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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

nice part👏

loved itt😊

thnk u so much dear🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SalinaKhan

NIce update Anki. So the jealousy track has started. Now we have suspense of why Vibha is crying. Do update soon 😉.

thnk u so much dear 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 18

Recap-anki tnsd and drags parth from fire escape room and vibha to be stunned.

Now...

Parth-wait ! go slow,and wats so imp

Anki-look champ ! its vei imp & i don't know how to say you,i mean its good or not to say coz i don't have any1 whom i can say such things (she was rubbing her hand and tnsd like hell )

Parth keeping hand on her shoulder relax and now say wats ur prob ? y u freaking out so much

Anki-look ! don't be angry bt the thing is as u know that i was saved from falling from stairs by Neil sir,wen he holded my waist,he pressed it harder,which was not a normal one,his touch is different

Parth was getting angry

Ankita-look parth i know u will be angry bt listen to me,nothing happend to me,m f9 ,utkarsh came on time and i was relieved.

Parth-is this a small issue ! r u mad,u know how much i care abt u guyz,

Ankita-i knew it,u will scold me,it wasn't my fault,tears were rolling down,u alwz scold me,

Parth-ok,m sorry ! wiping her tears bt u shud be careful !!!

Ankita-parth pls warn vibha maam,m sure she is in trouble,help her out,she was crying now and do u know the reason ?

Parth was mature enough and said nothing,she was missing her family and got emotional ( he lied coz he alwz treasured his and vibha's all moments to be themselves,he doesn't want to show vibha weak infront of others )

Ankita-i doubt on neil sir ! vibha maam is in trouble ! my all hopes are with you

Parth-it will be good if a lady says eachother their problems coz few things are difficult to express

Ankita-i know parth bt here i can only say u r vei close to her and its you who can save her,i mean,u understand hr and moreover she is teacher and if i say then she will say she is f9 ! she wont come to you & say her prob ! we womans are like this only

Parth looking at anki and says u have become too mature ! impressive,

Ankita-m serious

Parth-ok ! i know wat u want to say and thats wat i was saying you all before hand bt anyways thnk u so much that you shared and yup don't worry vibha maam is good & she is strong enough to handle all situations and i will surely say it !!!

They leave...

Now...

Vibha was checking all the dorms and saw parth standing in corridor in deep thought...

Vibha-parth tum yahan ? wat r u thinking ?

Parth-hmmm...nothing

Vibha-lieing from me ? looking at him and eyelock

Parth-i was thinking abt you "scratching his head"

Vibha smiles & blushes

Parth-how can i explain you ,i don't want your smile to fade away !!!( in mind )

Vibha-say ? comeon parth don't lie

Parth-yes...u know i don't lie

Pause...

Parth-so u feeling better right now !!!

Vibha-yup !!!

Parth-gudnyt with a smile and leaves so that she doesn't asks more question !

Vibha-gn

Next day...

In staffroom...

Neil-hello vibha

Vibha-hello sir

Neil-vibha can u pass the tea cup to me

Vibha- sure !!! as she was passing he touches her hand unncesaarily and hold for sec ,vibha slightly removes her hand without giving any expression...

In such a way neil leaves not a single any moment to touch her.some times in the taking papers,books,

One day it was enough...

During karate class...

He purposely touched unnecessarily her wrong body parts and pressed harder and which left vibha shocked and she cant even slap him infront of students and neil was taking advantage of it.she ran from there...

In staffroom...

Neil-wat happend vibha ? y u came here leaving the class in between and kpt hand on her shoulder

Vibha-slapped him !!! thrashhh !!! stop it MR NEIL MEHTA ,don't come near me !!! u r crossing your limits,i avoided from these days and said you stop doing it bt you are something else !!! i don't like sum1 touches me,how dare you touched me !!!

Neil-ok !!! so u got my intention...miss vibha this is wat you ladies have to do while sum1 tease you ( he showed as if nothing happend bt in mind how dare u slapped u have to pay for this )

She leaves from there...

In library...

Parth was searching for book and he heard the door to be stammed hard.He came out and saw vibha crying.He went towards her and said wat happend ?

