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Posted: 10 years ago
great one yaar..i love dit totally but you made me cry!😭
Utkarsh's speech was so heart-wrenching and perfectly-written just mind-blowing👏 his emotions were depicted beautiflly!!
then Vibha consoling parthh when he got emotional aww and they hug😳☺️
after that treat treat yay..parth is giving a treat😉
parth telling vibha that she made it possible was so cute! saying bestie hayee😆
then vibharth stealing glances and leg scene of Sidyali lol🤣
neil chee yaar ghatiya lagta hai from last dialogue..😈
I guess parth's suspicions are correct , he is not a right guy..and how dare he tell parth things about boxing😡
Waiting for suspense to unfold..😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update👏
continue soonish😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Angevil786

Interesting update...

Neil Mehta han ? Pata nahin kiu mujhe kamina lag rha hai😆 i have a bad feeling regarding him like Parth..
Very nice update..quite quick...but acha tha..

Meri bohot baari complain hai tujhse..

Anki itni kam kiu dikhi ???? I love Anki character i want to see her more

Keep it up ! Waiting for next update😃

tysm dear😃 i myself dont know abt neil😆 ur point has been noted maam😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

wah anki kya baat h !!! i loved dat parth threw water on vibhas face..naughty parth 😉

awww uttu n his speeech ...dat ws emotional...n mess scene ws gd all couples were enjoying...

n ab yeh neil ko kya chahiye..y is he eyeing vibha 😡 marr pdegi isko toh parth se 😆...jldi update krna...its getting interesting now

tysm dear😃 neil ko neela asmann chahie😆 parth toh naughty tha hi pehle se😉 updating next part now
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mansinarang95

wow anki as always i loved it..it was awesum.👏👏😳.aww utkarsh speech emotional one..parth sad vibha consoling..and that pizza scene soo cute..😳😳

soo parth will gonna be jealous hmm..new entry neil mystery man..😕
continue soon waiting now..😉😃

tysm dear😃 itna emotional hona sahi nai lol...mystery man...updating😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SalinaKhan

I like Neil, his going to make Parth very jealous. All the girls like him & he likes Vibha. This is going to make Parth furious! His calling Parth a kid🤣..Love it Anki. Well done. Amazing update 👏. Update soon. You left it at a cliffhanger.

tysm dear😃 parth to be furious good...kp thinking😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rosabelle

nice job anki... why do you want to stop! don't!! you write so well :)

next update - suspense, haha!

tysm dear😃 m stopping coz m getting busy too much 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

great one yaar..i love dit totally but you made me cry!😭
Utkarsh's speech was so heart-wrenching and perfectly-written just mind-blowing👏 his emotions were depicted beautiflly!!
then Vibha consoling parthh when he got emotional aww and they hug😳☺️
after that treat treat yay..parth is giving a treat😉
parth telling vibha that she made it possible was so cute! saying bestie hayee😆
then vibharth stealing glances and leg scene of Sidyali lol🤣
neil chee yaar ghatiya lagta hai from last dialogue..😈
I guess parth's suspicions are correct , he is not a right guy..and how dare he tell parth things about boxing😡
Waiting for suspense to unfold..😎

tysm dear😃 m loving ur every detail of my os veiws...kp motivating me..next part now updating dear😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

awesome update👏

continue soonish😳

tysm dear😃 updating now next part😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 17

Precap-entry of Neil,girls going gaga over him..

Now...

After vibharth left from lib...

Parth in dorm...

Parth was not liking Neil sir at all,specially when he was being over friendly with Vibha.He was having doubts on him bt how can he say to Vibha that he is having doubt on him ? these thoughts were haunting him. He was upset bt y ? he himself wasn't aware y he was not liking Neil Sir with Vibha ?

Utkarsh-kya hua Parth ? aaj toh mazza aagya treat lekar lol

Parth-dkh main abhi teri faltu backwas sunne k mood may nai hoon

Utkarsh-ok bt kya hua...jbh se vo neil sir aye h tu bada gussa ho rha h silly baat pr ? sabh thk

Parth-haan sabh thk h ? accha chal so jaate h...

They were sleeping...

