NeiVika ss: kaise mujhe Tum mil gaye - Page 2

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Posted: 1 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Saumya2102

I am ALWAYS right! smiley14 Maine kaha masterpiece hai, to hai baat khatam.

Also, tell them by encouragement you mean I forced and threatened you because I did. smiley37

This SS made my Sunday. Warna bland jata. And honestly, ye is hafte ke Vanshaj se laakh guna achha tha. I told you it's criminal to not post it. Yaha sabka Sunday boring ja rha hoga, unless some people do have a life. smiley36

As I said earlier, I liked how Neil despite all this hurt could only think about Yuvika. But that's Neil for you. What I loveed was Yuvika going through so many emotions for Neil. This isn't highlighted enough in the story. So thank you girlfriend for writing this. Aur likho, I am getting greedy now smiley36

Saumyasmiley31

Yes, yes Tum nahin Hoti toh mein toh tumhe bhej kar so jaati. An overthinking & self-critical person like me needs someone like you.

Thank You.

& That's what we are talking about right? You can make a person green-flag by making him relatable human as well. YUVIKA se iss passion aur consideration ki umeed sabko hai...

smiley27

(Waise ab please tag kardo na jinhe Maine chod diya hai...)

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Posted: 1 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Spandan24

oh my God , uff kya tha ye , i am in cloud 9

agar iss ss ka kuch part vi show mai dikh jata to kya problem thi makers smiley7

and for review , i am unable to write anything , currently i am feeling like Yuvika when she was reading Neil's diary crying , smiling , overwhelmed smiley31

makers fukk off , we have born writers here and our born writers can write 100000000 infinite times better story than you idiots

and atlast lots of loveeeeeeeeeee for writing this beautiful sssmiley27smiley31

Aww! You are soo sweet with your compliments... THANK YOU SO MUCH.smiley27

Glad that it worked for you.

Well Makers disappointed me a great deal with this track!

& I don't know if It was really this good but since you have given such beautiful compliments from your heart ..so I am accepting it.

Thankssmiley27

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Posted: 1 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Thank you Saumya smiley31

For encouraging this ARTIST to share her ART with us , she thinks soo deep smiley27

Neil writing diary uff! Such a great addition

This thought itself is soooo beautiful ❤️

I mean why only girls writes diary in fictions?

The guy putting down his vulnerabilities in a diary makes sooo much more sense smiley32

I can literally visualise everything specially Neil asking her to go through the main door not balcony smiley14

I loved this smiley42

I have read so many NeiVika fictions today that I am FULL, I don't have words which actually can do justice to these pieces of WRITINGS.

Soooo overwhelmed right now

You guys are awesome smiley31

Dii! Kitni sweet ho yaar aap.smiley27 , so generous with your compliments.. This really means a lot....

Glad that you liked the idea of Neil's diary! Well I have tried my best to keep their core characteristics in-tact.

So happy that it worked for you. I was really curious for your reaction..

& As Saumya said in her comments she actually forced & threatened me.smiley36 But probably that is exactly what I needed.

Again thank you Diismiley27

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Posted: 1 years ago
#14

I'M SOBBING RN. GREAT.

HOW CUTE!! LITERALLY HAD ME SOBBINGsmiley19smiley27

Now my expectations went up again and makers are not gonna fulfil even half of this SS. How am I supposed to handle that pain???!!!?smiley38

Such a lovely take! Do write more! Would love to read more on NeiVika from yousmiley42

Posted: 1 years ago
#15

This is the cutest SS I've ever readsmiley42

I loved it smiley14

Posted: 1 years ago
#16

It would've been funny if Vidur uncle had seen her leaving the housesmiley37

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Posted: 1 years ago
#17

Guyss, Come check this SS out. The way NeiVika's conflict was resolved was really disappointing for all of us. Here my bestie (self-proclaimed) smiley36 has done some magic and changed that. Do give it a try!! smiley31

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Posted: 1 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: agreatwcr

I'M SOBBING RN. GREAT.

HOW CUTE!! LITERALLY HAD ME SOBBINGsmiley19smiley27

Now my expectations went up again and makers are not gonna fulfil even half of this SS. How am I supposed to handle that pain???!!!?smiley38

Such a lovely take! Do write more! Would love to read more on NeiVika from yousmiley42

Aww! You are sweet.

My expectations are always high when it comes to NeiVika, I have been disappointed so many times but nothing had frustrated me like this whatever apology..So tried to calm myself down with thissmiley37

Thank you for these lovely words, means a lot ...smiley27

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Posted: 1 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

This is the cutest SS I've ever readsmiley42

I loved it smiley14

Thank you sooo much....Glad that you like it.smiley27

When it comes to cuteness,NeiVika are the cutest! Anything related to them is bound to be cute...

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Posted: 1 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

It would've been funny if Vidur uncle had seen her leaving the housesmiley37

sach bolun mere mind mein Aya toh tha, but then I thought already itna emotionally draining scene likh chuki thi,toh ab Vidur scene shayad story ka flow or flavour change kar deta..

Hence I kept Bhidur out.

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