The Squeak…. A mini OS - My Ra4gKor

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The Squeak…. A mini OS

Should trouble always befall on the eagle…why why… Hey bagwan

She was panicking holding on to the roses. They couldnot understand anything but knew mumma was worried for them.

How did he get in? how come no one knew? What is his intention? Oh god, I must keep the kids and the Mansion safe. She was palpitating. The kids were asking mumma mummaa….looking up and calling bhaai bhaai….

Arjun and AAyansh stay in your rooms… She was paranoid. The cubs not understanding anything called daddy…. The Rover roared…calling her, she was not responding to the calls. Hey god what happened. He called the Mansion line, somebody picked the phone but just kept it he could hear various noises. The rolling and banging of sticks.

Whats happening bajrangbali…. He called Govind… could not be reached…. His phone battery too died.

AT the Mansion,the boys took courage and took the girls with them…. Ar and Aa you all be in the room do not come out till I call. Mumma hainaaaa don’t worry but she was absolutely jittering. Raaghav where are you…

Don’t worry,she ran calling everyone… donot shout, we need to find him.. she was jittering,her face was full of sweat. The Mansion is well protected with a huge compound walls how can he enter, where is he…

She very slowly went up and down the Mansion and went into her room. Calling out all donot come out…..

The kids shouted mumma mummaaaaa……. Raaghav roared and ran into the mansion….Chakooooor his eyes was panicked…..Arjun, Mausi, Kaaka, Aayansh…… the furnitures were chaotic…. He got scared….

Daadddy!!!!! came out Arjun, be carefull…. See down…watch out.

He squeeeeakkkkked through through…his legs....… the little two eyed four small legged with a tail and big ears went running through and one hit with his leg, the Lion caught his tail……

Queeek quuukeeed sqqueeeakkkkkk he was squeeeakking aloud…….. he lifted him upside down….. Ar ran and took him… mummmaaaa we caught him……

She shouted from the room…. Ok ok don’t bring him here….. leave him safely far outside. Don’t bring it to the girls…. Sh ewas non stop giving instructions but not coming out of the room….

The cubs,roses and the Lion went up…… to the room… She was in the corner curled up on top of the step ladder, eyes closed, fists closed, holding close to her heart….Non stop talking…..

They were surprised to see the eagle like a scared sparrow, frittering…

Buuuuugggghhhhhhh all laughed at her. Mummaaaa its just a small little rat and you are scared….. no no no don’t bring it to me….. I am scared of chuha…..

Whaaaaatttttt, mumma darthey bi….. ha ha ha ha mumma dar gayeeeee… laughed the roses and cubs. Raaghav was all laughing at the same time tears in his eyes as few minutes back he thought what he didn’t want to think about.

Chakooooorrrr, please open your eyes. The rat is caught. Haaan haan hame dar nahi but you know I just don’t like rat. Ohhhh, laughed the boys…. Why are you laughing??…. Ok ok now what did you do? She asked…what to do?.. we just left him outside the mansion said Raaghav.

Whaattt ?????you left him? Raaghav how can you do that. Don’t you know rats carry all types of diseases. If he again comes into the kitchen and urinates and if the kids stamp on it, it leads to leptospirosis. Also its poisonous. The boys and the girls very very silently slipped through knowing AIR is on and she will not stop.

So what you want me to do… kill him?

Ok…. Nooooo how can you be insensitive, it’s a poor rat how can you kill a life. Poor don’t know if it has little ones.

Arrey then what you want me to do, take visa, flight ticket and send him off to America??? He asked..

Haaan not a bad idea, he will be safe and will not come here too… she was still on the stepladder…. Chakor...He went near her touched. Aaaahhhhhhh she yelled and jumped on him and both fell down on the floor with a big thud…..

See you made me fall don’t know where the rat will be….. he was smiling looking at her talking non stop, just tightening his hold , you never stop…. No he will runn…..he cupped her face mmmmmmmmm he just closed her in his style….Hmmmmmm her jittering calmed… slowly she opened her eyes… looking into his eyes…..giving in to his kissing, opening hers…. Her chest was slowing down as he was rubbing her back……

Mummmmmaaaaaa kids were calling out………

Raaghav leave me what are you doing…. Hmmmmmmm what to do you never stop unless I stop you… kissing her they both got up. She realized and started laughing ha ha how stupid I am telling you to take a flight ticket for a rat…. Both had a hearty laugh….

