Fatejo - BEGANI SHADI MEIN ABDULLAH DEWANA!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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For all who had been reading and following my os tq for ur time. My deepest appreciation.This os is about the upcoming track which is a fiction.There is an unexpected twist at the climax. It wont happen in actual but wish it does. U can leave ur comments if u like it


Fatejo - BEGANI SHADI MEIN ABDULLAH DEWANA!


8pm at virks residence!

Jasmin sandhu weds gippy singh!

The invitation card resting on the dining table . He was surprised that he was not at all affected by it. Not for once. It was absurd after all the feelings he developed for her two years back

mujhey farak nehin peda ! Lekin kyun?

He was deep in his thoughts looking for the clear answers

Fateh !

Tum aur tejo cheley jana !

Babuji's voice heard across the table

The virks decided not to attend the occasion after what jasmin put them through and kushbeer aplogised to rupi for virk's rejection for participating the celebrations. The later understood and apologised as well. He cant't rectify the unfortunate deeds of his own daughter other than bowing himself for an apology.


Fateh was not keen with family conversations at the dining table but on his wife

Where is she? Damn!

Tejo was busy with the strategic and operational planning of the sports academy with the new investor

Mr chipku!

Yes that's what fateh tagged him

Operation ka naam le le key sale mera hi bheja operate kar reha hai !

Jab dekho biwi key pallu key sath chipakta rehta hai!

Karun toh kya karun!

Furiously he squeezed the capati between his fingers real hard.

No any virks noticed his anxiety for the past two weeks

There was a time he was irritated with mr chipku by spilling out his frustrations to buzo but overheard by kushbeer who lashed at him saying it's difficult to attract investors for business. Tejo is smart. She can handle well. You just dont interfere!

Afraid of his father's wrath he was silenced like being sentenced to death!

Ok mr chipku is understandable but how about her!

Doesnt she realise that i am her husband and its not ok if she agrees to mr chipku's invitations to lunch and dinner to discuss the academy strategic plans

Strategic plans my foot!

Strategic tackling it is !

And that too with my wife!

Out of all the women in the world!

Annoyed , he didnt finish his meal and gave an excuse to go to bed early


9pm U and Me Dine in Restaurant

Ringgg!

She looked at the caller id displayed on her smart phone and frowned

Fateh!

Oh no!

Not again !

Its the fifth time he rang her since the past hour

She had left it to ring on silence mode so as not to offend her dinner companion the investor

It's not easy to get investors!

Please be careful with your approach!

Her father in law's words deep in her thoughts

Fateh was not understanding to the fact that she had to accept their guest's polite invitations for lunch and dinner to discuss their marketing plans as she was occupied with lectures almost full day.

They really required the investment and fateh was behaving quite odd.

She was not able to get it. Why is he doing this when he knows it will be beneficial for the academy in the long run. The requirement of being diplomatic in business relations is essential for the future business growth . Still throwing unnecessary tantrums saying

Why do you need to accept the dine in invitations and the restaurant U and Me dine in why cant it be U , Me and My husband dine in?

Why always U and Me only?

I dont understand why am i not invited?

Why only you invited?

Why you agree ?

Blah blah blah

He goes on and on till she had to finally decide to ignore him till the project is accomplished respecting to kushbeer's request and to take out her vengeance once everything is settled

Worse still was when he pasted their marriage certificate on every wall of the academy that shook her hard. A suggestion from his super intelligent friend buzo

Declare tejo as your wife!

A crazy husband with a crazier friend!

He didnt give a clear answer to his deed which puzzled her . Little did she know that a simple word it was

Jealousy!

Just be patient! She consoled herself


11pm virks residense

He was fast asleep as she walked into the room .

Ring!!

She took slow steps into the showers to receive the call from her beloved mother satti who advised her to be on time as the next morning was jasmin's haldi ceremony


8am

Dressed in a blue sherwani he was looking handsome seated next to her as he drove down the road to her sister's wedding destination. Not a word since morning. It was not something new. He's been like that lately and she missed the last time that they had a candid conversation

Ache leg rehey ho!

She complimented with a sweet smile

He was silent. Pretended to ignore her

Mainey kaha achey leg rehey ho!

He smirked

Lekin tum achi nehin leg rehi ho !

Dont talk!

I am driving ok!

She didnt know what to say. Just sighed

Shadi key side effects!


10am at sandhus

Sound of dhol and music as well dance alongside with jasmin's haldi rasam . She was giving fateh those sweet looks while the haldi was applied thinking that he will stop my marriage at the very last minute as he loves me dearly and cant see me tying the knot with anyone else. Jasmin was in the delusion that fateh would stop her marriage at the last moment and accept his love for her. Little did she know that his brains stopped working since the investor came knocking into her sister's life.