Parth thinking abt vibha...she is very innocent..i need to tell her to stay away from neil sir

Vibha in her room...

She was remembering the moments she spend with Parth today..suddenly she smiled remembering how Parth reacted to Neil statements...she was abit upset that how Parth would be feeling coz other than utkarsh and her,nobody teased him.

Next morning...

It was beautiful day...

Classes were as usual going..time for Maths class..

PArth checks the schedule & says maths class.His face got abit off due to Neil...

Neil entered the class...

Girls were gaga over him...few started adjusting their uniforms...all boys were wats wrong with the gals...

Afcourse Neil was tall..handsome..well dressed..his muscles were good..his hair were properly set and that cute smile made every1 fall for him.

Neil-so students before beginning and its my first class i would like to know abt u guyz...so letz start.

Gals started introducing and mean while Vibha was passing through corridor.he stopped her by excusing in class..

Parth saw this...he was jeals bt his mind said ok "she is a teacher so he might ask for help"

Neil back to class...

Every1 gave introduction...

Neil so letz start...

He started teaching and the bell rang...

Parth rushed to lib to talk to vibha...

Parth-assuring that none is there other than vibha...

Vibha-hmm Parth ? finding me ? so how was class with ur new Maths teacher ?

Parth-it was okay "making a not so good feeling expression" can we talk something else ? i don't want to talk abt him"

Vibha-y he is good and i don't know much abt it was sweet talking to him

Parth was jeals...giving a look to her

Vibha-wat ? so u r jeals that sum1 is there who has grt body and good personality after you

Parth m going...if u want to talk abt him then talk with sum1 else not me...ok m leaving...he left

That day went...

Next day...

After the classes...

Parth in gym...vei angry

He was hitting the punching bag harder...

Flashback...

Parth had went to talk to vibha in lib...

He was in good mood...he saw a chocolate box in her hand and said "how sweet so u brought chocolates as a gift coz i break record" so sweet with a smile" he took it from her ...wished you brought something else for me..koi nai i love it"

Vibha grabbing from his hand and said "no its for me..Neil gave it to me"

Parth-wat ! bt y ?

Vibha- i said No to him bt he kept on insisting so i had no choice to take it...actually he wasn't feeling well and moreover i helped him in school works so he gave me...

Parth -so u took it ? he insisted a bit and u accepted ?

Vibha-arey parth sunno toh...

Parth left from there without listening any her words and left without saying anything...

Now...

These incident made him furious too...y he is getting so close to vibha ?

On the other side...

Ankita was coming down from stairs and she had files in her hand..her leg was abt to get twisted and she collided with Neil sir...files fell on floor...

Neil holded her tightly and balanced her...helped he picking files.

Neil-dont be in so hurry..apna khayal rakha karo...he touched her shoulder and before he could say more...

Utkarsh-ankita i was looking for you..

They both excused and now...

Utkarsh-tu thk h na

Ankita-haan yaar bas yeh files pahunchi thi yahan..kch students ki files lekar jaani h...

Utkarsh-chl de mujhe kch files...

Ankita and utkarsh together "mujhe kch imp baat krni h"

Utkarsh-mujhe bhi...

They kept the files and now in corridor...

Utkarsh and ankita were talking

Utkarsh- r u serious...mujhe doubt tha

Ankita -mujhe bhi doubt h...so we need to talk solve it...u r inn right ?

Utkarsh-haan...accha tu chl..mujhe kch kaam h main ata hoon...

Utkarsh leaves...

Ankita entered gym room...

Kya zamaana aa gya h..

Kisi k dil jal rha h...

Koi ro raha h...koi khush hai...

Pyar may naa jaane log kyun jalte h...

Kisi ne sahi kaha h...pyaar my jalna bhi padhta h...

Parth -looking at ad...bht hi ghatiya h..aisa maine aajtak nai sunna

Ankita-arey tub hi naa...shakal dkh apni..hmsha gussa wala mode on rehta h...kbhi sweet hojayega kr..teri shakal bhi bilkul waisi h jaisi kisi ne dukh diya h

Parth-kisi ne koi dukh nai diya h...

Waise tu bta kahan h aajkl...sunna h bht aas pass nazar aati ho kisi k

Utkarsh enters...

