friends for ever..and ever#FF..warrior high(part4 on pg4)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys!!
I m writing about warrior's of warrior. A FF...so guyzz
Plzz 😊 respond critics , likes , suggestions,and comments...are welcome.


Part 1

It starts from ...
After fresher's party ', everyone moving towards their respective dorms.. In corridor,
Siyali: Niti,Maine khud ko tyar kar liya hai...finally I am leaving (niti in shock) ha... Aur tum nahi rokogi mujhe.
Niti:tu pagal Ho Gaye hai kya...sab thik hai..rehna yaha mujhe aur uthkarsh ko teri jarurat hai.
Siyali:Jo mera nahi...matlab nahi...aur meine decide kar liya hai...ab chal.
And they leave to their dorm.
Siyali and niti are watching out of window. And niti as usual commenting on krissan .
And krissan was telling everyone about her first kiss.
Knock!knock!
Siyali:iss vakt yaha kon aya hoga...
Niti :ruk main dekh ti Hu (and finds parth in front)...tu yaha...kya kaam hai.
Parth:voh Siyali hai...mujhe usey baat karni hai..
Niti:kya baat hai parth..hoo
Parth:kuch nahi ...bas voh usne janey Ki baat Ki tujh se ...main vahi par tha...so
Siyali comes out watching niti
Siyali:arey parth tum yaha.. ...
Parth:u deserve to be in this school..toh kyu ja rahi hai
Siyali:tu bhi ab ...samaj mey kiski identity bankar nahi rahna chahti..I want to be me over here...aur vasey bhi..ek saal Ki toh baat hai I will be back.
Parth:chal thik hai yaar(patting on her shoulder)...tu iss saal rukh Sakti hai..
Niti:kaisey?
Parth:pahel yeha se chal...vaha baat karte hai
(and they leave towards a bit dark area...and sid sees them actually he only see parth and Siyali
Sid :aacha bachu..maine zero aur yoh hero(in thoughts)
Ayaz:yaar batana agey kya Hua...krissan ne kya kaha
Sid:yawning..mujhe bhauhat nind Aar rahi hai...so bye gn.
And walks outside and hides behind pillar and listen their convo
Niti:Kaise...abey bol na..
Parth:vibha ma'am..voh kuch jugad kar lege...and u know that..she u r beautiful dancer and can make clg proud.
Niti in shock:yeh tujhe Kaise pata..
Parth:boys dorm iske barey Mei baat kar rahe they...tab suna
Sid behind the pillar:accha..bachu..six pe six marey ja raha hai..ha
Everyone sticks to parth's plan and leave saying good night anf
Niti and Siyali Hug each other and niti :tu bhi aa..tu bhi hamara dost hai and they have grp hug and leaves.
Next morning,boys get ready for jogging and girls for their practise .
They meet at corridor parth looks at ...vibha and sid standing behind parth thinks he is looking towards Siyali..
Sid:iski toh Mai...raat mey kya khusra pusara kar rahe they kuch sunya bhi nahi Diya...essey agar Main Pakistan Ki jasusi kar toh mujhe..Padmabhushan milta.(bending towards parth)agar Ho Gaya Ho toh chaley. And looks at Siyali and smiles.
After class,
Siyali narrates whole events to vibha.
Vibha:kya tum angela nahi Ho...what's going on? Voh kaha hai...uff yeh Kamini ma'am bhi na
Siyali:ma'am u have to help me out
V:okay Maine kuch karti Hu...
To be contd...
Precap:Siyali handover application to Urmila and Siyali parth niti and uthkarsh grp hug and a surprise

So guys comment and think about further track.
Love u all
Edited by epicangel - 10 years ago

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archisha06 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Amazing 👏
Seriously Owsm😃

Loved it ❤️

Continue soon..

N DO PM ME..:)


P.S - u r rooting fr Sid-Siyali or Parth--Siyali ??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That's the mystery ...
But love ur FF... Waiting for next update
epicangel thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guyzzz ...aagay..dekho hoga kya...
Nxt update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U put my thoughts into words about siyali's jugaad idea
Tabse I am wishing that siyali goes and speaks to Vibha about her being siyali and not Angela
And the binding between Parth and the rest Woowww it's amazing!!
I love it.. I so wish it was something like this in the show
Again I'll say u put my thoughts into words!!
Wonderful dear! Keep going!!
And yeah sid's jealousy and his epic dialogues "Padmabhushan" and all hahahahaa 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice FF ...waiting to read next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Awesome FF Yaar 👏
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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u knw wat i was imaging all of dem saying dese lines.. awesome update... keep writing.. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys...first of all thanks..for ur wonderful reply..
Here we come to ur nxt part ...which u all must waiting for.
Part 2