Fateh frowned as mr. Chipku walked into sandhus's living room . Tejo invited him after kushbeer advised her to do so.

We need to please him!

Kushbeer advised her calmly and to which fateh shifted his sleeping venue to the balcony throwing tantrums as to why his enemy was given the invitation card

Tejo smiled at fateh reassuring that it's ok and to which he ignored. Viraj noticed their glances and confronted tejo who gave an excuse that fateh was tired thats all

Even the other sandhus realised as well

12 pm sandhus residense

His eyes set on her. Dressed in pink pastal lehenga she was looking stunning as ever but she was busy with that mr chipku and it offended him to the core.

Viraj aek beer mil sakti hai!

He requested his brother in law who handed over a bottle of Carlsberg from the refrigerator and made fun that jiju it's lunch time not beer time.

Little did he realise that the former had forgotten lunch and dinner meals lately since a chipku interfered in his marriage life spending more time with his precious sweet innocent wife

He washed the alcohol down his throat to calm his raging heart.

Fateh ! Mein kaisi leg rehi hun !

And thank u for coming !

Jasmin's sweet voice heard from behind

He didnt turn to look at her even for a second and replied sarcastically

Shadi kar rehi ho toh achi to lego gi!

Jasmin walked away smiling to herself thinking that he has started drinking liquor coz he is upset of me getting married.

He will stop the marriage at that last moment!

Plan working !

Walked towards her room and took out a small bottle of ointment she smirked and said

You are my good luck!

Returned the item into her desk drawer.

And thank god that irritating gippy is organising his own functions separately !

She sighed with a huge relief

Gippy and his family didnt join sandhus and decided to have their own marriage rituals held at their residense. In fact only wanted haldi and mehendi to be carried on cancelling sangeet as he was eager to marry jasmin and leave for canada soonest possible. Sandhus decided to just play along hoping no trouble this time. Eager to get rid of their spoilt kid

She was also relieved that there were no phone calls from him the past three days as he texted and said

I am busy. Will meet on wedding day!


1pm

MR chipku was seated next to tejo at the dining table for lunch as she was very sweetly serving him with home made dishes which made fateh swallow his meals hard. Stood up made an excuse to visit a close friend requested viraj to drop tejo home and left hurriedly.

Spend the rest of the day with buzo and some friends at a pub


9 pm at virks residence

He spoke little at the dining table. She was still out with that investor inviting her for dinner to discuss the academy plans.

When will this be over?

He was so annoyed and walked away to his room pinning for her

Wished she could understand that her absence affects me alot?


11pm

He was fast asleep at the balcony when she walked into the room . Sighed to her slumber thinking when will all this be over.

Why cant he understand it's necessary to please the investor?. We need the investment badly


The next day was jasmin's mehendi .

Tejo tu bhi lega ley ! Biji ushered her to sit next to jasmin to put henna on her palm

Tejo was reluctant

Haan tejo u should apply!

Mr chipku interrupted while walking towards tejo to which fateh rushed forward took tejo's arm before the former could reach her and smiled

Tejo my wife pls put na !

Achi legey gi !

And instructed the henna lady

Achey sey legana mera naam !

Fateh !

In big letters ok!

Becoz i am the husband!

Make it nice ok didi!


Sandhus laughed but confused at the same time giving tejo that kindda weird looks !

Isko kya hogeya !

Wondering what happened to their SIL

Tejo gave a weak smile thinking to herself

Kya betaun ap sab ko!

Aek comedian pati ko jel rehin hun !

Reincarnation of charlie chaplin!

Jasmin smiled as she thought that fateh was doing it on purpose to make her jealous. Little did she know his real intentions of competing with mr chipku and the prize was her own sister

Tejo's mehendi colour was really dark as they say it indicates husband loves u dearly which puzzled sandhus to extreme levels and tejo herself as well relating to the fact that it was a force marriage in the first place.

Jasmin smirked and consoled herself

Cant be !

He loves me only!

As usual mr chipku has a say in everything

Tejo ur mehendi is very nice!

Everyone smiled but was shocked as he continued

But ur husband name na written too big !

Only if it was a little smaller would have been better!

All silence and suddenly Harman burst out laughing to cover up the situation after watching fateh's full of annoyance look.

The other sandhus joined seconds later as they understood the signal

Tejo gave a weak smile thinking nervously

He's been sleeping at the balcony for days now just hope he doesnt jump over it tonight!

Oh god ! When will this be over!

Rupi gave a look of instruction filled towards viraj to which the latter understood immediately as well as obeyed.

Take ur BIL away for a while. Offer him a drink too!


The day of the wedding

10am sandhus residense

Jasmin was looking extremely beautiful in that chilli red wedding garment but his eyes were set on her brides maid instead

Her sister and his wife!

