RUIN: One Shot (Completed) - Page 2

Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs

Oh god Niki... What is this?!!? This is surprise angst I tell you!!

When I started reading this, it looked like it was going towards a typical Fatejo fanfic. But as the story progressed, I literally felt goosebumps when Fateh's mental state was revealed.

I loved it all dammit! Fateh going crazy was unexpected but such a welcome twist. I loved MahiRaj pairing.

Again, it was a marvelous job on your part. Thanks for the update!

Hehe... surprise angst is a right way of describing it.

When I started this....it was meant to be a dream thing and Jasso as his wife in reality where he finds Tejo only in his dreams. But end mein yeh ho gaya😂

I am glad you liked Mahiraj.

Also now a days, I am invested to see a crazy Fateh..dunno Why!!!

- Niki

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Hehe... surprise angst is a right way of describing it.

When I started this....it was meant to be a dream thing and Jasso as his wife in reality where he finds Tejo only in his dreams. But end mein yeh ho gaya😂

I am glad you liked Mahiraj.

Also now a days, I am invested to see a crazy Fateh..dunno Why!!!

- Niki

I think I know why. It's cuz he's driving us crazy, so we might as well return the favor through fanfics 😆

Originally posted by: Tahiti-1

Nikiiiii!! This hurt so good. I loved this. It was painful and beautiful. Jasmine's punishment was losing her sister, Fateh's punishment (or at least the consequence meant for him) was his slow descent to madness when he lost his wife. They all were portrayed wonderfully. I loved how you created the narrative, I could actually imagine everything. I will definitely come to this story from time to time. Absolutely brilliant! ❤️

Thanks for giving it a chance.

Hurt is always very poignant when it is portrayed. Reading angst is one of my favourite genres. I guess that's why I dabble so much in it.

Here...both JasFa got their karma handed over to them. Jasmine ended up being the killer of her own sister and Fateh lost it. Its kind of a like a tangled web of misery and consequences!

I am glad you liked it.

- Niki

Originally posted by: Blessed_Soul

This was too good!! It was sadistically amazing!

Loved him and felt much peace after watching the horrible precap!😆

Very well written💗

Thanks a lot for liking it.

I know it was sadistic but fitting isn't it?

Thanks for reading it.

- Niki

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

So well written. The plot was amazing. I had goosebumps. Angst, love, hurt ... Everything was portrayed so beautifully.

You're an amazing writer 😊

Thanks a lot for your appreciation.

I am happy that you liked this plot and the writing.

- Niki

Originally posted by: D_e_s_t_i_n_y

Wow❤️

Jaise mein pehle para padha mujhe nahi laga ke story aisha turn le... Shocking twist tha...😆

😂😂😂

Hehe....isne mukhe bhi shock kia when it turned out like this 😬

Originally posted by: mrsrakhra

Trust me, my instict was telling me that this could be a dream, but what came next was totally unexpected, I was almost crying. This was such an intense plot and you have portrayed Fateh's motions so wonderfully. Felt bad for the poor guy and for Tejo too 😔

Your style of writing is wonderful👏

Your instinct was not wrong. Believe me...I began writing it as a dream and then it took this turn. Surprised me too😅

If you felt bad for Fateh, that means I have somewhat succeeded.

Thank you.

- niki

Originally posted by: nooriex

Hi!! I'm super new to the Udaariyaan forum and I love FaTejo but unfortunately don't follow the show that much due to my frustration with the current track. But I love reading your works and this one was just amazing that I couldn't refrain from commenting! Love your oneshots!🤗

Hola dear! Hope we see you in the forum.

I am glad you commented. And I am even happier that you liked this work. Thanks a lot.

- niki

Originally posted by: hapc

Oh my god, I didn’t see that twist coming. It was so heartbreaking. Even though I’m annoyed at Fateh, this is something I wouldn’t wish for anyone. Poor Mahi and Abhiraaj. But I’m actually happy that you showed their pairing. Can’t believe how Sandhus and Virks agreed for another alliance between their families. Sidenote: I love love love your writing. Waiting for broken and next chapter of tainted. XD

Hehe... that's the purpose of a twist right 😈

Kya kare....the Sandhus and Virk's are determined to have one proper pairing between their families 😂

Also, I am glad you loved it.

As for others... Tainted is up.

- Niki

Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

Gosh beautiful written loved it beyond words. I know what Im saying is sadist but I hope that fateh undergoes such pain when he realizes her value and what he's lost. But I wish then Tejo refuses to reciprocate and moves on with a hotter more charismatic guy and fateh unable to bear the pain after realizing that what he felt for jasmine was infatuation never love and that he loves Tejo. He pins and begs her but she refuses saying she doesn't feel the same way and then fateh unable to bear the pain loses his sanity.

Its ok buddy....all of us are mostly pissed at Fateh boy.

He definitely will undergo agonising pain at losing Tejo and we will see it one day.

- niki