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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

This ones for you kiz - and for GBH =)

Music: Rishta.Com theme
(c): Sony TV, YRF tv, Star One, DMG, Cinevistaas

NOTE: its not like i'm improving with every new VM :|
All suggestions/constructive criticism shall be most appreciated! =) (cookies for those who can give exceptionally feasible and cool pointers 😆)

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GKQtd2-GxIE[/YOUTUBE]

I can remember the character essence, although i don't recall precise scenes, but i think it still might just fit, yeh?! :D

everyone, here's the link to one of the most punk and bindaas AR fic written on India Forums:

Green Blue Hues

[FYI - this FF was completed a few months ago. So think no more and give it a shot 😃]

thanks to all the respective vid uploaders for awesome quality clips!

enjoy watching people! =)

cheers,
nj

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

beautiful

just perfect

thanks 4 da pm

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Arushi.

@Arushi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Nj.

I love Kajennnn <3 So thankyou for doing one on them 🤗

I left you a comment on YT, for the earlier VM. And in that I asked for a little colour change and all. And maybe, i was wrong. Cause I see the use of sepia here, but it doesn't feel right.

I like the entire concept of flashbacks and AR coming together. Really well thought out. But, what I didn't like ( I am so sorry) was the colour tune used in the flashbacks ( I am sorry for that wrong suggestion again, really sorry. I feel pathetic today). And whilst going through the VM the second time, I thought for the flashbacks you could use something warmer.

I edited a pic in terms of colour, and I thought that is the colour type you can choose. You might hate it, but do have a look. The first is the original picture, and the second one is the edited one. Im pathetic at editing so yeah, I have an excuse :P

Okay, I am sorry for just being the bad one here, plus giving wrong suggestions. I am really sorry Nj, really. Seriously. I'll write the reply to AoL earlier than said earlier if that works, but I really am sorry.

Oh god ! I feel so stupid at the moment. Did all the wrong things, and then I am just still not satisfied, I dont know what to say, except that I am really sorry.

Oh, you know one thing i noticed in the VM. When Riddhima is apologizing to Armaan at 1:17 Armaan just stands there and smiles very fondly at her. But at 1:20 when he apologizes Riddhima goes all no no no, lol. Guys I tell you, uff. 😆

Once again, before I sign off, really sorry !

Loads of Love,

Tushiiii 🤗

EDIT: One more suggestion. (Yeah I can see daggers towards me), but I think you should change the font you use when you write something, like you wrote 'Is this it' I guess an arial could be better.

Also one thing that I need to acknowledge (for the better) usually your Vm's have a very dominating 'NJ' written on them. But in this one, either it was hidden or not written at all. I like this one better, gives the eye full focus on the shifting pictures. And did I tell you, they are some of the most favourite Kajen moments :)

Edited by Arushi. - 14 years ago

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Starry

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

mesmesrsin' love the scene u hv taken..... 😍 Nj..... mind-blowin' 👏👏👏

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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

@ARMAANKSGFAN - thanks a bunch dear!

@Tushiii! - dude!!! ur mad!!! i really really want you to go read your comment again (just above mine) and count the number of sorry(s) - like insane or what!!! you think i'm that sad a person to be taking offense to suggestion when i'm specifically asking for them 😆 W*H!! 😆

yeh, so basically, one more time ur really mad! after the first few lines or so i was turning on my blind mad glares to all the sorry(s) that fel my way and reading the rest - and that was a lot of editing to do mentally and with my eyes 😆

okay - so here's what i'm going to do, makes changes and upload a second version aite? teme what you think of that! this one was pretty easy to render so it wont take much time... and DUDE! i never wrote nj on any of the vids - i tried putting the spln tag on just one vid which was the previous one to this and didn't like it (lol, didn't i say we had twin traits?!) so i didn't use it again, now i need to come up with something better!

so anyways - yeh leme work around the changes and see how that goes - not sure that WMV lets me warm images in effects, but i'll see what else i can do! AND i did see your comment on youtube and replied to it too - didn't cha see?

@shikhuzie san - thankeeeez! 🤗

cheers,
nj

Edited by spln - 14 years ago

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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

done changing the coloring Tushiii! - i got kiz to check out the only possible versions of change - and this was the only one that she liked!

hopefully, you'll find it better too!

cheers,
nj

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@Jenny..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71viakXZRkk[/YOUTUBE]

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Arushi.

@Arushi.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Yo Nj !! 😆

I like this version better. Much better than the earlier one😎. *Lifts hand for a Hi5* 😆

Now, I think when I get the time next, I will sit and see all your VM, and drop my comments on them. *Puts chappal and dagger sheild on* (Will doing that allow me a delay on commenting on AoL? 😆 ) 🤔

And, for something that you made me do, the number of sorry's were counted as 8, now not too many, eh? 🤣

And nope, I haven't been on YT after that day, you left me a comment? Nice, sweet :) Lol.

See you soon !

Tushiiiiii

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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Yo Tushi!!! 😆

glad u think this ones better... funny thing is, i'd thought it was better when i was first doing the vm, can't recall why i chose sepia over it (and not one more sorry @ this confession, it wasn't ur request 😆 )

and WHAT! ur going to place the silly VMs over my update :( i can see u like this role of bossing me around with suggestions hence the priority basis 😆

jk! take ur time with comments, like i said somewhere else, make sure its before i post the third part in a tow without hearing from you .. now ain't i oh-so-dahlin'-sweet?! 😆

got some reviews to wrap up tonight, so catch up with u, tom? u still have to confirm december dates for me btw... =)

hugs,
nj

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Arushi.

@Arushi.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Hahahaha, I was going to start chanting my sorry's before I read the warning, lol.

How can I even think of bossing the boss around? 🤣 Kidding, but yeah I like this better. You know why? 'Cause it requires less attention and less analysis. In FF's I have to read each word carefully to see a million unsaid words lurking behind it. So yeah, but I am getting to it naa.

Ermm, you won't see me here tomorrow. I reach back home on Monday. So I guess I shall see you here on Monday/Tuesday. You finally got some work, lol? Kidding, I know you're always caught up, this break is a well deserved one. So yeah, I will reach home, see the exam schedule and tell you !

🤗

Loads of Love,

Tushiii

PS: What does spln stand for? It's something I wanted to ask you since long, finally come down to it. Just ignore this if you don't want to answer okay? Goodnighhtttt

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