She looked gorgeous in that purple pink gold embroided lehenga which he bought personally from Ludhiana the main textile city of punjab apart from Amritsar.

Never knew she was so beautiful he thought to himself feeling relieved that she wore his choice despite the fact that satti tailor made one for her as well

Well he's been throwing tantrums lately and if i dont wear his choice God knows what will happen !

She thought to herself avoiding his glance escorting her bride to be sister to be seated at the mandap .

Oh ! He's looking at me!

I just knew it !

He just cant take it!

Plan working jasmin!

She calmed herself as he was looking into her direction and not realising that it was the person walking next to her that interested him more .

Her sister!


11am

Gippy ko phone karo!

Rupi's shaky voice after the hour wait for the not coming yet baraat.

No ring tone. Everyone tried except fateh whose eyes was still set upon that Mr chipku chatting candidly with his wife at a corner of the hallway

Jasmin was restless sitting at the mandap as the minutes passed and pandit keeps saying

Muhurat nikla ja raha hai !

Oh no ! if gippy doesnt come how will my plan work !

How will fateh stop the marriage then!


12 pm

Still no sign of the baraat and then the bomb drops at half hour later when sandhus decided to check gippy's residence. Found out from neighbours

Gippy and family left for canada five days ago!

Surprisingly no one had a breakdown or a heartattack

Only confusion and disappointment

The only one crying loudly was satti to which rupi replied sarcastically that ur daughter sow her own seeds!

Then they understood the reason for gippy performing the functions separately

It was all planned!

Minutes later gippy's text message on rupi's phone

Uncle very very sorry!

I cant marry ur daughter!

She still loves her ex!

I cant help it!


At 1 pm sandhus residence

Jasmin ran to her room very much shattered with gippy's betrayal at the last moment

Plan didnt work!

Tejo rushed after her when fateh held her hand objecting and pulled her towards

The mandap!

Furious jasmin took out the bottle of ointment and drank it. The label read

Beware!

Rat poison!

She bought it few days back as part of her plan to trap fateh to accept her

Suicide stunt at the mandap if fateh didnt show any reaction to stop the marriage there and then

She was ready with the plan B as well

Seconds later she fall on the ground unconscious

None of the sandhus came to see her as they were busy celebrating her older sister's remarriage at the mandap requested by her very desperate husband who wanted to declare her as a wife in front of his new strong rival Mr chipku

Panditji was reluctant at first saying muhurat going to end but twisted his words when fateh said excitedly

Triple guru dakhshana dunga !



A flashback when jasmin ran to her room

Fateh held tejo 's hand and announced loudly to which everyone present were extremely shocked but agreed eventually as he was right

Fateh stated

all are dressed well

Mandap is ready

Dulha dulhan ran away

Why waste the decorations and food

Advance payments given

No refund upon cancellations

We have my remarriage instead

All cheered. Sandhus played along as they thought at least one daughter settled down happily now and why waste our money.

Tejo obeyed nervously afraid her crazy tantrum full husband might jump from the balcony if she refused.

Fateh excited as ever as now he wants to declare her as his wife in front of that chipku investor. His main motive for his sudden decision

So fateh and tejo had a remarriage on jasmin's mandap upon fateh's demand

Everyone enjoyed and two hours later virks were informed by their beloved son through tele conversation

Greh prevesh ki teiyarian karlo!

Phirsey shadi karkey ayya hun!

Virks shocked

Who's the wife?

Jasmin or tejo?

Then sighed a huge relief when he calmly repied

Tejo!


3pm

Jasmin sandhu admitted to ICU city hospital punjab

Cause

Drank rat poison !

Only half bottle!

Sandhus wete disappointed

She could have drank full !



Ps

inspiration for this os is from other itv serials!

Well preeran married twice

Abhigya four times or more

So why cant fatejo?









































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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow this amazing 👏👏👏

Fateh 🤣🤣

Hope we get to see FaTejo mrg once again😍😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was so so much fun!! Loved it!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ha ha ha .... I shared the same disappointment as the Sandhus!! A jealous Fateh is gold...so cute so protective...loved it!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏


Buddy...you are a riot.

Yeh ideas kaha se ate hain tumhe.

God...I laughed so hard.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So sad Sandhus.. I feel ur pain and I share ur thought.

It is very unfair. Why half bottle, why not full bottle?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sorry for the delay in reply

I was busy writing two more fictions😁

Tq for ur comments

Appreciate

Coming up is one more which is totally unexpected

Also upcoming track

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏


Buddy...you are a riot.

Yeh ideas kaha se ate hain tumhe.

God...I laughed so hard.


Haha😂 i like ur comment

Hei buddy

Good question

Ideas coming from on screen only with added desi tadka 😂

Trying to be more creative than the makers😂

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