Arey use kyun chila rha h...madam ko kaam diya gya tha...madam aaj stairs se girte hue bacchii h..waise aajkl school may koi h jo theka lekar rakha h sabh ladkiyon ko girne se bacchane ka...

Parth giving a look to ankita-u didn't said me ?

Ankita-relax champ ! aisa kch bhi nai h...he is a nyc teacher yaar...moreover he has good looks and teaches good...

Parth was again furious wat ? i don't like that sir...he is mysterious...he is weird...sumthng is there which you guyz cant see...

Ankita-champ...meri toh chodho apni fikar kar...khud ki toh pehle maddad karle...look at ur face still it has become fuming with jealsy...as if u love sum1 & tere saamne hi teri ladki ko koi pta raha h lol

Utkarsh and ankita gave hifi

Parth was lost in thought...

Vibha had enterd the gym bt seeing parth and ankita talking casually

Parth-bt still tc of urself...stay away from neil sir...

Vibha in mind-jo hua lib my uss k liye i came to say sorry bt yeh toh yhn norml h...mujhe toh itni baar nai bola ki vibha stay away from neil...

Ankita-its ok Parth...u care too much...which is harmful & u know that..so relax.

Parth sees vibha standing near the door...he was desperate to talk bt utkarsh & ankita stopped him

Ankita-utkarsh seriously tu kch kar iska..

Utkarsh-main kch karta hoon...

Vibha left from them...

Parth-ok...u guyz carry on...i have some work bye (he went fastly)

Before parth could stop vibha...a student stopped her..

Parth was relaxed ok...she didn't left...seriously need to talk to her...

Vibha was coming back to fire escape plc...parth pulled her arm and then before vibha could scream he covered her mouth...

He closed the door...

Vibha-wats this Parth

Parth- i need to say to something serious...

Vibha-wat

Parth-stay away from neil sir...he is not a good guy

Vibha-huh ! wats wrong with u Parth (thinking ok...so he warned me too )

Parth-wats wrong with me ? r u serious...giving her a look

Vibha-yaa...u have chngd alot...u r not my Parth whom i know...u have time for ur AD

Parth put finger on lips...ssshh ! i want to talk to you (he was holding her both arms tightly coming too close ) which gave a tickling sensation in her body while he touch her lips and they had an eyelock (ankhon hi ankhon may baatein teri..chlti rehe baatein..chlta rhe karwa..yehi dua..dadhke jiya ) they were lost into eachother and the flashback of their memories...

Parth breaks the eyelock and says "now listen to me...i want to say something"

Vibha not blinking for a sec nodes her head in yes" as still parth had covered her mouth with his hand.

Parth-look..u have to stay away from neil sir...i don't know how bt u have to...i don't like that man.He is not good,he is hiding something.Moreover i don't like when he talks to you much..so stay away from him

Vibha was happy that he said him to stay away from neil bt she rememberd AD and says so you can talk to any girl right and y cant i talk to my colleague ? she tries to go away bt he holds her hand and pull back and with a angry look says "listen to me carefully Miss Vibha Anand i don't care how you going to do bt you are staying away from him,i don't like at all when he touches you,the way he stares at you,he keeps on talking to you everytime,there are other teachers too in school "y not with them" "i don't know bt you are staying away from him "thats it"

Vibha was feeling abit happy that atleast they had few moments aback bt now she came to reality and says "no' "he is just a friend or say a collegue Parth" i cant ignore him" u r over reacting too much"

Parth-no "m not over reacting,its you who is doing it"its you over thinking my friendship with AD "y don't u understand he is not good,m not able to explain you bt understand its he is not good man.He is being over friendly with you,i has been hardly been days and he is being too friendly with you"i don't like my bestie talk to some1 i don't like.

Vibha-m not over reacting parth,if he is being friendly with me then "wats wrong in it" so wat will you say now "the way you are holding me,talking to me,u r my friend too"

Parth leaves her hand slowly and was taken aback by her statement "he took step back" in shock

Vibha was expecting he might say that he loves her bt no he didn't, "he said "i care for you vibha,i care for you alot and was leaving from there bt vibha stopped by holding his arm and said "i know parth u care alot for me

Parth-vibha u r right..m ur friend & its my fault that i shudnt hold u & talk to you this way "he said in a disheartend tone,it gave a shock to him,he never thought she would say such thing to him,it made his heart break into pieces and he left from their angrgly with a broken heart.His eyes had pain that she hurthim by such words and he left from there giving a last look which vibha saw that she had hurted him.

