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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: DEVU46

Ammu🤗

Nyc Starting yaar..
I just love ur style of writing...
And d story seems quite interesting...so continue soon...
Looking frwd to read more...Update soon...
And pm me when updated


I'm not thanking u devu cuz I know you dont lyk thanks .

Will update soon , if I can finishing writing today , I ll update it now itself
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ..krystal

thnk god.. someone is writing a ff...

hurrayyy...
pls don't stop it in middle...
continue sooonn..


will never stop it in the middle, this story is my baby 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: PrincessAish

so nice of you

this is just awesome

waiting for the next update


do pm me


thank you dr , gld u fyn it gud 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: -purvideshmukh-

Superb👏...kamini=Mrs.Robinson🤣...do pm me



sure 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Helping_angel

So beautifully written 😊
Nice nice nice !!! I LOVED ITT!! ❤️

Continue plzz
Update soon plzzz😃
waiting for more 😉


thank u dr 😊

will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER TWO


"Utkarsh!" Siyali stared at her innocent friend's innocent face and that paltry, vulgar magazine in his hand. Boy wasn't she outraged and she ought to be. Didn't she?

"What are you doing with that dirty ..." she trailed off disgusted.
"Look Siyali, its nothing like you think. It's common. For us boys.You'r a girl. So you wouldn't understand." He turned away shying from her eyes.

"I thought after our last fight, you'd have grown some sense. But turns out I was wrong."

"Siyali, you'r the one who's making such a big deal of things."

"Really Utkarsh" she clenched her eyes. "I wish I never came to this school. I wish we never came to this school"

"Oye! Siyali, Utkarsh, are you both fighting again?" Niti came and stood right between her friends. "What's the matter now? Why are you both arguing?"

"Niti look at that" Siyali said pointing at the glossy cover on Utkarsh's hand.
"He was seeing THAT kind of pictures" she pursued crossing her arms.

"Niti let Siyali sulk off as much as she wants and when she grows up a bit we'll talk."Said Utkarsh pacing out of the room, in a haste.

This isn't the Utkarsh I know, thought Siyali.
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"Ayaz bro" called out Sid fixing his tie. Boy, why couldn't they come with manuals?

"What's wrong Sid, you look lost" retorted Ayaz combing his half wet half dry hair.

"Actually, I need um... some...um... advice" he sighed, looking away, as he always does.

"Oh, hmm sure, but what advice are you looking for" inquired Ayaz adjusting his sleeves."Is it about Krissane"

"It's not about her,why on earth would I be worried about her?" paused Sid, looking at the roof.

"Well isn't she your girlfriend?"

Sid stood there muted.

"It's not about her. Okay, so the thing is you want a girl to talk to you but she won't.All she'll do is give you that face. How do you get her to talk?"

"Thats easy bro" replied Ayaz "just fight with her."

"What? Fight with her?" Sid couldn't hide the amusement in his tone.

"Yeah, just fight, make her angry, then wait and watch the miracle" said Ayaz placing a hand on Sid's shoulder.

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"Balwaanji" Miss self obsessed Chitralekha Singh pulled Parth to a corner taking him by his arm.

"Ma'm please leave me, I am getting late for class"

"Aapko itna jalti kyun hai balwaanji, classes aadhe khande ki baad hi shuru ho jayengi" she said raising her perverted eyes reflecting those perverted thoughts.

Darn I was toast, he thought, only if someone could be here on this darn hallway, then he wouldn't have to deal this freaky old woman.

"Ma'm" called Vibha emerging out of nowhere. The sudden interruption caused Kamini to jerk backwards thus allowing Parth to maintain a safe distance.

"Urmila Ma'm wants to meet you" Vibha added quickly.

"Teek hai Vibha ji, me chalti hu" and with that Kamini vanished from the hallway.

"Vibha Ma'm, thank you" said Parth relaxed.

"Don't worry Parth" she smiled "I promised I'd help, didn't I?"

"How are you feeling now? How's your cold?"

"I'm feeling much better now" she beamed at him.

"And ma'm is your dadi here?" Parth looked at her

"Yes Parth dadi is here and I''m so happy" she giggled. "By the way did you hear about the excursion"

"Excursion?" Parth gave her a quizzical look.

"Yeah, excursion, Urmila Ma'm called Kammini Ma'm to give her the necessary instructions."

"Where are we going to?" he asked her.

"I can't tell you everything Parth. You'll have to wait till noon to know, my class is almost here. Bye Parth"

"Wait, are you coming too" he blurted out.

"Of course I am" she said before walking into the classroom.
A small smile crept on the corner of his lips.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
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Thanks dhanu fr d pm...
So veebha saved parth fr kamini 😡
N parth is happy hearibg veebha cuming with dem 😳
Dis ayaz what type of advice ws dat??
Anyways i liked it as a whole..
Thanks..grt work..
Do update sooon 😊
Edited by ankusanu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
oh, i am loving your story

it's just awesome

loved it, so much.

oh, how i hate siyali and utkarsh's fight

let's see what sid is up to

waiting for next update

thanks for pm

update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
I just loved ittt!!!
Such an amazing writter u r..
Sid taking advice frm ayaz..hmm
kamini-parth-vibha..awesome
update soon...

Love
Anshika
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
excursion... wow ...
its much awaited concept...
ayaz the advise guru...
continue soon buddy... nd pm me...

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