Udariyaan: Two shots - Page 2

This is so goooodddd! Aww I wish we got more!

I love this sooo much!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️

Love that Tejo has grown so much!!! Please please add a part-3 if possible!!

I just taught of watching but no Yaar this is something I can't think so toxic 😭😭😭 both have toxic and criminal minded siblings

I love mahi in this story and kushbeer is a character k really liked and in this one also seems great

Because you want it so bad too. Lol wrote a lil thing. And your username is a lil difficult to find

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Because you want it so bad too. Lol wrote a lil thing. And your username is a lil difficult to find

Omg Bluekohl you're amazing!! It was so wonderful I cried through it lol.

Thank you so much for tagging me cuz I got to read this beautiful fic. But tell me is it really the end?! Oh goodness I want soooo much more!!!

First of all I'm so glad that you didn't show Jasfa gatecrashing Tejo's wedding lmao (I might've had to pull out a gun or something 😆🔫💣)

Second, Khusbeer and Mahi are just *chef's kiss* showstoppers. The moment Khushbeer came in to walk Tejo down the aisle I choked with emotions, Again I'm glad that her toxic fam was not incorporated 🤔

Lastly, thank you for penning down this beautiful piece and giving me a chance to read it. Independent Tejo supremacy yall!!

P.S: I never accounted for how hard it'd be for people to tag me when I chose my username. Now it'd be too tedious to change it.😛

Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs

Omg Bluekohl you're amazing!! It was so wonderful I cried through it lol.

Thank you so much for tagging me cuz I got to read this beautiful fic. But tell me is it really the end?! Oh goodness I want soooo much more!!!

First of all I'm so glad that you didn't show Jasfa gatecrashing Tejo's wedding lmao (I might've had to pull out a gun or something 😆🔫💣)

Second, Khusbeer and Mahi are just *chef's kiss* showstoppers. The moment Khushbeer came in to walk Tejo down the aisle I choked with emotions, Again I'm glad that her toxic fam was not incorporated 🤔

Lastly, thank you for penning down this beautiful piece and giving me a chance to read it. Independent Tejo supremacy yall!!

P.S: I never accounted for how hard it'd be for people to tag me when I chose my username. Now it'd be too tedious to change it.😛

I really don't know. Considering the way show is going on, I might go to my happy place where tejo is marrying someone worthwhile and write some more.

Lol no way imma let jasfa gatecrash the wedding.

And thanks a lot. It's such a beautiful review, really inspired me.

Wow, this was an amazing piece, a nice refresher given what we are watching onscreen. I really liked your style of writing. 😊

Kudos to Mahi and Khushbeer 👏 for standing with Tejo, they are one of few characters that I like on the show.

Just wow man! I am speechless. An amazing twist, I loved how you made her settle in Canada where unexpectedly she ended up finding the peace that she couldn't find at her "home". And of course, Mahi Tejo Khushbeer bonding is just over the top. Khushbeer walking down her aisle, that too in Canada the place he would never go to, but came just for Tejo was the highlight according to me. And of course the JasFa marriage track was equally pleasing. I just loved everything, every little detail you put in there (I am sure you gave it a lot of thought) and these minute things in the end came full circle. And the cherry on the top was I read both the chapters in one go😍😍😍 Do post such amazing works of yours. We surely need such sweet doses in between.