Buuuut!!! Where is the rat she asked?…… mummmaaaa , they both peeped from their balcony seeing the small one in a big rabbit hutch running happily here and there… while the cubs and roses were clapping hands and laughing. Mumma….. Stuart Little is here…. Ram kaaka took the hutch gave some vegies through a small hole.

They ran upto their room…. Mummaaaaa so you too fear about something that too a chuha???Aa was teasing… the roses said chakoooriyaaa dar gayiiiiii.. hmmm she poutedcutely closing her face…. Arjun was smiling at her… You too going to tease meshe asked. No mumma… but you looked sooocute when you were on the step ladder. My Eagle, Tigress Mumma was like a (signing his hands small) chota sa sparrow…like Ananya you were looking. love you mumma,he said….

She kissed him with shy…. But we cannot keep the rat in a hutch… just take him and leave off somewhere hilly side. But the cubs said mumma please please we shall have him like we have the rabbits please mumma… pleasseeee pouted the roses too… hmm we cannot pet a rat. Why why when Stuart Little can be a pet why can’t this rat. Hmmm ok you can have him for a day or two and leave him free…NO touching I am telling again No touching. Also we should not cage any one curtailing their freedom.. the rabbits are happy to be with us, they are not caged, they stay in their hutches during the nights to stay away from the chillness and to remain safe.

They agreed ok mumma , we will have him for two days and leave him… but if he comes back. Nooooo she said… please…. Ok ok mumma…. They went down amused at their new found intruder turned guest.

All the while Raaghav was just looking at her admiring her…..She just went into him…smiling in shy… he lifted her chin.. dara dhiya mujhe… he said… I never knew my birdie is so scared about a chuha.. pouting cutely she said mmmmm and went into his chest closing her eyes… She was fitting into him perfectly…. Am sorry to scare every one she said… I know I feel so so stupid… but I ammmm……he was smiling…holding her waist around, drawing her close to him, Lifting her chin…… she closed her eyes…. Expecting the bliss on her lips….

Looking at the one who was squeaking happily, he said thank you Stuart Little for bringing out the innocence in my birdie… kissing her forehead… closing his eyes placing his chin on her head which was resting on his heart with eyes closed.

The moon was happy shining bright…. Feeling happy looking at the lovely couple who just love only loveeach other….

I love you dear……. My little birdie…… hugging her tight… crushing her… aawwwhhhh she squeaked.. budda…. Dhard ho rahahai… kahaan he asked smirking, biting her lips…

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After the emotional one just thought to share a lighter vein.... Hope you all liked it.....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Ganga

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Sumi dear you scared me. I thought new problem or new villian 😂😂😂 wt a suspense 😁😁😁 still I'm laughing 😝😝😂😂😂rat🐰🐭🐩🐩🐩🐩 😁😁😛😛😛😛😂😂poor chakor baahhhhhhhhhhhhhh😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂. nice thought cool update 💜💜💜💜💜😍😍😍😍😍🤗🤗

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I know just a chillax relax.. Stress buster for all

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sritama hahsha for the lovely words

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Omg😂😂😂😂😂u stumped me completely 😆😆😆😆I thought he was Ragkor's old enemy...trying to harm Chakor n d kids in d absence of Raghav...lol😂😂😂😂Rat attack it was😆😆scared Chakor,her nonstop chatter... 😍😍so adorable 💜💜n our rowdey stopping her in his signature style🙈😍😍mesmerized Raghav enjoying his birdie's innocence💜..d fun n d laughter Ragkor, A2 n d roses shared.. so sweet n cute💜💜loved it immensely..thank u so much for dis bonus treat Sumi di😘😘

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Hehe a bit of a chillax to relax

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sukor123 for the lovely words

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Haha 😂😂😂 firstly I thought may be some enemy of RagKor then when we read full story I can,t stop myself for laughing Aww our brave Chakor scared from a little rat and loved the way Raghav stop his Chakor with his signature style & also Raghav enjoyed Chakor innocence Thanks for this cute story 😍😍😍

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ha ha ha sumi...😂😂😍😍😍😍 only you can think of all this.... hilarious change indeed..

Imaging meera in the scene😍😍

kids and raghav so sweet..... kids must have had a gala time seeing the eagle mom scared of a rat!

