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bokul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Meekashfan
I am totally impressed wit ur FF.
Please update the next part soon.

thanks for the compliment 😛

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bokul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: tinafans
nice attempt

thanks dear 😳

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loveyouichcha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

K dia,waiting for the next part.

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bokul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

will try to update next part tomorrow

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bokul

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Posted: 12 years ago

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part 2

Seeing Ambika go away Meethi said " Akash mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe uske saath jaana chahiye dekho to wo kitni kamzor hai " Akash said " Nahi Meethi tum itna chinta mat karo usne kaha na ki wo subah tak theek ho jayegi dawai lege fikar mat karo " She did not want to argue with him again but she had a constant nagging worry at the back of her head . She again started to eat . Akash told " Meethi pata hai main tumhe zindagi me har ek khushi dena chahti hoon . Tumhe maine pehle bahut sataya tha bahut dukh dard diya takleef tha aur aaj main wo saari galtiyan ke liye maafi chahta hoon . Maiyya ne mujhe bachpan se hi badle ke aag lekar ghumne ke liye sikhayi thi mujhe us waqt samajh mein nahi aya tha ki main kitni galat kar raha hoon par mere ankho me tab maiyya ki badle ke patti tha..." Meethi said " Chodo na Akash tum beete hue din ke baare mein kyun soch rahe ho maine to sab kuch bhula diya . " Akash said " Nahi Meethi mujhe please ye sab kuch keh lene do . Main bahut pehle hi tumhe ye sab kehna chahta tha par ye kehne ka waqt aur mauka hi nahi mila kisi na kisi uljhan ki vajah se . Main ab ateet ke saari gile shikwe bhulakar tumhe inti saari khushiyan dena chahta hoon ki tumhe kabhi yaad bhi na rahe ki pehle wala Akash koi doosra tha . Lekin main abhi tumhari saare zakham bhar doonga "

Hearing this tears formed in Meethis's eyes . She was so happy she had wanted such a life for so long . She had wanted lots of love in her marriage . And now she had got it . Seeing tears in her Akash said " Kya hua Meethi tumhari aankhon me aansu kyun agaye ? Maine phirse kuch galat keh diya kya ? Meethi mujhe maaf kar do main..." Meethi put her hands on his lips saying " Chup tumne kuch galat nahi kaha tum ne aj ye sab baat kehke mujhe itni khushi diya ki main bata nahi sakti . Khushi ke maare ankhon me ansu agaye aur tum samjhe ki mujhe bura laga ? Buddhu kahike " Hearin this Akash smiled " Meethi tum apne patidev ko buddhu kaha ? Pata hai ek bahu ko uske pati ko aisa kabhi nahi bolna chahiye " Meethi said " Achcha pati dev mujhse galti ho gayi mujhe maaf kar dijiye " Akash said " Arre nahi main to bus mazak kar raha tha . " They finished their dinner and then Akash carried her upstairs . They were oblivious to the fact that their conversation was heard and seen by none other than Ambika from behind the curtains . She was seething with rage " Akash tum us apahich ko itna ehemiyat kaise de sakte ho ? Tum sirf mere ho aur kisi ka nahi . Agar seedhe tarike se tum mere nahi huye to mujhe apna ungli teda karna aata hai . Ab tum dekhte jao ki main kya kya karti hoon "

Akash carried Meethi to their bed room . He felt her much lighter than before . He was sure that he had lost her weight a lot . Poor thing she must not be taking care of herself well . He wanted to do something out of the world for her . He thought for sometime and came up with a plan . He smiled to himself thinking of it Meethi saw him smile and asked " Kya hua Akash tum itna muskura kyun rahe ho ? " Akash said " Kyunki ek pari mere bahon me hai " Hearing this Meethi blushed and told " Mazak ki bhi hadd hoti hai Akash . Batao na kya hua " Akash said " Thik hai Meethi main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon " Saying this he made her sit on the wheel chair . Then he sat in front of her and held both the sides of the wheel chair for support and then said with a serious face " Dekho Meethi ab main tumhe jo kehne jaaraha haoon ho sakta hai ki tumhe bilkul bhi pasand na aaye par yehi mere dil ki baat hai isiliye dhyan se sunna "

if u like this part please like and comment i will continue further

Edited by rima4ever - 12 years ago

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loveyouichcha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Its verynice yaar. Loving it verymuch,keep continuing.

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loveyouichcha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Dia,if u dont mind one request. Plz will u write the dialogue in english, as for me its difficult to understand hindi,as i'm tamil.some some dialogues i can understand.