OS: A text says all { For Shweta }

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello , hi there everyone. Myself Asiya , Asii, I wrote this small piece for my dearest friend , Shweta , it's a small gift from my side dear, on your big day. I love u <3. It isn't too good , my first try on SanVi. So kindly ignore all my errors

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A Text Say's All..

It was 10 mins past midnight. The sky was dark. The moon shone brightly within the dark clouds. The darkness had laid city to sleep. Silence was spread all over. Only the howling n squeaking was heard.

After a tiresome day, she choose just to curl under her fluffy n comfy blanket on her soft and a bit bouncy bed with her favorite pillow. Not bothering to clean all the mess she had created in the morning for searching her favorite pair of scandals. Ahh.! Life is so hetic , what wish I could have cute break between these boring schedule,talking about cute breaks , it does give guest appearance to her nowadays, all the beautiful moments with HIM , blush blush , even with a small thought of his makes her enter in Animate fantasyland, Gosh was I the same before you entered Mr. Not being able to confess your heart's feeling Person, well that is rather weird name , or maybe more , but its fact , You have made all this to me , You have made me admire the moon , hum a love song , lay on couch thinking about *us* , the mentioning of makes her simple indefinable , eyes reminiscing all the moments we spent together , your not so medicilous voice nursing a lovestroy for me in ears , my nose remembering the beautiful smell of our proximity, a sweet smile curving on me face , making me more beautiful , Yaya! U make me beautiful. You do! Look at me I'm so lovestruck! all thanks to you . I better brush up these thoughts, or else again I'll b late for college tomorrow . With much of tossing n turning ,praying for sleep , finally sleep had came to her making her deep engross in her dreams or maybe in her case rather solving mind puzzle

Her beautiful thoughts was interrupted by vibration of her dear phone on bedside table . Cursing the sender, she got up from bed eyes half open. Trying to function her smartphone in all sleep. Gosh its difficult. It was his text . Generally it makes us feel that people never forget u , but now Shocking , At this wee hour. Anything serious, might be, the text read as



When you smiles the Heavens open up, :)
Angels get there wings, O:)
every woodland creature sings, :$
as Jesus brings a round of shots You smiles and all of time & space stops. ;)
I love your Smile.:) <3
Keep smiling .:)

It makes your more pretty :*


She smiled. And was a bit confused. As in what to reply!? She didn't had many forwards. As she hardly texted. Though was a active member on Facebook. She kept scrolling for a perfect message. Gosh her phone was spammed with companys advertising messages. She so needed to activate the DND * Do not disturb* option. She finally thought of typing something . Her mind was still baffled on whether to send or not. Brushing those thoughts she send the text



He was lying on the bed doing nothing, nothing would be harsh, he had a match running on, on flat television in front of his favorite couch. His phone vibrated , due to some random reason he attended a lecture, and if u attend a lecture, your bounded to follow decorum. Hence his phone was on silent, and he had totally forgotten about it. He picked up his phone from table. And the notification stated it was her . It read as

My reason for smile are many :)any cute thoughts brings a smile to me n it just did , thanks for it. :*
Well I'm not so poetic ,
so don't expect perfect phrases from me. Anyways , what you doing!?
Up so late :o
Thinking about something !?



He had really not accepted this. A reply from her, at this time , Darn my network service , always delivery my text late . But the text is sweet just as herself. He didn't knew how to react. He had a big grin on his face, where you can simply count all his teeth properly brushed. He went on and simply let his fingers volunteer



First of all ,
I'm sorry for texting you so late (:,
I had texted two hour ago ;), but my freaking slow service sent after so much delay.
I hope I didn't disturb your sleep. :'(
It's a pleasure being a reason for your smile . ;)
With yours presence in my life<3
,I have all thoughts piled up to disturb my sleep :$

I just hope this reachs on Time. :P



And IT did reach on time . Maybe because this was the strength of their relation.(:

She was anxiously waiting for a reply. Finally the phone beeps, Ah! , Its difficult to explain the feeling you get when your crush texts you. Not wasting any milliseconds , she instantly replied



Isn't it weird that our text reached on time now :$.
What can you say to this !?. Well. I'm so not friendly with all these gadget stuff ,
maybe its just that no network error dares to disturb our talk , ;)

Well anyways what is your views for the same !?
How did the text reach without any hindrance (:



Hmm, So she's playing mind games with me, getting me confess stuff ,Umm I like it ,everything about her , let me show her whose the boss B-) with a grin on his face. He textd



Oh You feel so :o
Well according to me , it's night time , almost three fourth of normal people are sleeping calmly. Not bothering to mobile networks,
Hence the connection seems good (:

It is always said people in love stay up late night. Dream n do some weirdest things :P
Chats with their lucky ones . But still how come a mobile servicing networks have connections with relations of persons.
That's weird thinking for such stuffs in modern era of 21 :\
And since when did u started believing all these o_O
There's isn't a evidence for so




He knew it, this will irk her, but he loved troubLing her, he had all rights for it , n if any demon tired to came close . RIP Demon.

