Dark Love - Sidyali and VibhArth FF [Siyali's Prologue UP on page 4] - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Brrr it was scary 😲
after reading the prologue
The title of Ff DARK LOVE" caught my attention.
The concept luks interesting.
Plzz update the next part.
Who killed Parth's mom??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept n nice starting..update soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lunalovegood

Brrr it was scary 😲

after reading the prologue
The title of Ff DARK LOVE" caught my attention.
The concept luks interesting.
Plzz update the next part.
Who killed Parth's mom??


Thank u Luna 😊

Glad u lyk the title

Parth's moms death , it might have something to do with ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Awesome dr...carry on bt plz don't connect vibha's family or vibha with parth's mom's death...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki01

Awesome dr...carry on bt plz don't connect vibha's family or vibha with parth's mom's death...😳


i'm not planning on connecting Vibha or anyone associated with her to Parth's moms death, but it does have something to do with one of the main characters.
Edited by Destiny_rose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tysm dr...start asap vibharth scenes too😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Siyali


People always leave.

First Mommy and Papa left me. Mother Superior told me that they went to heaven.
They could have taken me too. But they left me back.People always leave.

I'm here in an orphanage. I don't have a family. I'm all alone.

Then Niti came here. Her parent's left her too. But they hadn't gone to heaven. Why did they leave her then? People always leave.

Niti used to cry a lot. I used to be sad too. So we became best friends.

We got another friend too. Her name was Vibha. Her family moved to the mansion near our orphanage.
She was lucky.
She had Mommy,Papa, Granny and Granpa too. Why don't I have a family?

Then our new Moma found us. She took me and Niti to our new home. We became sisters.We were so happy. Mom was taking us to U.S.

But we had to leave Vibha.All three of us promised that we will go to the same university.

After coming to U.S I and Niti made a lot of friends. We met Utkarsh. Life is good now.

I dont want anyone to come in to my life. I don't anyone to take away what I have now.

I am Happy. But this happiness scares me. What if everyone leaves me?

Just like Mommy and Papa did.

People always leave.
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I wanted to write Sid's prologue but when i sat down to write this came into my mind.

So I couldn't help myself. I wanted everyone to know that how Siyali feels.

Sorry for keeping everyone waiting. I'll update chap one ASAP.

Edited by Destiny_rose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Siyali was like people always leave and she's scared to be happy.
The way you revealed her is really excellent.

WHen can we have chapter one ?

Should we spam this thread?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well written yaar loved the way you described her feelings 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waah kya Baaath hai👏Mashallah👏Good 2 know that vibha,siyali and nit i are of same age

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