Vibha hugged him and says u were right Parth !!! i was wrong , he is not good man,i trusted a wrong man.

Parth was to respond of her hug bt they heard someone passing through corridor and he drag her to book sheleves and askd-wat happend ? r u alright !!! has he done anything wrong with you ( he was tnsd and angry too )

Vibha-parth vo...vo ( in mind no ,i shud not tell parth abt it otherwise he will seriously mess in fight with him )

Parth-vibha tell me (angrgly)

Vibha-nai...

Parth understood and says so u aren't comfortable working with him right ? during karate class right ?

Vibha-yes...i slapped him and explained him everything coz now she cannot control and lie from parth anymore...

Parth was getting furious and angry like hell and he hugged her tightly and said "don't worry,u did well "😡

Vibha-parth u wont do anything plz,u know this job is vei imp for me ( crying )😭

Parth-ok..now relax !!!! wipes her tears and sides her hairs !!! ok,now he wont cross his limits..relax !!! if he does next tym i wont leave him (hugged her tightly )🤗

They leave from there...

Little did they knew wat was coming that night for them...everything gonna change their lives...

Vibha in library...

Vibha had to prepare notes for her class...she was busy preparing in it...

Here the devil comes...😡😡😡

He closes the door...

Vibha tensed and said y did u closed the door and he switched off the lights..😲

Neil-oo vibha !!! how so easily u thought i will forget that slap in morning...he came near her and touched her hands you are sexy

Vibha shrugs his hand...😡

Neil-wohoa...fire !!! interesting !! baby i have a deal for you ?

Vibha wants to go bt he stops her and she again wants to slap him bt this tym he twist her hand back...

Neil-wat u thought !!! i wil allow you to slap me again ? no baby !!! who will save you from me ?

So the deal is...look...u want money to clear the debts of ur family losses and run ur family right ? see you better give bed touch and i will free you and moreover i will get you better job and more money ? promotion too !!!😉

Vibha-ssshhh...yuck..how you dare to think abt it ? ( she only thinks that where are you parth,plz come parth otherwise today i wont be anymore vibha,tears roll down,if my love is pure he will come to save me )😡

Neil-oo comeon.. stop crying coming new to her...u mostly hangout or seen with that student wats his name "PARTH" look he is too boring and he wont fullfill your desire...i like ur hotness,ur physique.the way u dressup...u are killer...so accept my deal

Vibha-pls let me go (crying harder) ( she was helpless..only thing she rememberd was that his DAD AND PARTH )😭

Neil-naa naa...u hurted my ego !!! all women and ladies never said me NO and its you did and m liking that game bt u reuined it by slapping me...see m so good giving you option

Vibha-i will complain regarding you to Principal and file a sexual harassment case.

Neil-oh really !!!! u forgot miss vibha...Rajputs are in my Personal contacts and moreover my DAD is the trustee of this school !!! so nobdy will believe you,infact you will be in trouble and little bit respect you have that too will be gone...

On the other side...

Parth was not feeling good.His heart was beating faster and restless,he decided to go out and read any book in lib,he was thinking abt Vibha & fuming with anger that how can neil touch her !!! he wanted to smash his face bt just for vibha"s sake he didn't !!!😭

In lib...

Neil has coverd her mouth so that she couldn't shout...well you thought this plc lib !!! no prob

Vibha-screaming and kicking him bt he was karate champ so all efforts of vibha was going in vain...

Parth was walking in corridor and finally he saw that lib door is not locked from outside and he pushed the door to enter and found that its locked from inside and one thing came in her mouth "vibha"

He pushed the door and breakd it and enterd and on the otherside neil was trying to molest her and vibha to plead and cry to stop it

Parth saw and without any thought he grabbed his collar and threw neil from her.How dare you ?

Parth-punched him bt no use of his punch😡

Neil-look !!! get out from here !!! its between her and mine

Parth-u bloody animal !!! he kept hitting him and a last kick...

Hugged vibha and said "m there...dont cry..

Vibha-parth..issne mere saath ( parth covering her by her dupatta )❤️

Parth and neil got an fight...