She was fuming with anger, agreed this was 90s style when a girl post a love-letter for his lovely by a beautiful dove humming kabtoor ja ja ja.. But still for, love drives you insane that's what she had heard., pressing all buttons hard, venting out all angry on phone as she typed


Yeah Yeah * poker face*
Your absolute right Mr. Realistic.
There's isn't evidence for strengths of love. It's as said by a nursery students its * Abstract* You can't see it ,
Only it can be felt ,
And believe me the feeling is beautiful , not only of love , but utmost being loved back from one u do,
First of all. It's very difficult to understand , believe and accept the fact you have fallen for this disease
It's difficult to convince you or understand these stuff. Because your alien to these.
It's not your cup of tea.

So it's useless to explain u


She knew this will get him straight. No wonder he never confessed his feeling, but she knew his heart , after all she was the one living there, he he couldn't see her in pain or disheartened , so emotional blackmail is the best strength of her

He was indeed hurt, for hurting her , he could feel the tears in the text, so playing no other games with her , time to impress her with his knowledge of words


Oh, don't be so judgemental,
Let the verdict also gives his mercy pray , here something written by me ,which might help you understand my feeling ;)


I'm lost in your dreams , during the day.
And Because of that, I can't feel the sun ray's

I'm lost in your dreams, even at night.
And Because of that, I can't see the moon light.

I'm lost in your dreams, for month's together,
And Because of that, I can't feel the changing weather.

So dear now I can't leave you because,
Without You my Life is "Blue"
I Love You <3



Ah! At last a direct saying. She was feed up his indirect talks. There wasn't words for her inner turmoil

She simply texted back


I love you more :* <3 ^_^




Both smiled on finally letting out their feelings. Hugging the pillow tight. A beauty Sleep kissed them tonight.


When it rains, you dont see the sun, but its there.
We are like that
We dont always see each other,
But we are always there for one another
That's our Relation
You better don't try to define it . You'll be speechless


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Thanks for reading my crap ,
I wish my darling
Shweta likes this , once again happy birthday

P.S. : Sorry for the font mistakes. I uploaded through cell , out on vacation 😉

Do hit " Like " n " Comment" please need your criticisms for improvement
😛
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pinkgal thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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^All stuffs in italic is text msg 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asi!
this was amazing!
loved it a lot dear:D
U written this specially for me?
Aww thnk u so much!!
And ur an awesome writer !!
u shud write more :)
And sorry for my late reply...Was stuck up somwer :/
Edited by sweetz1204 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asii you did a wonderful job, i just love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG this is super cute. Not only their text left a smile on their faces but ur os also did that for me. SUPER CUTE YAAR!! You write really well!! please write more !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetz1204

Asi!
this was amazing!

loved it a lot dear:D
U written this specially for me?
Aww thnk u so much!!
And ur an awesome writer !!
u shud write more :)
And sorry for my late reply...Was stuck up somwer :/


Shweta 😉
Im so glad u liked it 😳
Yup i wrote this speciallly for u
Thnnks for compliment
I like writing
Will write more , if u keep encourgaging 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy2012

Asii you did a wonderful job, i just love it



Thanks alot Debu (: <3

Im glad u liked my work 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 100littledevils

OMG this is super cute. Not only their text left a smile on their faces but ur os also did that for me. SUPER CUTE YAAR!! You write really well!! please write more !!


Awww (: <3
Thanks alot
Im happpy bringing a smile thru my OS,
I will surerly write more (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkgal


Shweta 😉
Im so glad u liked it 😳
Yup i wrote this speciallly for u
Thnnks for compliment
I like writing
Will write more , if u keep encourgaging 😛

Well thn i will ofcourse keep encouraging...u like to write also na...thn u should!⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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^^ Shweta :* thanks alot yup i write in free time
Ill write more

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