Siyali and niti are walking to and fro in their room(dorm).
Krissan:what happen girl...u look tensed...kuch Hua kya?(showing her fake concern)
Peon:angela aur niti ko vibha ma'am ne rehearsal room mey bulaya hai and leaves
Krissan:kuch toh bhaut kiya in Ho ney...and waise bhi..what do u expect from this bimboos..(and starts laughing with her friends).
Niti:ter toh..(pulling her sleeves up).
Siyali:niti..yaar chod..na usey..(pulling her back) kyu tu unke ke muh lagte hai...
Niti:sach kaha tu ney..kyuki (making devilish smile) it stinks.(makes funny face's and she runs outside with Siyali)
Krissan:(burning with anger...) like seriously...(gaze at girls with anger who were giggling and leaves stomping her feet)
At rehearsal room,
Niti and Siyali:ma'am..
And parth enters
V:Maine kuch socha hai...yeh letter tum Urmila ma'am se sign karva lena.
Siyali:taking letter..par yeh hai kya.
V:tum matlab angela apni dadi ke operation ke liye ghar janey keliye leave mag rahi Ho...baki sab mey Sambhal Lu gi ..go now
Parth:(while leaving) inhe kya Hua hey
Niti:chod ...ab Siyali tu ja..aur letter sign karva. Aur parth tu uthkarsh ko ley aa...aur Mein Siyali Ki bag pack karti Hu and all of them leave.so kal miltey hai.
Siyali going towards Urmila's cabin and she sees sid coming.
Siyali:in thoughts) uff..isey bhi yehi Ana tha.
Sid looks at her and walks away showing he didn't notice her.
Siyali:(in thoughts)isne kuch nahi bola...(and amazed).
Sid takes a foot back .
Sid :tumne kuch kaha...maine kuch suna nahi(rubbing his ears)
Siyali ignoring her awkwardness:mainey kuch nahi kaha
Sid holds her hands and looking in her eyes and have a eye lock which is broken by Siyali and pulls her out.
Siyali:tum mujh se dur hi rehna samjhey
And leaves she walks towards cabin..and looks towards him and smiles at him who's standing looking at other side.
Peon :arey aap ma'am se abhi nahi mil Sakti voh busy hey.
Siyali:okay...bas yeh letter unhe dene plzz...voh jara urgent hai..
Peon :rukiye(and walks inside,and after a while)yeh lijiye apki leave sanction Ho Gaye hai.
In afternoon,
Niti:chal bye yaar...jaldi miltey hai
Parth:bye..we will miss u
Niti:awww...parth
Siyali:chup niti
Uthkarsh:main apne bestie ka intezaar karuga..
They have grp hug...siyali watches sid walking in corridor.
In corridor,
A boy:sid...tujhe veebha ma'am ne rehearsal room me bula hey..
Sid :chal thik hai
And walks towards it
Sid (knocking the door):may I come in ma'am
He feels some one pulling him inside.
Sid:Siyali...tu...hey bhagwan tu karna kya chahti Ho...(she was standing close to him locking him)
They have eyelock...which she breaks and moves away a awkwardness is the room.
Sid :chup rahey gi ya...kuch boleyge...chod main bolta Hu...sun I know tu angela nahi hai...(she turns in shock)
Siyali:how do u know?
Sid :voh sab chod...mainkisi ko nahi batauga...sid promise...kyu bulaya mujhey yaha?
Siyali slowly move towards leaning sid..which shocks him he stood still and bends towards his heart.
Siyali:knock knock chota sid hai!!! Hi chota sid actually main tumue bye khayne aae thi(he smiles)
Aur tum bade wale sid...uthkarsh ko uska box wapas kar do...it means a lot to him..plzz
Sid:yaar plzz mat bol mujhey..khoobsurat ladkiya plzz bolti hai...
Siyali:awww(and hits him)
And they share a hug.
Niti:Siyali kha hai tu...
And they break hug and Siyali moves outside avoiding their awkwardness
Sid left amazed and his heart was pouncing he never felt this way..and slowly moves out and watches Siyali and everyone sitting in cab.



Precap:at railway station


Fewww...a long one... 🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Awesome chappy 👏
SidYali scenes
waiting for next part now 😃

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