JASRIK: A love story made in hell (and a hint of FATEJO) OS/SS

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Posted: 4 years ago
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"Maine nahin sunna kuch bhi. Bhaad mein jao tum" Jasmine screamed as Amrik winced a little, trying to control his expressions as his wife screamed at him on their wedding anniversary. His faith in Karma has been restored fully, as he admitted to himself that it must be the result of his anti Tejo nautanki when she entered the Virk household.

It'd been three years since Fateh and Tejo got married, Jasmine was busy in a threesome between her Canada's ambition, and reconquer Fateh mission. In a dramatic twist which would put any telenovella to shame, exactly after one year later Fatejo got married she had to tie the knots with Amrik.She was still playing ping pong between seducing Fateh and trapping Gippy so she could settle in Canada when Gippy found out his fiance was proclaiming her passionate love to her hot and charming jijaji. He left her at Mandap after insulting ten generations of Sandhus in front of entire khandan.

"Maine toh pehle hi kaha tha, iss ladki ko roz thappad padne chahiye subah subah'' Mami chimed in.

Someone jokingly mentioned that Jasrik should get married just how Fatejo came together, and surprisingly after a bit of drama, it happened. Amrik thought he had hit the jackpot, and Jasmine had to agree as in a surprising twist her mother told her she'd either marry Amrik or she has to leave the house, and she'll be disowned. Despite how high her head used to be in clouds, this last year she's come crashing down. She has realised she didn't have much going on for her, apart from her exaggerated tales of beauty. She's stepped out couple of times with Gippy and realised the world simply doesn't give a shit about her noor or hoor. In fact at times she felt so small when she used to meet people in parties, none of them were impressed with her for a moment. Knowing well she doesn't have a choice, she agreed to the match.

" Tumhe pata hai ki Fateh ne Tejo ke liye khud cake banaya...khud! Fateh ne uske liye sabyasachi ki sari kharidi! tumhe kuch nahin padi.Use papa ne jewelry set bhi diya. Mujhe kuch mila...nahin. Kyon? Kaise aadmi ho tum...apni biwi ke liye nahin bol sakte." Jasmine continued her frustrations.

"Cake banaya toh humko bhi khilaya na! Aur itne toh kapde hain tumhare pass...aur kya karogi? Aur papa ne jewelry set tejo ko gift isliye diya kyonki uski wajah se academy successful ho rahi hai. Har waqt fateh...har waqt tejo...tum unhi ke saath raha karo''


NOTE: I don't know what it is. One shot, SS, ff... tbh this idea just came into my mind and I wrote it down.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

"Maine nahin sunna kuch bhi. Bhaad mein jao tum" Jasmine screamed as Amrik winced a little, trying to control his expressions as his wife screamed at him on their wedding anniversary. His faith in Karma has been restored fully, as he admitted to himself that it must be the result of his anti Tejo nautanki when she entered the Virk household.



"Cake banaya toh humko bhi khilaya na! Aur itne toh kapde hain tumhare pass...aur kya karogi? Aur papa ne jewelry set tejo ko gift isliye diya kyonki uski wajah se academy successful ho rahi hai. Har waqt fateh...har waqt tejo...tum unhi ke saath raha karo''



it's a one shot 😆


@bold 🤣🤣

His long overdue karma for being a brat and annoying 🤪🤪

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is brilliant. Both of them deserve each other.🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's so wonderful...serves Amrik right😂😂😂😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Ole Ole.....Amrik!!!!

😈

the biggest TejRik fan, she'll write AU stories 😆


There should be a ship name for Gippy and Jasmine

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was soothing to my soul 😌 thank you for writing this! 🤩

I love that both Amrik and Jasmine got what they deserve! Karma served them right 🥳

I also love the little details about FaTejo 🥺 those two are precious ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: music_girl

the biggest TejRik fan, she'll write AU stories 😆


There should be a ship name for Gippy and Jasmine


A friend of mine said their ship name should be Gasmine 👀


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tahiti-1


A friend of mine said their ship name should be Gasmine 👀


Yesss!

P. S. I love me some jasrik misery so I might just write more of it bcz makers refuse to see the comedic potential of this couple

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tahiti-1


A friend of mine said their ship name should be Gasmine 👀


Its funny seems related to any kind of gas disease🤣

it can be Jaspy

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Posted: 4 years ago
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dil khush kar ditta😃

And completing wish to gippy ditching jasm in mandap and amrik get what he like most👍🏼

again thanks for casting rock star mami with her thappad😆

so mirror told truth to jasm and she accepted amrik alliance and uper se satti's dhamki to disown yes kon uthayega iske nakhre

amrik thought he got jackpot but found its crackpot doing kir kir all the time

loved fatejo progress they are cuties

jasmine is the same whining child doing fatejo jaap

ab bhugto amrik

loved it very much

do write more

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