room...

Thunderstorm...
Vibharth back to senses...immediately feeling awakward...went inside the house...they both were drenched fully...

Old lady-who already saw the spark in them...didn't said nythng...only wished in her heart that they look adorable. ..soon they be one 😳

Vibha-hm chlte h...saying to old lady...abh barish bhi bandh hogyi h...
Parth-saw her shivering...who already removed his jacket and had kpt inside before getting drenched...wrapped around her shoulders...

Vibha-thank u
Parth-nodded and blinked in yes...

Old lady-pr beta...aisi haalat my
Parth-aap chinta mt kijiye...bagal my hi h school...aur main toh hoon in k saath. ..kch nai hone dunga...aap bas apna aur baaki logon ka khayal rkhe...bht late ho rha h...

Vibha-yeh sahi keh rha h...
Old lady-thk h...waise jbh parth h...tbh mujhe koi darne ki zarurat nai h...

Vibha looked at parth and said in mind...haan iss k hote hue mujhe kbhi dikhat nai hogi...yeh hi toh h vo...naa jaane kyun..main khinchin chli jaati hoon iss k pass...itna perfect koi kaise ho skta h...bahar se sakt aur andar se utna hi narm...itna komal ki koi bhi pyaar krne lge...haan yehi h vo...

Parth-too looked at vibha and they had a eyelock..he said to himself...aap ho toh main hoon...aap k hone se mera hona likha h...aap k aas pass rehne se mujhe sukun milta h...aap mere lie bht zyda special ho...aap hi ho mere lie bane...aap k bina main adhura hoon...
Old lady-ahem...ahem...

Vibharth bck to senses and was abt to go...
The girl who forced parth to lift her up...came running and took one hand of vibha and one hand of parth and mde them hold their hand...said aap dono promise kro ki aap dono ek dusre ka khayal rakhoge...ek dusre ka saath nai chodeoge...kbhi jhagda nai krge...agr hua toh manaoge...

Vibharth-just for that girl said bilkul princess😳

Girl to parth-aap di ko hamesha se aise hi pyaar krte rehna...

Vibharth shocked and blushing...

Girl to vibha-di aap bhaiya agr kisi baat pr gussa ho toh manna zarur...vo dkhte h sakt pr andar se vo aap ko bht pyaar krte h...

Aap dono ek dusre k lie bane ho...chlo mereko pappi do dono...
Vibharth togethr gave a pappi...aww

Vibharth thinking that this girl said their inner feelings...the cloud's were fading away and they were deep in thought's and remembering their memo and their shower moment...

Gudnite parth...
Parth-gn

Gn frnzzz

Don't kill me if u found me boring and yes peeps...it's mix of hindi and English so ignore it ..m listening romantic songs. ..weather is romantic over here...rain has entered wohooo

Ty
Ankita or anki😳



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Semeira thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woaw👏
That was truely awesome !!😳 Ireally enjoyed reading it, very well written very sweet and gery romantic😊 keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angevil786

Woaw👏

That was truely awesome !!😳 Ireally enjoyed reading it, very well written very sweet and gery romantic😊 keep it up

Tysm dear...m glad u luvd it...it means alot to me😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tysm dear...it means alot to me...m glad u luvd it😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice, romance in the rain. I must say that child was very intelligent. seriously you have some amazing ideas, hope we get scenes like this in WH.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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great job anki!! loved reading the romantic story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow yaar..that was jst amazing..baarish ke mausam me romance..nd that too vibharth...i toh have gone in the imagination land...really, anki it was so sweet...i wish this particular scene to be shown in WH for sure...keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely work anki..
Beautiful os dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SalinaKhan

Very nice, romance in the rain. I must say that child was very intelligent. seriously you have some amazing ideas, hope we get scenes like this in WH.

Aww...tysm dear😳 m glad u loved my ideas and luvd it...yeah...now a days Kids are too much intelligent...i too wish this scene to hppn in WH 😳😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sherry25

That was sooo romantic :)

tysm dear😳 m glad u luvd it and felt romantic😳

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