Parth-how dare you ? u want to have bed with her right ? kaminey ? kya bola tha !! huh !!

Neil-punched !!!! look u will die !! m a champ and u r just a bloody loser

Parth-he kicked him and start punching him harder

On the other side...

Utkarsh got up and every1 by the noise...

Utkarsh-parth and vibha maam

Parth and neil kp fighting.Parth was bleeding badly bt he didn't give up.His punches,kicks were strong too !!!

Utkarsh-we need to stop it...

Anki-wait utkarsh,let him fight

Utkarsh-r u mad anki...its ur champ "PARTH"

Anki-i know its Parth!!! Don't stop him today ! nothing will happen to him...see the love in the eyes he has !!! love has so much power that can do anything !!!right now vibha maam need us !! when it comes to their loved ones,every man can do anything,let his frustration,jealsy,anger take out (tears rolling down)😭

Parth and neil keep fighting deadly...

Parth picked up the crystal glass and hit his head and says how dare you !!! how dare you try to touch her !!! she is not a toy !!! she is everything to me !!! u bloody !!! he kept kicking him !!! he kept pucnching , hitting him...do u think womans are toy ? huh !!! u bas***d😡

Neil was black belt,he too start hitting him,he hit in his abbs and parth blood ozzes out.

Vibha-screamed PARTH

Parth -he too smashed his face by giving a punch.how dare you came near her,i wont leave you,u moron,u dog !!! i will kill you

Sid and utkarsh came in between and stopped the fight.

anvesha came and see this and was shocked PARTH VIBHA NEIL..

anvesha-tk parth to medical room...

Parth was loosing consiouness and simply holded vibha's hand and vibha too holded it.

Parth-maam !!! nothing happend

Vibha-cryingling ,Parrrttthhh ( rubbing his forehead )

Parth fall unconsinouness...

Vibha-Parrrtthhh ( her voice gone & stoned )

Meanwhile every1 was there...

Vibha was stoned and parth was fell unconsuous and neil was bleeding badly too...

Parth in medi room...

Parth was injured badly and he hasn't came to senses right now...

Vibha who was lost...she became stoned.She was in such a state that she herself didn't knew wat was going on around her.

Parth was being medicated in medi room and other side vibha walked slowly taking small steps "lost" she sat on the floor and was stoned ( no expression )🤢

Utkarsh and ankita saw her...

Utkarsh kept hand on her shoulder and vibha jerked back,moved back and said don't touch me,stay away

Ankita and utkarsh crying...

Ankita-utkarsh we don't have any other option than to say

Utkarsh-wiped his tear and nodded in yes

Utkarsh-maam Parth has not still yet come in senses

Vibha-no reaction

Utkarsh-maam Parth ! Parth ! parth

Vibha -parth (murrmerd )

Ankita-maam Parth,he needs you !! maam see parth in medi room

Vibha-looked at them "Parth ! where is parth ( anki & utttu words were echoing in her ears ) she coming back to senses.She ran towards towards medi room and while running she stumbled bt balanced by utkarsh & anki,vibha was all frozen and her body was numb.🤢

Vibha enterd the room & saw here was his love lying in bed with bandages & stitches .

Parth who saw her and he was still angry and got up from bed bt nurse stopped him & said "u aren't well,u have just came to senses.He didn't listened to nurse and his eyes were bloody red,though he was hurted bt for him vibha was everything & her safety.

When nurse again stopped him.he got more angry and this was noticed was anki & utkarsh so utkarsh said to nurse & doc we need to talk abt something can u please outside not infront of my bestie.

Doc & nurse agreed and left...

Vibha took small steps towards parth.He too stood up and take small steps towards her,though it was difficult for him bt this pain was nothing infront of vibha.

