MEEKASH SS - CHAHE JO TUMHE POORE DIL SE updated page 14

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i am tired of the crap track
so i am writing something

As Ambika came down the stairs Akash was getting into a fit of a rage . He had planned this special dinner tonight only for his Meethi . He wanted to spend some quality time with her . He wanted to treat her like the princess she was . He wanted to make her feel well loved and well cared . But all this got spoiled because of Ambika . He caught hold of the end of the table so strongly that he felt the surface of the table was cutting the skin of his palm. He did not know what to do . He did not like Ambika at all to ruin this special evening .
But his too innocent wife herself had invited Ambika . And he could never refuse or deny her anything . She could not be selfish at all . He knew that very well . So he gritted his teeth and prepared himself to put on a fake smile to welcome Ambika to the dinner . Akash saw Ambika slowly coming down the stairs . For a moment he felt that she was perfectly fine as her gait ( walking style ) had no signs of being ill . But then he brushed away the thought . He would only focus on Meethi now . With her he can face even hell then what was this Ambika ?
Meethi saw his tightened jaw and frowned at him . She raised her eyebrows at him and asked him silently what was wrong . Akash did not tell her anything just looked at her once and then looked at Ambika coming down the stairs . It did not take Meethi too long to understand what was wrong and why Akash was so grumpy . Meethi silently told Akash that it will be ok even if some one else joins them for dinner . Akash did not have any option other than accepting her wish .
Ambika came down the stairs smiling in her mind . She thought " Dekha Jethani Ji main to jeet gayi . Aap ko kya laga tha ? Ap mere Akash ke saath baith ke yahan itni haseen mahol me itni achcha sangeet ke saath aap khana khayenge ? Nahi kabhi nahi . Mujhe jo nahi mila woh main aapko kabhi bhi milne nahi doongi . Main apko kabhi khush nahi rehne doongi . Main apki saari khushiyaan cheen loongi. Main aapki aur apne akash ke beech itni dooriyan paida kar doongi ki aap kabhi bhi wo mita nahi payenge . Main aap dono ke rishte mein ek kabhi na bharnewala daraar paida kar doongi . Ap nahi jaanti apne kis se panga liya . Aapne jo gunaah kiya Akash ko mujhese cheen ke uska bharpai to aapko karna hi hoga . Aapko uski bahut badi keemat chukaani hogi . Aapko pata bhi nahi hai main ab aapke saath kya kya karnewali hoon ."
Thinking all this she sat down at the table . Meethi asked Ambika " Ab tumhare tabiyat kaisi hai ? " Ambika said " Ab pehle se behtar hai Jethani Ji . Lagta hai main khana khake so jaungi to kal subah tak thik ho jaoongi " Meethi said " Haan tum jaldi thik ho jao " Akash said " Ab chalo khana shuru karo " . All of them began eating . Meethi was about to have her first bite of food . Akash stopped her " Meethi ruk jao " Meethi said " Kya hua Akash ? Mujhe bahut bhookh lagi hai " Akash said " Meethi bhale hi hum apne hi ghar me khana kha rahe ho par khane ka pehle nivala to main tumhe apne hathon se hi khilaungi . Saying this he took a small morsel of food and took his hand forward to Meethi's mouth . Meethi said " Nahi Akash iski koi zaroorat nahi hai main khud hi kha sakti hoon " Akash said " Nahi Meethi main tumhari baat nahi manoongi agar tum apna pehla nivala mere haath se nahi khaoge to main aj khana hi nahi khaoonga " Meethi said " OK baba main khaungi tumhare haathse mujhe khilao " Akash then smiled he was really happy he fed her the morsel . Meethi then picked up a morsel and told " Main bhi tumhara pehla nivala apne hatho se tumhe khilaungi " Saying this he put the food in his mouth "
Seeing all this was very intolerable for Ambika . She was seething with rage . She controlled herself with a lot difficulty . She said to herself " Ye tumne bilkul thik nahi kiya Meethi tumne mere samne mere Akash ke saath aisa bartav kaise kar sakti ho ? Mere Akash ke upar kaise apna haq jama sakti ho ? Main iske liye tumhe kabhi bhi maaf nahi karoongi . " Meethi and Akash both were lost in each others eyes . They were almost having a staring competition . Ambika cleared her throat . That brought Meekash back to the reality . Ambika told " Mujhe ab bhookh nahi hai . Main ab sone jaa rahi hoon . Ap dono aram se khana khaiye " Meethi said " Arrey Ambika abhi to tumne bola tha ki tumhe bahut bhookh lagi hai . Phir ab tum keh rahe ho ki tumhe bhookh he nahi . Aise kaise ho sakta hai ? " Ambika said " Jethani Ji pata nahi kyun par abhi mujhe bilkool bhi bhookh nahi hai . Ap mere fikar mat kijiye . Main sone jaa rahi hoon . " Meethi said " Ruko main bhi tumhare saath chalti hoon tumhe sulaake aati hoon . " Ambika then said " Nahi Jethani Ji
iski koi zaroorat nahi hai . Main khud hi chali jaati hoon . " Meethi began to say " Par... " " Nahi Jethani ji ap khanan khaiye Jeth Ji ke saath main sone ja rahi hoon " Saying this Ambika got up and went away . Meethi kept looking at her retreating back .

if u like and comment on it i can continue

INDEX

part 1 - page 1
part 2 - page 2
part 3 - page 5
part 4 - page 7
part 5 - page 9
part 6 - page 12
part 7 - page 14
Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dia,its awesome plz continue with overdose of meekash romance yaar.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveyouichcha

Dia,its awesome plz continue with overdose of meekash romance yaar.

u liked it ? really ? it is my first attempt to rite
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ya dia, i liked it very much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok Abila will update it soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your really awesome !!
I am sure ur story will fetch awesome TRPs

Plz updatesoon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good work, I am just loving meekash.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am totally impressed wit ur FF.
Please update the next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sudharsan24399

Your really awesome !!

I am sure ur story will fetch awesome TRPs

Plz updatesoon

wish they show something good
positive track always brings trps
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meekashfan

Good work, I am just loving meekash.

i too love meekash 😊

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