Vibha was standing still and lost in thought that she shudnt have done this,after all she love him,she saw that she hurted him,she herself cant understand how to react ? she was happy to know that Parth love her..she was sure now that Parth love her too with the same intensity the way she loves him, bt sad that she hurted him,she saw she hurted him so much that he didn't waited for her to reply back,she was teary,she herself don't know wat to do now !

Vibha realised that "i shudnt have said him these things,i didn't wanted him to say him that he is my friend "he is more than that,he is everything to me,i love him" "i wanted him to focus on studies and wat i have done" "wat he must be thinking abt me that i allow all my friends so close to me' i too have my respect,i have gave my love the impression that he is just a friend to me,how can i do that,he is hurted becox of me,i hurted my love,my only dream man,her eyes were teary "i need to talk to him and say sorry" i cant be happy if he is broken"

Bg song ( naina nu pata h...naina nu khta h...saanu kis galdi par mili di sazza hai

Pass koi aave..durr koi jaave...ishq di fakiri jad lag javve..

Ai mann karda da thagi thoriya...ai mann kar da senna zoriya...

Aina sikh liyan dil churiyan...ai mann kar diyan kam zoriyan...

That day went...

Vibha was thinking abt Parth and parth was lost in her statement,both were having sleepless night...

Next morning...

Vibha started avoiding Neil and whenever Neil use to talk her other than school matters she simply excused and leave,this made Neil more curious to know and he wasn't liking it...

Karate classess started...

Initial days were warm up and slight work out in which vibha's help wasn't required.

Neil-so students...here m showing you how to do this step...he came closer to vibha and explain bt vibha was still upset regarding hurting Parth...so couldn't concentrate,so something striked in her mind & she askd from neil

Vibha-sir ! i have an urgent work ,i need to go now,i cant help you now in class...

Neil-bt vibha,its imp,u can do rest imp work later.

Vibha-no sir ! its vei imp ! sorry sir,its vei imp and leaves...

Neil-ok vibha

She was walking faster,holding her one side end of her dupata,walking towards fire escape..

Parth saw her tnsd and too went towards her...

He saw nobody around here and enterd the fire escape and close the door silently without letting her know his presence and touched her shoulder.

Vibha knew the touch and it was familiar and its none other than Parth and so without looking at him she straight hugged him tightly,which made Parth confuse for a sec bt he too responded and spread his arms at her back.she was crying bt didn't let parth notice abt it,she wiped her tears

Parth found she is in trouble,she is definitely in troble,she is hiding something from me,he too tighten the arm,he didn't wanted to force her to say him abt the trouble if she isn't willing to say now.

Vibha "m sorry Parth,i dint mean to say that to you those words

Parth-to make her feel safe & happy he said "m sorry too,it was my fault too,i shudnt have said so roughly to you" bdw where are your friends ? didn't they gave you hug ?

Vibha-m really sorry Parth " u r not my friend"

Parth- then wat i am ur ?

Both heartbeat goes faster...

Vibha-u r my...she was abt to say bt then they both heared someone coming and they broke the hug.

Ankita was tnsd and she entered the fire escape and says "sorry maam bt its urgent " i need to talk to Parth ! she didn't even wait for vibha's rep and immediately dragged Parth out and Parth was "AD wait...hold on,be slow !

Vibha stood there in shock that how can she do it specially with Parth,i was talking to parth,she could have waited,most surprisingly Parth even didn't told her to wait ? how can Parth do this me ? she was hurted,he is mine,she doesn't have ny right to do so ? she left from there

Ankita-dude ! its urgent...i cant wait !

Parth-wat AD ? whats so imp ? that you couldn't wait for the moment

Ankita-its really imp...

To be cont...

Precap-kp thinking lol,y vibha was crying,wat made vibha so upset and who was the reason

ty

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Edited by anki01 - 10 years ago

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