He hold her arms tightly and said "m gonna kill that bas***d,how dare he touched you,m going to kill him now,i wont spare him anymore.He was abt to go bt vibha hugged him tightly and said "its my fault,it was my fault Parth,my fault and kept saying same thing"🤗

Parth knew she is not in a state to understand anything and so to calm her "he hugged her too,wraping her arms around her"

They shared a passionate hug and crying (tears of pain with love)

He made her sit on bed and he too sat.vibha kept her head on his shoulderand tightly holded his shirt collor to feel safe.❤️😭

Parth turned towards her and said "it wasn't ur fault,no it wasn't vibha,u didn't did anything wrong,trust me " he cupped her face and were looking at eachother and lost" there was a pause..their eyes were speaking everything.Tears were rolling down from eachothers eyes and they had touched their heads,he wiped her tears with his thumb.He saw she had hugged him tightly & had slept by keeping her head on his shoulder.❤️

He thought not to disturb her anymore & not good to leave her alone.He too was feeling weak,he slowly made vibha lay on bed and then he too layed down.

Vibha had kept her head on his chest and one hand holding his collor and one hand holding her kurta,where as parth kpt his one hand wrapping around her waist to mke her feel safe and other hand he holded with vibha's hand.

Parth holding his hand and said "u r vei special for me,i cant see u in pain " tears were rolling down his cheeks and slowly slowly his eyes were closed too.❤️

They both had slept peacefully...

Utkarsh and ankita were outside the medi room and not allowing anyone to enter.

Utkarsh-u were right and we have to unite vibha maam & Parth

Ankita-yes and what i thought and wat has happend😭

Utkarsh-relax,everything will be good🤗

Vibha and Parth slept peacefully !!!

This night was most dreadfull night for everyone and nobody exactly knew what has happend between NEIL VIBHA PARTH ! only ankita & utkarsh knew it !!!

Even the universe was smiling at this bt why ? nobody has the ans of it ! may be something was coming good stored for them or something was being pointed !!!

now a days...still womens are thought as toy for such scoundrels in our society...when we will get justice ? when women will be respected !!! there is a devil..then there is a angel too...

good looks...charming educated people in society thinks so narrow..in schools and companies we see such peeps..there is such a big question mark of womans safety..wat do u expect from others whom you dont even know...the peeps in the roads and during travelling...

ty

ankita

precap-parth bring back confidence in vibha😳

hope u like it...

it was my fav part..i wanted to write on this..how strong woman like vibha feels helpless when they fight back to it 😊




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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was a brilliant update👏👏

I loved it !!!!!😃
I enjoy each part of it you are truely an awesome writer.

Please never stop writing you are very talented and people like us should have the right to enjoy your work as much as we do with this OS😃😉

Very well done👏
Will wait for next update
Edited by Angevil786 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

loved how they both slept on the bed, vibha's head on his chest!

brilliantly written anki!! well done!! everyone's losing hope, so its commendable for everyone to keep writing and keep vibharth alive in their own special ways!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update!!😊
You depicted a very important issue in such a nice way..
I am happy vibha was not harmed in any way and parth fought for her..
They both surely bring out the best in each other and are each other'so support systems.😳
I liked how anki informed parth about neil 's character.!!😡
Glad both are safe but I really hope the truth comes out and also loved vibharth moments in this!😉
Waiting for next!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Action packed update. Marvellous, mind blowing, amazing 👏👏!! Anki, this is one of your best updates, loved it.

Neil turned out to be a big time villain, what a monster. Aww and Parth Vibha's night in shining armour, he took all that beating for Vibha. Oh he is furious😡!! Neil deserved everything he got.

Our poor Vibha is left in distress😭. The bonus point in the whole traumatic experience was Parth and Vibha slept together peacefully.

Anki is playing cupid 😉.
Edited by SalinaKhan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nicee👏
hate that neil guy😡
thank god parth saved vibha😊
continue soonish😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Angevil786

Res

This was a brilliant update👏👏

I loved it !!!!!😃
I enjoy each part of it you are truely an awesome writer.

Please never stop writing you are very talented and people like us should have the right to enjoy your work as much as we do with this OS😃😉

Very well done👏
Will wait for next update

tysm dear😳 m literally vei glad that u luvd it..I will take it as compliment😃🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

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loved how they both slept on the bed, vibha's head on his chest!

brilliantly written anki!! well done!! everyone's losing hope, so its commendable for everyone to keep writing and keep vibharth alive in their own special ways!

tysm dear alot😃 that part was mine fav too...will take it as compliment😃🤗

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