And raghav babu never leaves a chance to quieten his birdie😍 I am head over heels for...... you know na😜

AIR ...😂😂😂 sending the stuart little to US.... remembered the lakeside scene of ragkor...

And rat ofcourse reminded me of the sukor well scene.....

Bhalla idiot what have you done!!! A nice journey clipped for what???? Have never been able to understand that!!!!

Anyways thanks for this light stress reliever 😘

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Originally posted by: 77nikita

Ha ha ha sumi...😂😂😍😍😍😍 only you can think of all this.... hilarious change indeed..

Imaging meera in the scene😍😍

kids and raghav so sweet..... kids must have had a gala time seeing the eagle mom scared of a rat!

And raghav babu never leaves a chance to quieten his birdie😍 I am head over heels for...... you know na😜

AIR ...😂😂😂 sending the stuart little to US.... remembered the lakeside scene of ragkor...

And rat ofcourse reminded me of the sukor well scene.....

Bhalla idiot what have you done!!! A nice journey clipped for what???? Have never been able to understand that!!!!

Anyways thanks for this light stress reliever 😘

Nikkikkiiii, you know your insane Sumi... 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Goes bonkers..

Haha rat yes i remembered the well though forgot the lakeside and thanks for reminding..

The kids now knows mumma weakness.. And we all like our pouty cutie birdie..

Raaghav 🙈🙈🙈🙈 what to say... All girls want him he was infact on make my trip to book tkts for him and birdie to escape to US...

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Cute story, the mighty Chakor is scared of a rat 😆.

The flight ticket to America 🤣

Very entertaining, loved Ragkor sweet moments.

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Originally posted by: nemo316

Cute story, the mighty Chakor is scared of a rat 😆.

The flight ticket to America 🤣

Very entertaining, loved Ragkor sweet moments.


Maaaiiii 😍😍😍🤗🤗🤗

Thanks so much dear

Yeah i too ROFLd after writing tickets to America.. Just wrote with a flow imaging MEEJAY.

Your words mean a lot....

Thanks again 😊

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Sumi dear🤗


Image.. Good one...😁😁

When chakor was scared and place was messed, I guessed it isnt a person but a four legged one😛 but rat..omg😂 you reminded me of that 'well'scene and i can purely visualise our chakor in it..it would had been so cute

And Raghav babu, he finds a way to comfort his love with his warmth all time😉

And their convo on rat..😂

And that tickets to America, typical meejay scene I can visualise..

that wasImage

Loved the light hearted fun family moments😊

but how can I miss Sumi's trademark cute sweet one with emotion touching us. I loved the below scene

Arjun was smiling at her… You too going to tease meshe asked. No mumma… but you looked sooocute when you were on the step ladder. My Eagle, Tigress Mumma was like a (signing his hands small) chota sa sparrow…like Ananya you were looking. love you mumma,he said….

She kissed him with shy….


Good one dear. And the start, you did succeeded to keep up the suspense😊...thanks a lot for this one🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear🤗


Image.. Good one...😁😁

When chakor was scared and place was messed, I guessed it isnt a person but a four legged one😛 but rat..omg😂 you reminded me of that 'well'scene and i can purely visualise our chakor in it..it would had been so cute

And Raghav babu, he finds a way to comfort his love with his warmth all time😉

And their convo on rat..😂

And that tickets to America, typical meejay scene I can visualise..

that wasImage

Loved the light hearted fun family moments😊

but how can I miss Sumi's trademark cute sweet one with emotion touching us. I loved the below scene

Arjun was smiling at her… You too going to tease meshe asked. No mumma… but you looked sooocute when you were on the step ladder. My Eagle, Tigress Mumma was like a (signing his hands small) chota sa sparrow…like Ananya you were looking. love you mumma,he said….

She kissed him with shy….


Good one dear. And the start, you did succeeded to keep up the suspense😊...thanks a lot for this one🤗

Uma 😜😜🤗🤗🤗

I too was laughing at the tickets 🤣🤣. Just wrote in a flow imagining Meejay.

Oh you found its not a person 👍🏼

yess Stuart little my favo... Wanted a laugh streak after the trauma so wrote..

You got it bang on yesss Arjun next to Rowdy i just love this little Rowdy 😍. Knows about mumma....

RR haha will find way to warm his birdie... Well you cannot complain Sumi too naive saved your furnitures🤣

Thanks for my Donald... 🤗🤗🤗

Loved that you loved it😉

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